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“Destined To Be” ~ Part 39

Part 39:

Lost in each other’s eyes they stood like that only in the center of the floor as of trying to convey their feelings through their eyes without even caring about the world around them as for them they both are each other’s world. Unconsciously Maan’s one hand cradled Geet’s face before he tucked away the loose strand of her hair beneath her hair caressing the sensitive spot behind her ear in the process making her gasp inaudibly as she clutched his shoulders tight in order to save herself from falling for she could feel her knees turning into jelly just with his look and soft touches. So lost they were in each other’s eyes that none of them realizes the painful look on certain someone’s face who was looking other side in order to hide the pain of his bleeding heart neither they could realize the danger lurking towards them which was nearing them by each passing second.






Loud voices of Omkara and Annie broke their trance thus bringing them back to the real world and Maan looked above only to realize the large chandelier was just an inch away and is about to fall on them and next what everyone witnessed was the loud crashing sound of the chandelier as they close their eyes while blocking it with their hands in order to save themselves from the shattering glasses of the chandelier as it finally fall down with a loud crash.


 “MAAN SIR!!!” It was Adi’s voice that made everyone open their eyes and what they saw was enough to take away their lives as they followed Adi’s gaze who was looking at the sight in front with utmost horror.




“Aaahhh!” She winced in pain as the burning sensation of tincture hits the wound on her skin thus making her cringe a bit but soon relaxed when she felt someone blowing a warm breath on her wound in order to reduce the burning sensation of the tincture unknown of the effect it’s having on the person in subject.


“I am sorry Geet. Zyada dard ho raha hai.” She heard his voice laced with concern and care for her thus making her smile as she shook her head in denial while he resumed his task of  cleaning her wound leaving her to admire lovingly the person sitting in front who is the sole reason of her existence.


She can’t even imagine her life without him. When just the mere thought of something happening to him is enough to take away her life, then she don’t even want to imagine what would have happened if she haven’t pushed him on time and let that chandelier fall on him. Though that’s a different thing that she herself got hurt in the process, but then that doesn’t matter to her either. She can lay her life for him if there comes a time then this injury is nothing for her. That moment when that chandelier was about to fall on him, still gives her goose bumps as she recalled what happened few minutes back in the hall.









Loud voices of Omkara and Annie broke their trance thus bringing them back to the real world and Maan looked above only to realize the large chandelier was just an inch away and is about to fall on them and next what everyone witnessed was the loud crashing sound of the chandelier as they close their eyes while blocking it with their hands in order to save themselves from the shattering glasses of the chandelier as it finally fall down with a loud crash.


 “MAAN SIR!!!” It was Adi’s voice that made everyone open their eyes and what they saw was enough to take away their lives as they followed Adi’s gaze who was looking at the sight in front with utmost horror.


All of them instantly rushed towards the spot only to find Geet and Maan lying a bit away from the place where chandelier has been fallen down with Geet on top of Maan as she covered Maan like a shield whose arms were wrapped around her protectively. It was so sudden that both of them didn’t understand and when they did the chandelier was already just mere inches away from them. Had it not been Annie and Omkara who had shouted at time then probably they both wouldn’t have noticed it either and next moment what Maan had felt was been dragged away and it was when he fell on floor he realized that it was Geet who had dragged him aside and now laying on top of him holding him protectively.


It didn’t came as a surprise to him that she had saved him yet again as whenever he faced any such situation it is her only who saves him like this then be it a day back while facing that gruesome accident or a month back when he was lying on that hospital bed or be it today. It is always either her or her love who brings him back from the clutches of death all safe and sound. They were surely “Destined to Be” like everyone says probably that’s why after everything happened with them they are still together and will always be no matter what, he thought as he wrapped his arms around her petite form protectively as f trying to shield her from every harm that she has taken in her way due to him.


“Geet, Jiju! Are you both fine?” It was Savera’s voice who had broke their trance and they realized that everyone has been gathered around them as they helped pick both of them to pick up from the floor.


“Maan Beta, Geet you both are fine right?” Dadimaa asked yet again once both Maan and Geet get up from the floor with the help of other family members.


“We are fine Dadimaa. Thanks to Geet we both got saved in a nick of time.” Maan assured everyone who were in the state of panic after seeing such a horrible accident.


“Kya hua hai yaha pe? Ye Chandelier kaise gir gaya?” Everyone heard NT’s voice who came to the hall running after listening to the shattering sound.


“Where were you NT? You are with us only right then where had you gone all of a sudden?” Dev questioned back instead of replying as he squinted his gaze at her thus making her nervous.


Wo… I got an important call and since music was going on over here so I went aside to attend it and suddenly I heard a loud sound so I just ended the call and came here.” Nayantara though was nervous with Dev’s questioning gaze in hers but still managed to explain her side of story. Dev though was not convinced as he shared a knowing look with Omkara who gestured him to be quiet right now due to the presence of other family members.


“But how come this chandelier fall down all of a sudden. I mean it was perfect till few minutes back.” Vidyut raised his doubts making others frown.


May be someone purposefully tried to tampered with it.” Dev’s gaze was fixed at NT who was looking everywhere but him.


“Guys! Calm down. It was just an accident. May be the string got loose accidently. Don’t make a mole out of hill. Both me and Geet are fine so just end this discussion.”


“But Bro…”


“Enough Dev. No more discussion on this. I’ll ask servants to see how did the string got loose like this ok.” Maan interrupted Dev in between to which he just nodded his head in positive but made a note of not leaving this matter so easily.


Geet beta, your hand is bleeding.” Dadimaa’s voice diverted everyone’s attention towards Geet only to find wound on Geet’s hand which was bleeding. Guess she got hurt while saving Maan which went unnoticed till now.


“Geet yeh… Tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi abhi tak. Dekho kitna Khoon nikal raha hai. Nakul! Nakul! Bring the First Aid Kit fast.” Maan got panicked seeing his Geet hurt like this while Geet who was till now unaware of her injury looked at him in awe seeing him like this.

“Maan, Aap Geet ko apne Room me le jaiye. Yaha abhi bhi glass pieces pade hue hai. Hum Nakul ko wahi bhejte hai.” Dadimaa suggested and Maan instantly picked Geet in her arms before moving towards their room in spite of Geet continuously saying that she is absolutely fine and can walk on her own but Maan being Maan hear none and gave her a glare which was enough to shut her mouth as she looked sideways pouting which made Maan smile on her antics as they both made their way towards their room leaving all the family members behind smiling except one who was looking sideways in order to hide the pain of his burning heart.

                ~~~~~~~******Back to Present*****~~~~~~~~


Ye kya pagalpan tha Geet? Tumhe itni chot lagi aur tumhe ehsaas tak nahi hua? Thank God it was just a cut and glass pieces had not pierced inside the skin. And also thank Dadimaa who had noticed this wound on your hand otherwise you would have successfully hidden it from all.”Maan’s voice broke her trance and she looked back at him in admiration only to find him bandaging her wound with utmost care as id she is a glass doll who will break with a mere jerk and her lips curved into a bright smile as this thought crossed her mind while looking at him with all the love she had for him.

What? Now why are you smiling like this? Had I cracked some joke over here?” Maan knotted his brows as he raises his head after bandaging her hand to look at her only to find her smiling brightly at him to which she just nodded her head in denial still smiling. This girl is crazy, he thought as he shake his head on her antic before hitting his head with hers playfully


Tum Bilkul Pagal ho Geet. Pata hai na tumhe ye baat. Aur kya zarurat thi tumhe waha wo stunt karne ki? Main sambhal leta na sab kuch. I mean mujhe pata hai you were trying to save both of us but still Agar tumhe zyada chot lag jati to? Agar wo chandelier tumhare upar… Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to? Agar…”


Aur agar apko kuch ho jata to?” Geet’s words stopped Maan’s ranting in mid and he looked at her only to find her looking at him with some emotions which was way too intense to be explained in words and it just left him tongue-tied.


“Geet.” It was all he was able to utter as he looked deep into her hazels which was already looking back at him all lost on him and before he could understand anything he found her keeping her palm on his cheek as she cradled her face from one side while her thumb caressed his stubble filled cheek gently giving him an unknown pleasure.


“Aap soch bhi kaise sakte hain Maan ki aap ko khatre me dekh ke main chup chap khadi rahoongi. Kaise soch sakte hai Maan ke upar koi musibat aaye aur ye Geet apne bare me soch ke khud ko bacha le. Kaise soch sakte hai aap ki aap ko kuch ho jaye aur main uske baad khushi se reh paungi. Mere hote hue main apko kisi bhi musibat me nahi padne doongi Maan. Kisi bhi khatre ko Aap tak pahuchne se pehle mujh se ho kar guzarna padega. Yamraj bhi saamne kyun na ho aap ko chhoone se pehle usse Geet naam ki deewar ko paar  karna hoga. Mere jeete ji main aap par kabhi koi aanch bhi nahi aane doongi aur agar iske liye mujhe apni jaan bhi deni pade to main wo bhi kar jaungi par aap ko kuch nahi hone doongi. Main mar jaungi lekin aap ko kuch…” She couldn’t complete her sentence as she felt her lips sealing with of Maan’s as he chewed the words that she was about to utter.

Geet closed her eyes when she felt his lips moving over hers but for a change she felt a certain urgency in that kiss which was never there before. A certain kind of aggression and complaint whch she never experienced before. It was as if he was trying to make himself believe of something unknown of the fact that it is the impact of her words that had brought fear inside his heart; Fear of losing her, fear of his life without her. He don’t need that life where she is not with him and as this thought crossed his mind he increased the pressure as he bites her lips harshly thus making her gasp and giving her the entry into the sweet nectar of her mouth.


It would be wrong to say that Geet didn’t understand what is going though him as she knows each and every breath of his and hence she knows what feeling he is going through now with the intensity of his kiss and hence she caressed his back while kissing him back thus making his tense muscles flex in response while he continued kissing her. No sooner it was when she felt his heart and mind relaxing owing to the soothing touch of hers which was taking away all his fears and insecurities and as a result his kiss turned soft and full of love as he sucked her petals gently while his tongue played with hers, as they danced on their own rhythms.


They broke apart for a second to catch their breath when Maan once again captured her lips onto a soul-searing kiss pouring out all his love and care for her while she too responded back with same fervor as she caressed his rough cheek in order to take away all the remaining fear and insecurity from him. They kissed each other for what seem to be like eternity when he felt her gasping for air and he gently broke apart after giving a one last peck on her rosy lips before resting his forehead on hers panting heavily in order to catch his breath.


 “Aaj Keh diya, Aaj ke baad dobara kabhi ye mat kehna Geet warna pata nahi main kya kar jaunga. Tumhe andaza bhi nahi hai ki tum kya mayne rakhti ho mere liye. Main tumhe nahi kho sakta Geet kisi bhi keemat pe nahi. I won’t let anything happen to you ever because I just can’t afford to lose you. Never ever.”  His words came out as a mere whisper as he hugged her tight keeping his head on top of hers and Geet just hugged him back with a smile on her face.


“I won’t let anything happen to you ever Maan. No matter what I have to do for that.” Her words though were just a whisper but loud enough for Maan to hear and as a result he hugged her tighter if possible as if someone will take her away from him if he will loosen his hold on her.




“Mere jeete ji main aap par kabhi koi aanch bhi nahi aane doongi aur agar iske liye agar mujhe apni jaan bhi deni pade to main wo bhi kar jaungi par aap ko kuch nahi hone doongi.”


“I won’t let anything happen to you ever Maan. No matter what I have to do for that.”


Her words from that day echoed in his memory as he looked at the lifeless body of his life, his love, his Geet in his arms drenched in her own blood, the person who loved him beyond the level of insanity. He hugged her tight as a heart wrenching cry erupted his throat when he realized that she has indeed proven her words right with her act. The death which was meant for him she has taken that on herself but as she promised she didn’t let anything happen to him. His shoulders shook in an uncontrollable cry as he hugged her tighter as if trying to transfer his life into her if possible.


Heavens pour out for him as if they too were crying for his loss while he just sat over there hugging her tighter. Why? Why did she loved him so much that she didn’t cared about her own life? Why did she loved him this much that she had embraced the death which was actually coming for him but as she promised she stood in front of him like a shield while he could do nothing, nothing at all. Why he is the always the one to be the unlucky one in love; First Sameera and now Geet. He wasn’t able to save Sameera and he wasn’t able to save Geet either from the clutches of his cruel fate. Then why the hell is he still alive if he is cursed to lose the persons he loves the most, he thought as million cries shook his entire self while he sat there drenching in rain still holding her lifeless body in his arms.


Ek Pal ki Zindagi de di


Ek Dil ki Duniya


Bas Itni Mohabbat hai


“GEET!!!!!!”A loud howl escaped his lips before breaking into numerous as her words from her diary echoed in his brain making him realize the extent of his love for her which probably will not be there anymore for him to experience.




About a week back:


“Now do you still need any proof Omkara? Now still you will say that it’s just my imagination and nothing else. After seeing all the proofs and especially witnessing today’s accident you still feel that my doubt is wrong.” Dev throwed his hands in air in frustration as he looked at Omkara who was sitting calmly in study sipping his coffee thinking something deeply.


“Now why are you thinking so much Omkara? I am telling you that my doubt is correct. It’s high time to bring the culprit n front of everyone.” Dev knotted his brows at Omkara who was still sitting as calmly as sea thus increasing Dev’s confusion.


“Relax Dev! You know during our training what we were taught; that often what we see is not true. Truth is hidden under wraps of lie and we need to read between the lines to find that truth. And here in this case, I need to do the same.” Omkara gets up from his sitting position as he goes near Dev before putting his hand on his shoulders.


I can’t believe this Om. Even after witnessing everything…


“After witnessing everything only I am saying this.” Omkara interrupted Dev in between who was looking at him as if he had grown two heads.


“Look! I know it’s really hard for you to understand it but try to understand what I am saying. I agree that today’s incident was nowhere an accident but a planned act and I also know that the person is very close and in fact someone from the family only but that doesn’t mean that the person is the one you are doubting or should I say of you are being confirmed. Dev, this is my forte and hence I can judge the criminals better than you all.” Omkara put forward his point but Dev was still not convinced fully.


“I know it’s difficult for you to believe me okay let’s do one thing, Give me just 12 Hours to analyze everything and I promise that if your doubt is correct then I myself will bring the culprit on front of the whole family. Just 12 Hours is all I ask.” Dev nodded in agreement as somewhere he is getting convinced about what Omkara is saying before they both discussed on some points regarding Maan’s case.




He looked at the delicate design of the anklet in his hand which Adi has just given to him after he picked it up from the jewelry shop on Maan’s behalf since Maan was not allowed to go out of the house. His finger ran on its delicate design before he turned it back and stared at their names being carved together: “Maan ki Geet”. An instant smile crept on his M-shaped lips as he caressed the phrase with his long fingers while he gaze their names written together lovingly. It sounds so perfect as if it was meant to be like this only.


“Main intezar nahi kar sakta us pal ka Geet jab main is Payal se tumhe humesha-humesha ke liye apne Pyar ki dor me baandh loonga. 3 din baad jab main tumse apni dil ki baat keh ke tumhe ye payal apne haatho se pehnaunga to tum humesha ki tarah sharmaogi aur sharmate hue tum aur bhi zyada khoobsurat lagogi.” His lips curved into a shy smile as he imagined her reaction hen he’ll make her wear this anklet from his own hands.


The way her toes will curl in pleasute when he’ll kiss those soft delicate ankles of her after making her wear these anklets, the way she’ll blush, the way she’ll look into his eyes with her love filled gaze when he’ll confess his love for her and the way she’ll absorb herself in his arms when he’ll make her his in all senses; just by imagining these things has filled up her heart with so much joy and pleasure that he don’t understand how is he going to control himself for 3 days when here he is all aroused just by thinking of her.


A side of him just wanted to forget all his plans and confess to her right now in order to love and devour her endlessly but another logical side of him chided him for being so desperate. After all it is his Geet he was talking about and he has to do everything special for the girl who had filled his life with love and happiness. It will be her special day and he’ll make it more special by giving her this happiness because at the end of the day she deserves it. She had waited enough, they have waited enough and now it’s time for both of them to end all their waits and become one for forever, he thought as he kissed that anklet where her name is written lingering his lips on it for a longer time before shaking his head on his own act.


“What have you done to me Geet? You had changed me so much that now it is impossible for me to think a life without you. Yeh faasle bas kuch hi palon ke hai Geet, 3 din baad humare beech me koi dooriyan koi faasle nahi rahenge. Because after 3 days we’ll become husband and wife in all senses. I’ll make you mine with all my love and desire for you. Just 3 more days Geet and then there will be love and only love between us. I love you Geet. I Love you so much.” He whispered as ehe looked at Geet’s photo after picking it up from the side table before kissing those luscious lips in her photo imagining her to be in real, which in turn made him blush as he hits his head playfully before keeping the photo down and moving towards the cupboard to keep the Anklet and Ring safely into the drawer, waiting eagerly for the day when he’ll make her wear these 2.




Savitri Devi was pacing in her room lost in her thoughts. It seems that events happening from the past few days had affected her too, though that’s a different thing that she has kept her worries to her own self. But whatever is happening from past few days and especially in past two days has really forced her to think in that direction. People says that when continuously bad things happen in our life then automatically our thoughts started wandering in negative directions, same is the case with Savitri Devi. Whatever is happening from past few days has gave her a nagging feeling of something not right. She don’t want to believe in such things but still her instincts were saying that a very big storm is making its way towards their lives which will only bring destruction and unhappiness in their lives and this she can’t let happen.


“Dadimaa, is everything okay? You seem to be worried?” Savitri Devi’s trance was broken hearing Dev’s voice who has came to talk something important to her but seeing her so disturbed got worried.


“Yes Dev, I am fine. It’s just that whatever is happening from past few days is just making me worried. I mean first Maan’s accident at Noida site and then his accident last day and today’s incident. If Geet wouldn’t have been there then I don’t even want to think what would have happened and Geet herself has got injured. Aisa lag raha hai jaise ki Humare baccho ko kisi ki buri nazar lag gayi hai.” Savitri Devi let out a deep breath as she sat down on the bed worried while Dev who very well knows the reason behind these accidents remained quiet as he knows that it is not good for Dadimaa’s health moreover Omkara too had asked for 12 hours so he decided to wait instead of reveling everything to Savitri Devi, he thought as he sat beside Savitri Devi holding her hand.

Dadimaa, relax. Stop worrying so much. Everything is going to be fine. And these are just mere accidents and most importantly Bro and Geet are absolutely fine so don’t think too much ok or else you’ll get ill.”Savitri Devi just nodded her head in understanding when something strikes her mind.


“Dev, Hum Humare Guruji ke waha jaana jaate hai. Tell Driver to get the car ready.” Dev was shocked to hear Dadimaa. Though he knows that her life is not at risk yet given the circumstances he don’t want to take any chances.

Dadimaa, Aise achanak. I mean Aap ki Tabiyat bhi kharaab hai, Aap baad me chale jana.” He tried to reason with her though that’s a different thing that his reason was nowhere satisfying enough.


“Hum Bilkul Theek hai Dev. Aur Hum isi waqt Guruji ke paas jana chahte hai. Pata nahi kyun par humara Mann bahut Ghabra raha hai. Hum nahi chahte ki humare baccho pe koi musibat aaye. Hum ek baar ja kar unse mil aaye to humein Tasalli ho jayegi.” Savitri Devi was as stubborn as her grandsons but still Dev don’t want to risk her safety with so much danger lurking around.


“Wo sab Theek hai Dadimaa par aap janti hai na ki Bro in sab cheezon pe vishwas nahi karte. Sameera Bhabhi ki death ke baad se unka vishwas Bhagwan pe ya Bhagwan se related kisi bhi cheez pe khatam ho gaya hai. Wo Taveez jo Geet le kar aayi thi Dargah se use bhi unhone bas Geet ki khushi ke liye pehna hua hai warna vishwas to unhe us par bhi nahi hai. Agar Bro ko pata chala ki Aap unke liye Guruji ke paas gayi hai wo bhi un Guruji ke paas jinhone ye kaha tha ki Bro aur Sameera Bhabhi ka saath Saat Janmon ka hai, ki un dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta and they are match made in heaven, Dadimaa Bro Bahut naraz ho jayenge.” Dev tried to make her understand but it all went in vain as Savitri Devi was nowhere to listen.


“Aap bhool rahe hai Dev ki usi Taveez ki wajah se Maan Do baar marte marte bache hai Aur waise bhi Hum wo sab kuch nahi jaante. Hum abhi Guruji ke paas ja rahe hai matlab ja rahe hai. Aap Driver se boliye Gaadi nikalne ko. Aur waise bhi kuch baatein hai jinse ab tak sab anjaan hai.” Savitri Devi though has said the last line to herself but Dev’s ears were sharp enough to hear that line but before he could ask anything Savitri Devi moved out of the room leaving Dev behind confused.


Dadimaa is hiding something, but what?” He thought as he looked at the retreating figure of Savitri Devi before he moved out to call the driver and doing necessary arrangements for her safety.




“Tumhe Ek baar ki baat samajh nahi Aati? Kitni baar kaha hai ki humein yun Baar baar phone mat kiya karo.” NT gritted her teeth as she talk over the phone only to hear a laughter from other side.


“NT Madam what to do? I was missing you so much. You know na how much I Love you.” NT fumed in anger seeing the audacity of the person who is just her mere pawn.


“Bakwaas band karo apni aur yeh batao Ab kyu phone kiya tumne?” And once again she heard his laughter thus adding fuel to her anger.


“Wahi Purani kahaani NT Madam. I need money. Wo kya hai na ki Police se bhagte bhagte mera sara paisa kharch ho jata hai to badi problem ho hai uske baad aur musibat me to apne hi yaad aate hai, hai na NT Madam.” He chuckled on the phone while NT just clenched her fist in anger.


Ek Phooti kaudi nahi denge ab hum tumhe. Pehle hi bahut paise le chuke ho tum wo bhi aise kaam ke jo tumse theek tarah hua hi nahi. Ab tumhe ek paisa nahi milega.” Her voice was menacing while her eyes were red in anger as she spoke over the phone.


Tch.. Fir wahi baat NT Madam. Aap baar baar mujhe ek hi kaam karne pe majboor kyun karti hai. Chakiye ab agar aap yahi chahti hai to yahi sahi. Ab Aap mujhe Paise nahi de rahi hai to main Dev Sahab se le loonga. I am sure wo mujhe mana nahi karenge. Aakhir bahut bada dil hai unka.” Her anger reached another level when she realized that he is yet again blackmailing her by Dev’s name and all she wanted at that moment to kill this person with her bare hands as she throwed the vase she was holding on the floor.


“Ruko, Tum Dev se kuch nahi kahoge. Theek hai hum aaj raat hi tumhara full and final settlement kar denge uske baad tum dobara kabhi Humein pareshan nahi karoge samjhe tum.” The person on the other side grinned as he finally saw his demands getting met.


“Pakka, Aai shapath mera matlab hai wo kya bolte hai aap log angrezi me.. haan,, Mother Promise iske baad apko koi pareshani nahi hogi.” NT Smirked listening to his statement telling him that she will message him the address of the place where they will meet.


Aaj Raat ke baad tum humein to kya kisi ko bhi pareshan nahi kar payoge kyunki aaj raat ke baad tum zinda hi nahi bachoge. Bahut badi galti kari humne jo tumhe ab tak zinda rakha aur use bhi badi galti ki tumne humein blackmail kar ke. To Abu ski saza to tumhein milegi hi. Tumhari maut ke saath ye raaz bhi wahi dafan ho jayega, humesha ke liye.” NT laughed hysterically as she caressed her pistol before messaging the person the address of the place.




The calm and serene atmosphere of the Aashram gave a soothing effect to Dadimaa’s restless heart up to great extent yet that nagging feeling was still there and she knows that unless she will meet with Guruji this restlessness will be there. She greeted the disciples of Guruji on the way before going towards the room where he is meditating. She took a deep breath before sitting in front of him while he was still in his meditation. He is not any ordinary Guruji nor having beard or wearing orange clothes like people usually assume him to be in fact he is a great scholar and had even given lectures in abroad on divinity and spirituality. Savitri Devi has great respect for him as has a great knowledge and he never predict anything wrong. No matter what Maan says or think about him, she still believes him and for that belief only she is here today.


“Aao Savitri. Mujhe pata tha tum Aaogi. Dadimaa was surprised to see him recognizing her presence even when his eyes were closed but then she smiled when she realized that his meditation power is strong enough to recognize her. She greeted him once he opened his eyes after his meditation to which he just nodded smilingly.


“Kuch uljhan me lag rahi ho Savitri. Kya Baat hai?” Savitri Devi face fell off when she heard him asking this question after they finished with exchanging pleasantries.


“You know everything Guruji (And she told every happening in Maan and Geet’s life till today’s morning incident). And not only Maan, Geet too have been in danger many times while saving Maan. Aisa lagta hai jaise Humare baccho ko buri nazar lag gayi hai kisi ki. Pehle hi in dono ne apne rishte me kayi pareshaniya jheli hai. Aap to jante hai na ki Maan aur Geet ki shaadi kin haalaton me hui thi. Uski wajah se kafi samay tak dono me dooriyan rahi hai aur ab jab sab cheezein theek ho rahi hai, humare baccho ki zindagi me khushiyan aa rahi hai to ye sare haadse. Humara mann bahut ghabra raha hai Guruji. Aisa lag raha hai jaise koi bahut bada toofan aane wala hai Humare baccho ki zindagi me. Hum un dono ko toota hua nahi dekh sakte. Please give me some solution. Hum kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hain lekin Hume apne ghar aur apne baccho ki zindagi me khushiyan aur sukoon chahiye.” Dadimaa’s voice turned helpless in the end as she forwarded Maan’s and Geet’s Kundli towards Guruji who took it smilingly before going through it and dong some calculations in his fingers after which he remained pause for a long time.


Kya hua Guruji. Aap Chup kyun hai. Koi sankat hai kya humare bacchon par. Agar aisa hai to hum kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hai, koi bhi upay, koi bhi Pooja. Bas humare bacchon pe koi musibat nahi aani chahiye”Dadimaa who was worried seeing Guruji’s expression asked in desperation.


“Tum Niyati (Destiny) se lad nahi sakti Savitri. Koi bhi nahi lad sakta. Tumhari Bahu Sameera ne koshish ki thi Kismat se ladne ki aur Anjaam tum janti hi ho. Unki kismet me jo likha hai wo ho kar rahega aur use koi nahi badal sakta. Aur jaisa main dekh pa raha hoon to unki kismet ek naya mod lene wali hai.” Guruji’s words confused Dadimaa further as she couldn’t understand the meaning behind his words.


“Aap kya kehna chahte hai Guruji. Humare Bacchon ki zindagi me koi musibat aane wali hai?”


“Musibat aa chuki hai Savitri. Ateet ka koi Panna fir se palat ke aaya hai in dono ki zindagi me. In dono ki zindagi bahut bade toofan se guzarne wali hai. Aane wale 10 din bahut bhaari hai in dono ke liye aur inke rishtey ke liye bhi. Kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Ek zindagi bhi ja sakti hai is toofan me par wo zindagi kiski hogi ye main nahi keh sakta. Waqt aane pe sabko khud hi pata chal jayega.” Guruji’s words scared Savitri Devi as she looked at him in horror.


“Ye Aap kya keh rahe hai Guruji? Humare Baccho ki zindagi me sankat? Kisi ki zindagi ja sakti hai? Hum humare bacchon ko kisi takleef me nahi dekh sakte. Koi to Upay (Solution) hoga na iska. Kuch to aisa hoga jisse Hum humare Bacchon ko is musibat se bacha sake. Koi Pooja, ya kuch bhi.” Savitri Devi asked in desperation while Guruji just smiled.


Un dono ka saath hi un dono ka Raksha Kawach (Safety Guard) hai Savitri. Jab tak wo dono saath hai koi bhi taakat unhe alag nahi kar sakti. Geet ke hote hue na Maan pe koi musibat aa sakti hai aur na hi Maan ke hote hue Geet ko kuch ho sakta hai. Par haan un dono ke liye aur unke rishtey ke liye ye Pariksha ki ghadi hai. Bahut utar Chadhav aayenge unki zindagi me in 10 dino me. Agar wo dono is toofan ko jhel  gaye to fir kabhi koi taakat unhe nuksan nahi pahucha sakti aur agar nahi jhel paye to…” Guruji Left her sentence in the end incomplete but Savitri Devi was intelligent enough to know what he meant to say.


Tum Chinta mat karo Savitri aur Bhagwan pe bharosa rakho. Mujhe Vishwas hai ki ye dono poori himmat ke sath is toofan ka saamna karenge. Inka rishta hi in dono ki raksha karega. Maa Durga sab theek karengi.” Savitri Devi just noddd her head slowly while her mind was stil lingering on one sentence. “A Life will go away?” But the main question is “Whose?”“Geet’s or “Maan’s” or “someone else’.”




NT reached at the scheduled time on the address where she and that person has decided to meet. She parked her car at a distance before getting down and checking her pistol in the purse. Once sure everything is in its place she moved towards the place where that man was waiting for her with a evil plan in her mind. All she had in her mind at that time was to finish this chapter once and for all and with this determination she moved near the person after she spotted him standing at a distance.


“So you are here? Himmat kaise hui tumhari, humein, Nayantara Khurana ko blackmail karne ki.She spoke in anger looking at him who was still standing with his back towards her in the dark.


“Tumhe kya laga ki hum darr gaye hai tumse aur tumhari dhamkiyon se isliye yaha aaye hai? Nahi, hum tumhe yaha tumhari aukat dikhane aaye hai. Bahut badi galti kar di hai tumne humein blackmail kar ke aur ab tum apni usi galti ki saza bhugtoge.” She pointed her pistol towards him only to find him flinching a bit which made her smirk seeing him in fear.


Kya hua? Darr gaye? Kash ye darr tumhe Humein blackmail karne se pehle lagta. Par Afsos it’s too late now. Galti ki hai to saza to milegi hi na. Marne se pehle koi Aakhri khwaish ho to bata do. Wo kya hai na ki Nayantara Khurana ka Dil bahut bada hai. Tumhari Aakhri Khwaish zaroor poori karegi.” She still didn’t get any response from him but this time finds his body shaking in fearthus making her smirk her wider.


“Chalo Tum mat batao hum hi tumhe apni Aakhri Khwaish bata dete hai. Hum tumhe Maarte waqt tumhari aankhon me Apne liye Darr dekhna chahte hai taki tum kisi bhi jaman me humein Blackmail karne ki koshish na karo. So turn and face your death like a brave. Aur waise bhi Nayantara ko Peeche se vaar karna acha nahi lagta. TURN AROUND!!!” She shouted last line in anger while her eyes were reflecting pure rage and next moment she found him turning so that his face was facing hers and her eyes went wide in shock and horror as she came face to face with the person she was least expecting at this hour.


“Dev? Aap?” She whispered in horror as moon light fell on Dev thus reveling his face to her but what scared her more was the expression of hatred and anger on his face thus making her realize that her doom is finally here and next moment she found herself surrounded by Omkara and his men who were pointing their guns at her.


Drop your weapon NT. You are trapped now.” Omkara commanded as he pointed his Gun towards her head thus making NT to lose her hold on her pistol.


Dev… Aap yahan… Kaise… Mera matlab… wo Aadmi. Wo phone Aap ne kiya tha?” Probably for the first time Dev has seen fear on NT’s face and it made him both happy and sad at the same time; Happy because he was able to caught her red-handed and sad because somewhere he wanted himself to be proved wrong.


“Kyun? Hairan ho mujhe dekh kar NT? Oh haan tum to yaha us Aadmi ko expect kar rahi thi jo tumhare har jurm ka saathi hai? Jiske saath mil kar tumne Baar baar mere Bro ki jaan lene ki koshish kari. Kyun kiya tumne aisa NT? KYUN???” He shouted in anger thus making NT jump in fear with his demeanor.


Ye Aap kya Keh rahe hai Dev? Maan Veerji ki Jaan? Humne? Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai.” NT was confused with the allegations Dev was putting on her thus adding fuel to Dev’s fear.


“Jhoot mat bolo. Aur kitna Jhoot bologi Nayantara. Mujhe pata hai tum mere parivar ko pasand nahi karti. Bro aur Geet se nafrat karti ho par main nahi jaanta tha ki tumhari ye nafrat itni badi hai kit um mere Bhai ki jaan lene par aa jaogi. Kya bigada tha meri family ne tumhara? Kya bigada tha Bro aur Geet ne tumhara NT? Kya kami rakhi gayi hai tumhare liye NT ki tum is giri hui harkat pe utar aayi. Mujhe is baat pe bhi sharam aa rahi hai ki maine tumse pyaar kiya, ki tum meri wife ho.” Dev’s words were confusing her as well as piervcing her heart as no matter how much bad she is yet she had always loved Dev.


“Dev Humara yakeen kijiye. Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai. Hum maante hai aap jo kuch bhi keh rahe hai wo sach hai. Hum maante hai ki hum Maan Veerji aur Geet ko pasand nahi karte par uske liye hum Maan Veerji ki jaan nahi le sakte, Maan Veerji to kya hum kisi ki bhi jaan nahi le sakte. Humara Vishwas kijiye.” She literally pleaded while her eyes clouded in tears and for once Dev wanted to believe her but then reminded of her betrayal he thought otherwise.


“Vishwas karu? Us insan ka vishwas karu jisne humesha meri family ka bura hi socha hai? Aur kya kaha tumne, ki tumne ye sab kuch nahi kiya. To fir tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Kyun aayi thi us insan se milne jo tumhe blackmail kar raha tha itne dino se. Jise tum baar baar paise deti thi mere bro pe attack karane ke liye. Batao NT, kya main Jhoot bol raha hoon?” NT shaked her head in denial not knowing how to defend herself.


“To tumhare according main galat hoon? Tumne Noida wali site pe Bro pe attack nahi karwaya, Tumne hospital me Ventilator ka plug nahi nikalwaya aur na hi tumne Bro ko expired medicines dene ki koshish kari, Tumne kal Bro ka wo gruesome accident na hi karwaya aur na hi aaj chandelier girane me tumhara koi haath tha. Yahi kehna chahti ho tum. Hai na?” Nt nodded her head in acceptance making Dev angrier.


“Fir Jhoot. Jhoot pe jhoot bolti ja rahi ho tum? Maine khud suna hai tumhe us Aadmi se baat karte hue phone pe jab wo tumhe blackmail kar raha tha paiso ke liye. Tumhare Accounts check kiye hai jaha har baar transaction usi din kea as paas hua hai jab Bro pe attack hota tha aur haan maine khud tumhari call records bhi ckeck ki hai jaha Attack ke samay tum us aadmi se baat karti thi. Aur Aaj subah Chandelier girne se kuch minute pehle hi tum waha se chali gayi thi. Kya itne Proofs kaafi nahi hai NT ye saabit karne ke liye ki culprit koi aur nahi balki tum hi ho.” NT was shocked listening to Dev’s words. She never thought that Dev will dug so deeper into her secrets.


“Dev, hum jaante hai ki is waqt hum jo bhi kahenge aap ko wo jhoot hi lagega par hum sach keh rahe hai ki humne Maan Veerji ki jaan lene ki koshish kabhi bhi nahi ki. Hum maante hai ki humne is Aadmi ko paise diye hai aur ye humein blackmail kar raha tha par humne ise paise Maan Veerji pe attack karne ke liye nahi diye the. Ye aap ki Noida wali site ka Union Leader tha aur un dino hum Maan Veerji ke against the kyunki unhone Geet ki wajah se humein Dhamki di thi aur humein isi baat ka gussa tha. To humne socha ki kyun na hum kuch aisa karein jisse Maan Singh Khurana ki reputation pe chot pahuche. Aur bas isiliye humne Noida construction site pe wo problems karayi and I had made sure that Media covers that. Bas Dev humne bas itna hi kiya hai. Iske alawa humne aur kuch nahi kiya.” Nt tried her best to clear the misunderstanding that Dev was having but he was no where to belive her.


“Acha, To fir tum us Aadmi ki blackmailing se itna darr kyu gayi thi? Kyun baar baar use paise deti thi aur wo phone calls.” Dev probed further while NT just don’t know how to explain herself.


“Kyunki Maan Veerji ke accident ke baad hum darr gaye the. Humein laga ki us blast ka ilzaam bhi hum par hi aa jayega aur wo Union leader humein baar baar darata tha ki wo Apko sab bata dega Noida site ke bare me aur humein laga ki aap Noida site me hue blast ka bhi doshi bhi humein hi manenge isiliye hum uski demands poori karte rahe. Aur Aaj bhi subah usi ka call aaya tha jab wo chandelier gira. Ye sirf co-incidence hai ki us Aadmi ka call tabhi aata tha jab Maan Veerji pe attack hota tha. Dev humara vishwas kijiye humne Maan Veerji pe attack nahi karwaye. Humne unki jaan lene ki koshish nahi ki. Haan Aaj hum us Aadmi ki jaan lene zaroor aaye the kyunki hum thak gaye the uski blackmailing se par humne kisi aur ki jaan lene ki koshish kabhi bhi nahi ki.” NT cleared all the air between them while Dev was still far from believing her any word.


“You know what NT, story achi hai. But unfortunately mujhe pasand nahi aayi. I am sure you’ll think of a better story when you’ll rot in jail. Omkara, Take her away and throw her into the jail. I don’t even want to see her face ever in my life.” Dev commanded Omkara who just nodded in acceptance before signaling a lady constable to handcuff her.


Leave me. Dev, Dev please believe me. Hum sach keh rahe hai. Humne Kuch bhi nahi kiya hai. Humne Maan Veerji ki jaan lene ki koshish nahi ki. Please believe me.” NT tried to jerk of her hand as the lady constable handcuffs her but her words fell on the deaf ears as Dev was nowhere budging from his decision. Just then he felt his mobile ringing and he took it out from his pocket only to find Adi’s name flashing on it. He instantly picked up the call without realizing that it has been on he speaker mode.


Dev Sir, Where are you? Please come to the mansion fast.” Dev heard Adi’s panicked voice from other side making his brows knit in confusion.


Adi, I am with Omkara. You remember our plan right? So I am executing it in the final stage only. But why are you sounding so tensed.” Dev asked and Omkara who was about to take NT towards jeep stopped listebing to their conversation.


“Sir, Aap aur Omkara Sir Please jald se jald KM aa jayiye. Maan Sir pe fir se ek attack hua hai. Yaha sab ghabraye hue hai. Please come to KM as soon as possible.” Dev’s eyes widen in shock listening to the piece of information by Adi while he looked at Nayantara in surprise.


“Dekha Dev Aapne. Hum to yaha Aap ke saamne khade hue hai. To fir waha Maan Veerji pe kisne attack kiya?” NT’s words made Dev tongue tied as he looked at Nt and then at Omkara who was as shocked as him not understanding the sudden turn of events.

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They were 5 friends- Yash, Vicky, Ved, Salil nd Maan!  For the world they were just 5 individuals who are friends but for them they were 5 fingers of a hand which were inseparable and can join together to become a fist to fight against any odd circumstances. “Panch Shakti”that’s the name given to their group by their favorite professor and Principal Mr. Singh who considers them as a five elements of nature i.e. Water, Air, Soil, Sky and Fire. And it was indeed correct as like the nature is incomplete without any one of its element in the same way they are incomplete without each other. Well we are not here to discuss about their friendship or to know about their Friendship tales. We are here to know about the love story of that one person who is the muse of this story and around whom this story revolves. Maan, Maan Singh Khurana! That’s his name.


Amongst all the 5 friends Maan was the only one who comes from the poor background and a small town name Hoshiarpur. His father was a small grade clerk in Ved’s father office who was a collector of the town. His income was really low with which he use to somehow take care of his small family that includes him, his wife and his only son Maan yet his dream was big and that dream was to see Maan being an IAS officer. His relatives use to laugh at him, mock him by saying that he’s dreaming too big but Mr. Khurana had full faith on his son and he knows that his son will definitely make him proud one day hence he use to work hard day and night to give his son proper education.


Maan as per his name was really the pride of his parents. He had never given any chance to let down his parents. Since childhood he had only one goal and that was to fulfill the dream that his father has seen for him. He was excel in all fields since childhood be it sports or studies or any other activities and that’s the reason he had completed his basic studies through scholarship. It was a big day both for him and his father when Maan got admission in one of the best college in Delhi for his higher studies. Due to his excellent records his fees was also minimal but living in a big city like Delhi was not a joke especially for a person like Maan who was not born with a silver spoon in his mouth and has gone through many hardships, many taunts to reach at this stage.


For a moment Maan was hesitant to pursue his higher education from Delhi knowing their financial condition and it was then Ved nd his father came as a guiding light and after much persuasion they finally make him agree to go to Delhi saying that Mr. Khurana had already maintained some funds for his higher education and hence he don’t have to worry. Ved was already in Delhi after his father had got promotion and co-incidentally got admission in the same college as Maan’s hence Mr. Khurana had no worry regarding Maan being alone in the big city like Delhi for he knows that being studying together for most of the years together Maan and Ved were more like Brothers. Ved’s father has seen the spark in Maan’s eyes, A Passion, A Fire to become something in life hence he don’t want any kind of hurdle in his way therefore he himself has arranged for the best hostel for Maan, owned by his brother where his nephew and Ved were also accommodated nd that’s how Maan met Salil, Ved’s cousin along with Yash and Vicky who were Salil’s childhood friends and now all 5 of them are Bestest friends along with being roomies and classmates.


It didn’t took Maan long to adjust with Delhi life and he was actually enjoying it but still he didn’t forget for what he is here. As the time passes Maan made a mark in his college to with his excellence, intelligence and breathtaking looks and he became favorite of all the professors especially of Mr. Singh and a heartthrob among girls but he never paid any attention to anyone of them because his one and only goal is to fulfill his Father’s dream and he don’t want any distraction in that. if any girl use to propose him for friendship or relationship by being over smart or shy then he just use to smile and very calmly refuse to them making sure not to hurt their feelings saying that he respects their feelings and will always be there if they need his genuine help but apart from that he can’t do any commitment as he had already committed to his dreams. At times his friends use to tease him also calling him Gay’ but he never took it on heart because he knows that his destination is far different from all this and he just can’t get distracted in any way. And with this high spirit he had not only successfully completed his first two year in the college but also has topped in the whole college getting a subject of praises and appreciation from everyone and at that very moment Maan visualized his destination loud and clear without any hurdle.


It was one fine day when all the seniors were enjoying ragging the juniors after the college reopened after vacations but Maan even after being a senior also was sitting aside in cafeteria with his group. He never believed in this ragging thing for he knows how these seniors use to humiliate you in the name of ragging and he definitely don’t want to be a part of it hence he was just enjoying his time with his friends while all are busy in the ragging fiasco. It was just Salil who was over excited to witness this Ragging scenes or in other words to woo any junior girl by saving her from being ragged becoming her knight in shining armor hence he heads towards the crowd on the pretext of going to library to get some random book issued while the remaining 4 of them just shakes their heads on his useless excuse knowing very well which book he has to get issued and continued with their conversation.


At the same time a black SUV stopped in the college premises drawing everyone’s attention including the seniors who looked at that black SUV curiously. Not that it was a first time when any expensive car was stopped in the college premises but what caught their attention was the sight of 4 girls getting down from the car. All were beautiful in their own way especially the one who got down from the driver’s seat wearing a skinny jeans and halter neck top with attitude and self-confidence oozing out from her personality as she moved inside the college with her friends while rotating the key ring on her index finger. Her milky white skin exposing from top make every guy crazy as she walked pass them swaying away her long hairs. Her pear shaped face was complimented perfectly with her deep big hazels, soft chubby cheeks, cute button nose, full luscious lips as delicate as rose petals and soft flawless skin reflecting her innocence. She looked at her side and smirked as she found almost all the boys ogling at her curvaceous figure, something of which she’s use to now and that’s what make her proud of herself as she made her way through the corridors with her friends.


“Wow! 4 freshers nd that too girls. It’s going to be fun.” Rahul, one of the senior spoke over smartly as he eyed them especially that particular girl who had drawn everyone’s attention.


“Geet, I am scared” Kakul, one of the amongst 4 gals spoke with nervousness while all the other rolled their eyes listening to the same sentence umpteenth time.


“Uffo Kakul! Why are you so scared? Geet had said Na that nothing is gonna happen so now stop being a nervous wreck. Look at Geet, how confidently she’s walking.” Meera, another girl said making Kakul pout and Geet smile while shaking her head.


“I don’t understand why are you guys are making such an issue of this ragging thing. I mean it’s so much fun being ragged especially by any handsome guy.” Pari, the fourth one said dreamily making Kakul to whack her arm hard to bring her out from her dreamland as all of them headed towards the office to get their schedule while conversing with each other.


“Excuse me, you freshers come here.” Rahul called out as he saw four of them walking pass him and others making all of them to halt in their steps.


Geet turned around swiftly waving back her soft silky hairs with a jerk in the process and walked confidently towards Rahul and his group followed by her friends. And it was then when Maan saw her first glimpse making him to forget even a blink for a while. He has been literally dragged by Salil towards the main hall area to witness the new sight of the college that was creating a buzz in whole college followed by his friends.


“Don’t you gals have manners about how to greet your seniors instead of walking past them” Rahul spoke making a hard face in order to scare them but he didn’t knew that it was Geet Handa, he’s been dealing with who can turn down any situation.


“Now what are you looking behind me? No one is going to help you baby.” Rahul said as he furrowed his brows when he saw Geet searching something behind him.


Searching for some sort of Long tail at your back that could differentiate you from being human nd called out your title of “senior” loud nd clear. You know like Langoors are differentiated from Monkeys.” Every single student in the hall burst out in the laughter as they heard Geet’s words including Maan who just looked other side smiling. Well it was much needed for the dumb headed person like Rahul who was standing all embarrassed due to Geet’s remark, Maan thought as he looked forward to witness the whole scene.


“And as for your second remark then let me tell you that Geet Handa is not a damsel in distress that she needs some knight in shining armor to save her. I am capable enough of taking care of myself.” Geet said as she looked directly into Rahul’s eyes with her each nd every word oozing her confidence.


“Don’t you have manners of how to talk to your seniors?” One of the girls from Rahul’s gang spoke with an attitude making Geet to smirk before looking at her.


“You know what this is the problem of you species called “seniors”. You guys consider yourself as Gods but unfortunately you are not. And in order to hide your own loopholes you guys show your fake power to other so that no one can witness your loopholes.” Geet’s words made everyone confused as they tried to understand the meaning of her words.


“Excuse me Miss! Will you tell me what kind of loopholes you are exactly talking about?” Rahul said as he couldn’t understand what she’s trying to say.


“Tch Tch Tch! You don’t know about your own loopholes and you are trying to take advantage of my loopholes so that I become a subject of laugh and you can feel proud of your fake power.”


Will you just tell me what kind of loopholes I am actually having instead of talking in riddles?” Rahul said highly irritated with the turn of events.


“Who am I to tell you that? Go and introspect yourself first and you’ll know that. And anyways the nervousness on your face is saying that you already knew. So if you don’t want me to insult you more in front if the whole college by talking about it then just move your butt off from front of me and next time talk to me only when you have enough balls to confess your loop holes.” Geet’s words made everyone speechless as they just stood gaping at her while she turned nd made her way towards the office walking past Maan who was looking at her admiringly due to her courage and her taking stand for herself with a soft smile playing on his M-shaped lips.




This small incident has become the talk of the college as everyone seems to discuss the same thing including the professors too. At one side where they were laughing at Rahul’s dumbness at the same time they were admiring Geet’s self-confidence. Maan’s friends were no exception either as whole day they had talked about her only even after the college got over but the topic of Geet didn’t. Where Ved, Yash and Vicky were praising for her guts Salil was going ga ga over her beauty and Maan well he haven’t said anything instead was just thinking to how to reach the city library before it gets closed when Ved offered him lift as he too was going towards that area only and Maan just nodded in agreement as he knew that he’ll be late if he’ll opt for Auto or cab. Hence he stood over there waiting for Yash and Ved who had gone to take their bikes.


“Excuse me!” Maan heard a soft yet angry voice of a girl from behind as soon as Ved nd Yash left and turned around only to meet a pair of deep hazels looking at him angrily.


“Yes, any problem.” Maan said softly as he recognized her as the same girl who is the talk of whole college.


“Are you a senior in this college?” Geet asked with her hazels spitting fire that could burn the person in front of her.


“Ya, I just completed my first two years and promoted to 3rd year and…” Maan said not understanding why she ask so only to be interrupted by Geet.


I am not interested in knowing about your educational qualifications. I just want to know with whose permission you had punctured the tire of my car.” Geet asked as she pointed towards the flat tire of the car of which Maan had no idea as he looked at Geet confused but then he noticed Rahul and his gang standing at a distance away from them smirking at the scene in front his sharp senses instantly grasped what could have happened.


It was Rahul’s way to take revenge on both him and Geet as he had refused to help Rahul in the plan that he had made to teach Geet a lesson in fact he had supported Geet’s guts of taking a stand for herself instead of doing those humiliating acts and this was what had irked Rahul and hence he wanted Maan to be humiliated by Geet in the same way like she had humiliated him this morning.


“Listen Miss, I don’t know who told about my involvement in all this but I seriously have no idea about all this. Someone has used my name to poison your mind. I guess it’s the work of those seniors only whom you had humiliated this morning.” Maan said calmly as he tried to clear the misunderstanding she’s having for him


“And as far as I know you are also a senior right? Just because I had insulted your fellow friends who had no respect anyways either and made a mockery of you seniors, you guys will do such a cheap thing. What a shameless and spineless creature you are?” Geet said arrogantly as she refused to believe his words. Just then Ved and Yash too came there and they tried to intervene but Maan gestured them to be quiet.


“Listen miss, you are crossing your limit now. I am not the one who could do such cheap tricks to take revenge on anyone. You can ask about me from the whole college and anyways I don’t even have enough time too for planning revenge on a dumb headed girl like you.” Maan was on the verge of losing his patience. He was not the one to talk this rudely with a girl but then this girl is hell bent in making him irritated.


Excuse me! How dare you say that?” Geet said as she looked at Maan angrily on his audacity of talking to her like this. No one has ever talk to her in this tone and here this mere guy is talking to her so meanly.


“You heard me right. You called me a spineless creature but in reality you are one such a brainless, arrogant and snob girl who keeps the world over her head, who thinks that she’s the queen of this whole world and people will dance on her tunes. Well if you think of something of this sort then I suggest you to have a reality check as you really need that.” Maan’s each word were just adding fuel to Geet’s anger and next she just raised her hand to slap him hard but it was stopped by Maan in the mid.


Don’t! Don’t even think of doing this. I am not your servant or your pet who’ll bear your tantrums. I am a fire that can burn your entire being if you’ll try to play with it.” Maan’s each and every word reflected his dominance and anger while his hold on Geet’s wrist gets tightened by every passing second as she tries to free her hand from his grip but it was too strong for her. Kakul, Meera and Pari came forward to help Geet but they were blocked by Salil, Ved, Yash and Vicky who stood in front of them like a shield.


“And now since you had blamed me of something which I have not done, then why don’t I commit it now to prove you right.” Maan said as he smirked before signaling his friends and next what the whole college has witnessed was all the remaining 3 tyres getting punctured as well by Maan’s friends. Poor stepny too couldn’t able to be escaped by the devils as it became the victim of their anger.


“This was your answer. From now onwards always remember this moment before falsely accusing anyone as not always everyone is a spineless creature to bear your tantrums.” Maan whispered dangerously as he jerked her hand away harshly making her to look at him angrily feeling humiliated.


“What’s happening over here?” Everyone heard a familiar voice and as they turned to look at the direction they found their Principal Mr. Singh looking at them suspiciously.


“Uncle, this guy has misbehaved with me and he and his friends had punctured all the tires of my car too.” Geet complained as soon as Mr. Singh approached towards them making everyone shock with the revelation of her calling their principal as Uncle.


“Geet, how many times should I tell you that I am your principal in college so call me Sir.” Mr. Singh said in a hush voice as he looked around only to find all students staring at him.


“And secondly, I think there’s some sort of Misunderstanding as Maan is a bright student and he can never do anything of this sort neither he misbehaves with anyone. There must be a reason for it. Maan beta, you tell what’s the matter?” Mr. Singh said as he patted Maan’s shoulder encouraging him to speak and Maan narrated the whole incidence to him.


“Oho! All the 4 tyres are sleeping peacefully.” Mr. Singh joked as he glanced all the flat tyres.


And 5th one inside the trunk of the car.” Someone from the crowd remarked to which no one had paid attention.


Uncle… I mean Sir, he had held my wrist so harshly that I got hurt… see…” Geet whined as she showed her wrist to Mr. Singh that had the imprint of Maan’s fingers.


“Oh! Such deep marks. After all he’s an inter-collegiate Boxing champion. Poor guy must have forgotten that there’s a difference between a Girl’s wrist and punching bag. Maan, next time hold it gently ok.” Mr. Singh’s words made Maan and Geet to look at him in astonishment as if he had grown two heads.


“Sir” Both said at the same time.


“O c’mon beta. These things happen in college. If now you guys won’t play pranks then will it be after coming to my age. Now c’mon forget everything and patch up. You guys have to spend your next coming days in the same college.”


Maan and Geet though hated the very fact of becoming friends but one thing that was common between them was their respect for Mr. Singh and hence for their sake they both shakes their hands while introducing themselves to each other. Kakul, Pari and Meera too introduced themselves half-heartedly to Maan and his friends who were grinning ear to ear while introducing themselves. Later Mr. Singh offered the girls to drop back home and asked his driver to take care of Geet’s car and get it back home. Having no other option Geet got agreed and headed towards Mr. Singh’s car but not before giving an angry glare to Maan who reciprocated in the same manner before she got inside the car.




That evening instead of Mr. Singh’s driver it was Maan who had got fixed Geet’s car and took it back home much to His friends’ surprise who questioned him too for his this act to which Maan just said that it was them who did mistake by puncturing all the remaining tyres though whatever the reason is yet they need to act rational instead of behaving so immaturely and hence he was just fulfilling his moral duty as he think it to be right. Everyone gaped at him as if he was an alien. No doubt they had respected Maan for his generosity but this was way too much as they were afraid of someone taking the advantage of the simplicity of their best friend. Salil had even teased also that Maan had fallen in Love with Geet to which Maan just shrugged it off that he’s just using his Good for nothing Brain unnecessarily and it was nothing like that. He was just doing it as due to him Geet and her friends can be in trouble if Mr. Singh was not there to drop them as Delhi was not safe for girls and hence he was just fixing his mistake. None of his friends got convinced with his reasoning especially Ved who knows his friend too well but then decided to keep quiet for the time being and let Maan being open up to him himself.


After a whole hour of Drive they reached to Geet’s house and their eyes widen in surprise when they read the name plate saying “Mohinder Handa, Commissioner of Police.” But Maan was all the time calm as he knew that he hasn’t done anything wrong. He told the guard about their provision of coming there who let them in after recognizing Geet’s car and confirming with Mohinder. Mohinder Handa was a commissioner of Delhi Police and a very respectful person of the society but at the same time he was very kind and noble from heart unlike his only Daughter Geet. He has been already told by Mr. Singh about what happened in the college hence he instantly recognized Maan as soon as he made his way inside the hall. Geet was not at home at that time and it was indeed good as Maan was not interested for any kind of one on one fight yet again. Mohinder had an instant liking for this young boy who was so honest in confessing his mistake and apologizing him for his and his friends’ mistake though he was not actually in fault. He had already heard a lot about him from Mr. Singh and no wonder he was so ga ga over his this Favorite student but what touched Mohinder’s heart was his simplicity and his gesture of touching his feet to seek his blessing that reflects his good morals and upbringing.


Mohinder just shrugged off the matter when Maan apologized for his and his friends behavior with Geet saying that such things happen between youngsters and he knows his daughter a little too well hence he knew that she had definitely rubbed his wrong side that lead to this shocking Maan’s friends who were not expecting such generosity from him. Mohinder wanted them to stay for dinner but Maan politely refused saying that they need to reach hostel soon but then he couldn’t refused to his continuous insistence of their driver dropping them back to hostel and hence he just agreed though reluctantly just to make the man before him happy who was so kind to him and his friends. Mohinder keeps on looking at the retreating figure of Maan until he disappears from his eyes and he knew that this guy has something in him which will make him to reach at the peak of success and probably can tame his wild and shrewd daughter too.



Days went by and so did months and everyone’s life get back to normal. Maan, Geet and their friends, all got involved in their studies. There were many occasions after that incident when Maan and Geet came face to face but didn’t speak to each other except the formal Hi-Hello. Geet came to know from her Dad that it was Maan who brought her car back after getting it fixed but her Ego was too big to thank him for his generosity for she feels that he had just fixed his mistake but still on her father’s insistence she said a cold thanks to him next day in the college to which he replied in the same manner and since that day it was just normal Hi-Hello between them whenever they came across each other. Same was the case between Maan’s and Geet’s friends who doesn’t feel it necessary either to mingle with each other.


It was one such day when Geet and her friends came back home from college for group study for the preparation of their upcoming semesters. But an expression of Shock and surprise covered their faces as soon as they opened their respective books and all the four looked at each other before looking back at the object of attention in their books. The page was covered with fresh rose petals whose aroma was so mesmerizing that anyone can drown in the world of ecstasy but what caught their attention was a piece of colored paper stuck with a Red Rose. All their eyes widens in shock as they read the contents of that letter that reads… “I Love you…Yours Valentine” in the most beautiful handwriting they had ever seen. All four of them were dazed for some moment as they read the content of the letter again and again before Pari and Meera broke the moment of daze by sharing their concern about who can be this Valentine Guy’ and how come they have not noticed when he kept this letter in their books of which Geet and Kakul were equally clueless. First they thought that it can be some sort of prank by someone but then Geet’s heart was not ready to take it as a prank by someone and she herself was unaware about the reason.


“What I think is that this letter is for Geet?” Kakul spoke making all 3 confused with her statement and especially Geet.


“And why you exactly think so Kakul? I mean these letters are found in all of us books so it can be for any one of us Na?


“See Geet, we all know that amongst all of us you are the most beautiful girl and have the looks to die for. Moreover these books were issued by you only from library so may be someone has kept it in these books thinking it to be yours.” Kakul said as a matter of fact and Geet just rolled over her eyes seeing no head and tail on her reasoning.


“That makes no sense Kakul and moreover when I had issued these books then there was nothing of this sort until I gave it to you all and since this letter is in all our books so it can be for any of us Na.” Geet reasoned while Pari and Meera gave their consent but still the reason for their worry is same who is this guy and most importantly how would they know that whose Valentine will he be.


“I have got an Idea. See this letter was found in all of us books na then we all will search for him by our own ways and who’ll find him first he’ll be that person’s Valentine.” Geet said chirpily while leaning on the cushions at the back.


“Geet I don’t think that this idea is nice. I mean what if I first and that letter was actually for anyone else from you 3 then? Just be logical Yaar.” Kakul reasoned making Meera and Pari thoughtful but Geet was stuck on her ground


“Baby this he should have thought before writing this letter without writing the name of the girl to whom this letter belongs. Now since he hasn’t written any name then this is the only way. So now it’s fixed that whoever will find him first, he’ll be that person’s valentine and now I don’t want any discussions on it.” Geet said with a tone of finality and Kakul just gave up knowing very well that she can’t win in any argument from her.




Next day when Geet opened her text book in the class to tick down the important notes said by professor, she once again found a letter in the mid of her book in the same way like she has found a day before i.e. covered with fresh Rose petals along with a Red Rose stuck to it. she instantly close the book feeling butterflies running in the pit of her stomach as she clutched the edge of her desk tight to control her erratic heartbeats and ragged breathings in the anticipation of what would be written in the letter this time. She couldn’t able to concentrate on a single word said by professor for her mind was at the thing inside the book. To her luck at that very time the bell rang and professor went out of the class. Geet too rushed outside after informing Kakul, Pari and Meera to come with her towards the garden area.


All 3 girls were surprised to see yet another letter after reaching to Garden Area and that too just in Geet’s book and not in any one of them this time. Meera probe her to read the letter and with shivering hands and thudding heart Geet opened the letter only to find it addressed to her this time with the same beautiful handwriting.




My Love is not a commodity or your favorite chocolate that you can share it among your friends. This is something that I have for you, just for you and will always be. I thought you would understand it by yourself. I thought that you’ll know it by yourself but never mind. But just want to say that please don’t insult my pure Love by making it a thing to be shared between your friends.


Yours Valentine.”


One by one all 3 of them read the letter and then looked at Geet who was still sitting dazed with his words. Someone loves her and that too so much that he knows what she’s thinking or going to do while she was unaware of this till now. Unwillingly her heart missed million beats as she felt a strange feeling creeping her heart which is still alien to her. Unknown to herself, a red hue crept on her cheek while she felt her stomach churning with some unknown sensation that she never felt before as she registered his words in the letter. But who is he? And he’s not coming before her, she thought as she looked around herself to see if she can spot anyone stalking her but to her dismay she found none. It was when Meera shrugged her shoulders her reverie was broken and she just moved back to her class without saying anything to anyone leaving all the 3 behind confused.


And since that day it was a tale of everyday. Everyday Geet use to found a letter in her text book in the same way that depicts the depth his love for her, making her feel so special with his words, with his poems. She felt like a princess and probably she indeed was Princess of his heart whose identity is still a mystery for her. He hasn’t disclosed his name to her yet and she just use to see “Yours Valentine” at the bottom of the letter. She tried really hard to search him, any clue, any sign, anything that could lead her to him but Every time when she think that she’s close to reach him all that she gets was disappointment as she failed terribly at the last moment. It was as if he’s a thin air that always revolves around her but whenever she tries to reach him she found him nowhere in the sight. This happen for whole 3 months and everyday Geet found a new letter and now her patience gave up as she feel this dire need to know who is this guy who loves her so much but still the question is How? And then one day…


“What the hell are you saying? How can that be possible?” Kakul panicked as she said after getting the biggest shock from Geet this morning


“What can I do yaar? Papa has decided all this. I was as shocked as you are. He said that, that guy is some IAS officer and is coming to see me after 2 days and I guess everything else has been already fixed between our families and it’s just a formality. I too don’t want all this so early but I have no solid excuse to refuse this proposal.”Geet said as she sat on bed helplessly.


You have Geet. You can say to Uncle that you love someone else.”Meera suggested as she sat beside her and Pari too consented with her.


“And when he’ll ask me his name then what should I say. I can’t even tell the name of anyone of you 3 as I am a girl and unfortunately you all 3 too.” Geet said as she held her head between her hands feeling so confused.


“But still how can you say yes to Uncle? You know it every well that how much that Valentine guy loves you and I can see that in your eyes too. Then Why?” Kakul said as she shrugged Geet’s shoulders while Meera and Pari were shocked to see her outburst


“Then you tell me what should I say to Dad, that Dad I am sorry I can’t marry anyone because some “Yours Valentine” named guy loves me a lot who didn’t even have courage to even write his true name then forget about coming before me. If he’s behaving like a coward then what is my fault in all this. If he have the slightest of courage then why can’t he come in front of me and say that he loves me, if he loves me this much then why he’s always a mystery to me, why he always vanishes in thin air whenever I try to reach him or is that just like his name his Love is also fake and he’s just playing along thinking me to be as a summer fling. Tell me do you have any answer?” Geet yelled back and Kakul just looked down having no answer of her questions.


“Anyways, he just have 2 days with him. If he didn’t come before me and confess his love then I have to marry the guy that Dad has chosen for me even if I don’t want to. Let’s see if his true Love as he use to claim has more power or his cowardness.” Geet said as she wiped away her tears harshly before slumping back into the bed feeling frustrated and irritated with everything.


That evening when Geet came back home from college all grumpy and irritated she once again found a letter in one of her book and she instantly opened it to read its contents with a thudding heart.




Neither I am coward nor my Love is fake. I don’t have any proof but trust me on this that I never tried to flirt with you. My Love for you is as pure as your heart. I was not coming before you till now because I want our meeting, our confession to be special on a special day i.e. Valentine’s Day but now I can’t wait for that day anymore as what is the use of waiting to make my confession special on that special day if my Geet won’t be with me for she thinks me as a coward and my love to be fake. I can’t lose you due to this perception of yours especially after knowing that someone is going to take you away from me. You are mine Geet, only mine and I can’t let you go away from me ever. You want to meet me Na then I promise that I’ll meet you tomorrow itself in the Garden of our college near the fountain holding a Red rose, waiting for you just for you.


Yours Valentine”


Geet read the whole letter again and again and a deep sigh escaped her lips as she clutched the letter close to her heart. Finally her wait is going to end and she’s going to meet him tomorrow. Who is he? How does he look? Can it be possible that she knows him but couldn’t able to recognize him as her valentine, she thought as she just laid on her bed all excited still holding his letter. O god! She’s feeling so jittery and nervous all at the same time due to anticipation of what will happen after meeting him. She just can’t wait till next day now.


“I am dyeing to meet that person who loves me so irrecoverably.” She thought as she smiled shyly before keeping that letter safe with his other letter in the side drawer waiting for next day to arrive soon.




Whole of the college stood shocked as the loud sound of slap echoed in the air drawing everyone’s attention towards the two persons standing near the fountain, one with the immense anger in her eyes while the other shattered with his head hung low seeing his most beautiful and cherished dream breaking into million pieces like this. Geet’s friends were equally shocked first with the revelation of the person and then what followed after that. Most shocked one was Kakul who was witnessing everything with teary eyes.


“That’s what you deserve Mr. Maan Singh Khurana for this act of yours. How dare you? How dare you to even think of me let alone sending those letters to me? What have you thought that I’ll run in your arms once I’ll meet you? Well, if you think of anything of this sort then it was your biggest mistake to think of any such thing like that as I am Geet, Geet Handa and Geet Handa choose everything as per her class and status and you thought that I’ll choose you. At least you should have seen that where you stand in life, where you belong, what your status is before even dreaming about me. You think that I’ll fall in Love with you… I won’t even appoint People like you even as my servant and you think I’ll choose you as my mate. At least you should have realize the difference between you and me before having such thoughts. Apni Aukat Bhool Gaye ho shayad Isiliye tumne Geet Handa ke baare me aise Sapne Dekhne ki Himmat Kari.” Geet’s voice throwed venom with utmost hatred while Maan said nothing but just stood over there dumbfounded watching the scattered pieces of his broken heart.


“Bas Kar Geet. It’s enough now. Do you even realizing what you are saying.” Kakul said agonized as she turned Geet towards her to make her look at her


Why? Are you feeling bad Kakul? But why? As far as I know that you are my friend then why are you feeling bad for him? Or is it that you are feeling bad because all your hard work of all these months went in vain.” Geet said as she looked straight into her eyes while looked at her shocked with the revelation


What? You thought that I wouldn’t be able to know that it’s you whom he had appointed for conveying his letters. I knew it on the second day itself as I had seen you keeping the letter in my book but I decided to play along so that I can bring him in front of me and that’s the reason I lied about that IAS guy so that you can convey that to him and he can come in front.” Kakul was still under shock due to revelation and so were Meera and Pari who are double shocked with so much happening at once.


“And you Mr. Maan Singh Khurana get this thing straight in your head that I was, am and will never be in Love with a man like you. Till now whatever you get to know about my feelings and behavior for you or should I say that Yours Valentine’ guy from Kakul was all a facade as I was just playing along so that I can know about the actual person behind this mystery man. The story that you had started or has thought to be started, I am finishing that right over here and now don’t even cross my path in future.” These were the words that Maan had heard before Geet leaves from there. Kakul looked at Maan tear-eyed and rushed away from there not able to see him so motionless. One by one everyone left leaving him alone but he just stood over there all numb as Geet’s words replayed again and again in his mind. Even heavens pour out from him crying for the mockery of his love that was made as he still stood over there drenching in rain. It was then Ved and his other friends came to the spot who came to know about all the happenings by some student as they all were in their class and took their dear friend away from there who was still quiet and blank.




“How can you do that Geet especially to that person who loves you so much? How can you make the mockery of his love like this?” Kakul asked Geet as she stopped Geet in the deserted corridor.


Because that’s what he deserves. And by the way why you are questioning me because of him? Why was he so important to you that you were ready to deceive your own best friend? Tell me Kakul, who is he to you? Why you are so concerned for him?” Geet asked the same questions that were buzzing in her mind since the time she came to know About Kakul’s involvement.


“Because I Love him!! I Love him a lot!!” Kakul said it aloud as she fell on her knees feeling dejected shocking everyone.


“It’s true! I had fallen in love with him the day I first saw him but couldn’t able to say it to him except just looking at him from far stealing his glances without his knowledge and then one day I muster enough courage and told him about my feelings. For the first few minutes he was shocked and numb and then he told me that he had never seen me in that way and that he loves someone else. I was jealous and broken initially as I was losing my first and only Love but then when he told me that it’s you for whom he had fallen in first sight itself but always masked his love for you with his cold behavior, then I don’t know whether I should be happy for you being so lucky or sad at my loss. But then Love taught us to be happy in your Lover’s happiness and Maan’s happiness was in you Geet and that’s the reason I decided to help him because he would never be able to tell it himself to you because this is for the first time when he has fallen for anyone otherwise Every time it was just reverse and hence he feared for the rejection (Kakul said and then looked back at Geet who was standing all dazed). Now you tell me Geet, what wrong I did if I want my best friend to get best in her life? What wrong I did if I want the person whom I love get his Love? What wrong I did by becoming a medium of communication between you two? Geet, Maan loves you a lot and trust me you won’t get anyone better than him. Girls use to run after him crazily but that crazy Guy is crazy about you. Please don’t do this to him. Forget your entire ego and accept his Love. Please Geet.” Kakul pleaded as she cupped her face making her understand while Meera and Pari too consented with teary eyes.


“I know what I have to do now.” Geet said all expressionless while others couldn’t guess what’s running in her mind.


And then next day a team of police officers came into the college and instantly arrested Maan after enquiring about him on the fake charges of supplying drugs to college students. His friends and Mr. Singh tried a lot to stop the arrest stating that Maan is not at all like that but the policemen were firm on their ground saying that they had proofs and had got orders from higher officials and eventually taken Maan with them. It was a shocking moment for whole of the college as none had thought of Maan to be like that while Mr. Singh was all broken due to not able to help his favorite student and Maan’s friends were trying their best to release Maan on bail. Geet’s friends looked at her who seems to otherwise calm and they instantly knew that it’s all because of her and their anger knew no bound then especially of Kakul’s who just dragged Geet aside and slapped her hard for the very first time in her life while Geet looked at her stunned.


“Galti Maan se bhi hui thi aur Mujhse bhi. We both had forgotten that you are Geet Handa who is nothing but an arrogant and snob girl who can never care about anyone’s feelings, a rich spoil brat. The person who loves you more than his life today you got him arrested on fake charges just because he has committed a big mistake of loving you. Wasn’t all that had you said to him or did to him was enough that you have to stoop this low to punish him. But you know what he deserves this punishment for loving an insensitive and immature girl like you. But Geet Maan’s parents have not done any mistake then why are you punishing them for no fault of theirs. His father has worked hard day and night just to see his son to reach at the peak of success, his mother use to pray every moment for her son’s safety and when they’ll come to know what their son is going through just because he had fallen in love with a wrong girl then they’ll die Geet, they won’t be able to survive. And the reason for their death will be you only you Geet. And mark my words Geet that if anything will happen to Maan and his family, then I swear I’ll forget that you are my best friend.”Kakul said and left from there without giving a second glance to Geet followed by Pari and Meera who were equally angry from Geet leaving her behind alone to realize the extent of her mistake.


That night when Geet asked her Dad to release Maan then he out rightly refused stating that law is not his personal property that he can play with it according to him whenever he wants. He was not in the favor of getting Maan arrested either owing to his principles and morals if Geet hadn’t attempted to kill herself and Mohinder can’t see his only daughter taking away her life no matter if her demand is irrational but he had to agree with a heavy heart but then today again her daughter’s mood has changed and she’s asking him to release Maan and he just can’t misuse his power of being a commissioner due to her daughter’s mood swings. But then after lots of pestering and Geet admitting that she loves Maan due to her Dad’s only condition to release Maan, Mohinder called the officers to release Maan without any trouble or interrogation.


Geet though had admitted that she loves Maan unwillingly due to the condition put forward by Mohinder but then she couldn’t help with the blush that formed on her cheeks while her toes curled in shyness while doing so but then she shrugged it off thinking that it is due to admitting something like this before her Dad and anyways right now the feeling of relief is too much to feel anything else. May be she had acted very much irrational in her anger and ego. Probably it was her anger of knowing Maan to be that guy out of all people for she was expecting anyone but him had made her behave so insensitively and hence She had decided that when Maan will come to college next day then she’ll apologize to him for all the trouble he had went through due to her and will ask him to move forward in his life and with this thought she just closed her eyes slipping into deep slumber waiting for the next day to arrive.


But thing didn’t go as per planned by her as when she reached college that day the first thing she saw was her friends but as soon as they saw her they just moved ahead without even glancing at her. Next she met with Maan’s friends and her eyes instantly searched for Maan but before she could ask them about him they too moved away from there but not before giving her a look of hatred. She though felt odd but then she knows that she deserves it as she did commit a mistake no matter for whatsoever reason and she was sure that once Maan will come then everything will be fine. But then why he didn’t came yet. He never gets late but then she thought maybe he needs some rest after all the trauma he had went through last day. She was walking lost in her thoughts when she bumped into Mr. Singh who was going through corridors.


“Congratulations Beta and Thanks a lot.” Mr. Singh said with a smile after getting greeted by her and Geet smiled thinking that it may be because he came to know of Maan’s release but his next set of words had thrown her in the deep pool guilt and regret.


“For ruining the career and life of an honest, innocent and excellent boy like Maan. I had always complaint to God that why I don’t have a daughter like you but now I thank him for not giving me a daughter like you.” Mr. Singh said and moved towards his office hiding away his tears leaving Geet behind all numb and motionless. She couldn’t stayed over there even for a minute more and just ran back to her home.




But how’s that possible? Maan has been released last night only.”Mohinder said as soon as Geet told him about Maan’s absence and everyone’s behavior.


“But then why he didn’t came to college today and why everyone is saying that I ruined his life.” Geet asked as tears brimmed in her hazels due to everyone’s indifference


“You still haven’t understood Beta. Maan was an honest and self-esteemed man who may be not rich like you but his character, his honesty meant everything to him and you had tainted his character by imposing false accusations just because of your ego. Now do you still think that he’ll be able to face this world after such humiliation knowing that now everyone will look at him disgusted? So what if he had not committed any crime but this world will see him as a criminal only. You had committed a big sin beta and the worst part is that somewhere I too has been involved in this sin of yours. I just wish that I haven’t pampered you this much after Rano’s demise then you haven’t ruin the career and life of an innocent” Mohinder said before leaving for him room leaving Geet behind all broken and to fall deep into the pit of guilt and regret.

(P.S. Pls Listen to this Song… I am so in love with itEmbarrassed



Aajaaa… teriyaan duavaan lagiyaan
Rab to main aj vi ladiyaannn…
Aajaaa… teriyaan duavaan lagiyaan
Rab to main aj vi ladiyaannn…




That night she couldn’t able to sleep at all as whenever she closes her eyes, Maan’s broken and numb face use to come in front of her eyes making her restless. She just couldn’t understand what’s happening to her as she felt this dire need to see him and asking him if he’s ok. She had hurted many people before too and she never felt regretted for it except for her friends and Dad but then she was regretting a big time for Maan and she herself is unaware for it. She don’t know why but she want him to be here with her and tell him that she was a big time fool to behave this insensitively but as much as she wished she knows that her wish couldn’t come true as she was sure that Maan would never wish to even see her face now and the mere thought had slit her heart into thousand pieces as she moved towards kitchen to have some water to calm herself for she can feel her eyes burning with those unshed tears.


Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye..
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Tenu hoo..kah maarda firaan


She was about to touch the rim of the glass to her lips when she felt a hand snaking around her waist making her breath to hitch and she just closed her eyes when she found him tucking her close to his hard form such that her exposed back from her nighty was touching his taut chest. Somewhere she knew that it’s him only and for that she doesn’t have to look back. Don’t know why but she could sense his aroma and recognize his touch and her thoughts come true when she found him twirling her around with a jerk still keeping her close to him looking at her with deep intense eyes before twirling her sideways and again bringing her back making her back to touch his taut chest as he nuzzled in her neck giving her butterfly kisses making her feel ticklish.


Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye..
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Tenu hoo..kah maarda firaan


She moaned in pleasure as Maan moved up his fingers over her bare arm before caressing he exposed part of her cleavage while his lips were kissing her nape while Geet just leaned her head back on his shoulders closing her eyes giving him more access before he puts all her weight on his hand and twirled her around and then gently puts her down eliciting a throaty moan from her as she felt his hot breath on her neck while he was dropping her down making her to feel thousand butterflies dancing in her stomach and strangely she was liking this proximity between them as if they were meant to be like this forever as Maan twirled and swirled her passionately.


Ikk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Ekk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Ho.. tenu hooo..kaaah maarda firaan…


Next she found herself lying on the kitchen counter and his hands moving up her body from toe to her face over the flimsy material of her nighty making her to close her eyes in pleasure as he placed open mouthed kisses over her neck and exposed part of her shoulders making her to arch her back but before she could hold him in her arms a loud sound of shattering of glass made her to open her eyes and she saw herself standing at the same place while Glass has just slipped from her hands due to her being lost in such erotic dreams with Maan. She clutched her heart tight as she breathed heavily when realized what she was hallucinating but why and why only him? She doesn’t have any feelings for him right then why? Is she falling for him?




It’s been a month now and Maan haven’t showed up in the college yet. No one knows where he is not even his friends as they all were searching him every place possible when they come to know that he haven’t returned back to Hoshiarpur but they couldn’t found any trace of him. It was one such day when Geet went to cafeteria and saw hers and Maan’s friends sitting together and talking. They all had become quite close after that incident. She goes to them to spend some time as everyone has avoided her in this one month like a plaque and especially to know if there’s any news of Maan’s whereabouts. But as soon as she greeted them, everyone left from there on the pretext of this thing or other making her realize that no one wants to talk to her after what she did and due to her one mistake she was left all alone, she thought and ran towards a deserted corridor crying bitterly.


Lagdi tu kyun door da khwaaab..
Lagdi tu kyun door da khwaaab

Just then she was crying bitterly while resting her back to one of the wall she found someone wiping away her tears and as she opened her eyes she found Maan wiping away her tears gently while nodding his head in no gesturing “Don’t cry” with a soft smile playing on his M-shaped lips while she just looked at him in awe.


Akkhiyaan cho wag bayaan
Dil main lagana tere naaal
Dil main lagana tere naaal


And before she could understand anything she found him kissing her both eyes one by one sucking away the tears after placing a oft kiss on her forehead comforting her with the warmth of his Love letting her know that she’s not alone for he’s always there with her before moving towards her full luscious lips. Geet felt his hot breath burning the softness of her lips and she parted them on her own accord in the anticipation of what coming next.


Rooh nu vasaaja seene laaann waaliye
Ikk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Ho.. tenu hooo..kaaah maarda firaan…


But then nothing happened as she instantly opened her eyes when she felt his warmth missing only to find her all alone in the deserted corridor with no Maan around and she just ran away from there crazily trying to search Maan everywhere ignoring the weird looks everyone is giving her and at last she sat near the same fountain where she had once insulted him all dejected and failed. She could see her image of slapping him and making mockery of his Love making her to disgust herself even more and as a result she hits her hand hard on the wall of the fountain with which she had slapped him making it to bleed, punishing it for its sin by giving it pain but that pain was nothing in front of the pain that she was feeling in her heart due to her guilt of ruining his life and regret of losing the person who loves her so much just due to her baseless ego which could do nothing to heal her pain now.




O… o… o…

She sat between the pool of letters in her balcony that she had treasured till now admiring them with all her heart. His letters, her most priceless possession that she has been reading daily in this past 8 months making her to fall for him more and more. A smile formed on her lips as she remembered their first meet where they had fought like a fourth graders and then the series of these letters that were the best thing happened to her and she had ruined everything with her own hands


Chitthiyaan to mitthi teri yaad aayi
Aaya ni sajna mera..
Kattiyaan jo rattaan tene bhul paayi
Dil vich basna tera..

She clutched one of the letter close to her heart as a lone tear escaped her eyes realizing what she has lost. She had lost the number of counts when she had read these letters and missed him wishing him to be close to her. Yes she had came into the terms that she’s deeply in Love with him probably she was always but it was just she who was blinded by her ego and anger to not able to see through it, she thought as she looked at the roses and the petals in one the box which were dried by now but her Love for him haven’t as it just increased by every passing second with the only wish to see him again. She knows that he’s not here with her yet she could feel him around her just like she use to feel him in these past 8 months for he’s present in her heart beating with every heartbeat of hers



Rab tenu baniya khair chaahan waliye
Ikk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hookah maarda firaan


She closed her eyes when she felt his thumb wiping away that lone tear before placing a soft yet deep kiss on the soft flesh of her palm making her to smile as she looked at him while caressing his hairs while he laid keeping his head in her lap looking at her with his deep intense and passionate eyes that had love for her just for her.


Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Ho.. tenu hooo..kaaah maarda firaan…




Saadi gali aaja sanu…

Saadi gali aaja sanu…

Saadi gali aaja…


And next she found him scooping her in his arms and before she could know anything she felt the soft mattress beneath her making her realize that she’s on her bed and she just smiled seeing him laying beside her after tucking them with duvet before kissing her forehead and then both her eyes making them close before moving towards her jaw line trailing soft yet sensuous kisses moving towards the sensitive spot beneath her ear licking it with his tongue.


I Love you Maan.” Geet whispered as he gently bites the soft flesh of her neck before licking it to sooth the pain.


“I Love you too Geet. I Love you too.” She heard his hoarse whisper and felt him keeping his rough lips on her soft ones with her closed eyes. He didn’t kissed neither moved but just placed them above hers giving her the warmth of his Love and making her drown in the world of blissful dreams of being them together happily yet again.




“I don’t want to meet anyone.” Geet said as she looked other side avoiding the questioning gaze of her father who had brought yet another alliance for her.


“This is the umpteenth time I am listening to same sentence and you can’t get excused Every time. It’s final now, you are meeting that guy.” Mohinder said with a tone of finality. After that incident of 1 1/2 yrs before he had become a bit strict regarding Geet and hence she now don’t have enough courage to make her father to make her agree on her terms like before yet she can never think of someone taking Maan’s place in her heart and life. She knew that he’ll be back once he’ll punish her enough for her sin. More than her love she had trust on his love and hence she keeps on rejecting every proposal.


“I don’t want to marry anyone as I wanted to complete my studies first.”


“I am not asking you to marry him tomorrow itself. I just want you to meet that guy, that’s it. And anyways you are already in your third year and he has to go for his IAS training so if everything will get fine then both of you can get engaged today itself and once he’ll finish his training and you your studies then you both will get married.”Mohinder said as a matter of fact while Geet just looked at him shocked, he had already fixed everything and didn’t even cared to ask her.


“But Dad…”


“I don’t want any more argument on this Geet as it won’t change my decision. Now go back to your room and get ready. I had invited them for lunch today and it’s already 11 am. I have asked Kakul, Meera and Pari to come and help you. Though they don’t want to come but after my insistence they agreed. They can be here any moment. Now Go.”Mohinder said in a stern voice while Geet just nodded meekly before going back to her room.


Tears that were threatening to fall out from her eyes finally made their ways out as soon as Geet came to her room. No she can’t meet anyone, can’t marry anyone because she belongs only to the person whom she had lost due to her own stupidity yet can’t think of anyone but him and can wait for him forever but she can’t let anyone else claim her. She would die before she has to be called anyone else’ than Maan.


“You are mine Geet, only mine and I can’t let you go away from me ever.”


His words from his last letter rang in her mind as she closed her eyes and fresh tears spilled out from her eyes feeling so helpless. She tried really hard to search him in these 18 months but every time all she got is disappointment. In fact Salil has even shut the door hard on her face when she had gone to his hostel to ask him if he knew anything about Maan. Suddenly everything started to feel so empty and meaningless without him. She had lost her Love, she had lost her friends and she had lost the sense of pride that her father once use to have on her and all this due to that stupid ego of hers that lead her to nowhere. Every second without him in these 18 months was not less than a punishment for her and she knows that she deserves it for making the mockery of his pure Love while falling deeply and deeply in love with her. What an irony, when he was in front of her then he couldn’t understand his feelings and now he has gone far away from her then she had realized what she has lost but Alas! It was too late.


Kakul, Meera and Pari came to her place after a while and their heart cried seeing her in pain thus washing away all the anger of these 18 months and as a result they instantly hugged her to comfort her. Geet cried hugging Kakul begging her to bring Maan or to take her to him and Kakul just closed her eyes in helplessness as she could do nothing to sooth the pain of her best friend. They reached downstairs with a heavy heart after composing themselves and helping Geet to get ready. Geet saw a middle-aged couple conversing with her father as she greeted them. They seemed to be very nice and kind from heart as they talked to her once she sat near them. Their simplicity instantly reminded her of Maan and her heart cried even more in helplessness but she could do nothing, nothing at all. Later she was told by her Dad that the guy who had come to see her is waiting in the Garden area for her and hence she has to meet him there only. He gestured Geet’s friends to take her to him who just nodded their head and took Geet towards the garden area and then left after asking her to be strong and tell him clearly.


Geet scanned throughout the Garden area to see the guy who came to see her but to her surprise she found him nowhere. Her brows furrowed in confusion as she couldn’t understand where that guy could vanish when her Dad has told her that he has been waiting for her over here. She was looking for him around her when something on the Tea-table caught her attention and she moved forward only to see a piece of colored paper peeping through the pages of Diary. She immediately picked up the diary to open it and her eyes widened in shock as she found a letter in the same way Maan use to send to her i.e. stuck with a Red Rose and covered with fresh Rose Petals. For few moments she couldn’t fathom whether it’s a dream or reality but then the feel of paper in her hand made her realize that it’s a reality and she immediately opened the letter with her trembling fingers and thudding heart as soon as the realization dawn upon her.


“I could never get my mind off you,

I wonder if you’d mind if I’d make you my own,

And never let you go,

Hug you tight,

Treat you right,

Act all polite,

Take you on a date,

Making sure I am never late

Kiss you on your lips,

Talk about our kids,

Make you feel like a princess,

Living in a castle,

By just only loving you I am so blessed,

Hope by claiming you for forever I can be the best,

My only desire is to hold you tight,

Feeling the thudding of your heart against mine,

Now tell me my Princess,

Will you be mine?

Holding my hand in this journey of life my Love,

Will you be my Valentine???


Yours Valentine”


“Maan” she muttered in astonishment as she read the letter again and again with her wide eyes not able to believe whether she was dreaming or this letter was actually here. How come that be possible after so many months getting this letter again in the same manner and most importantly how did it reached over here, million thought raced her mind as she felt her heart thudding loud in her rib cage while her hands held the letter tight as if she was fearing it as her mere hallucination yet again.


“You haven’t given your answer yet, Geet.” she heard a familiar voice touching her ear drums breaking the trail of her thoughts. She could never forget this husky and baritone voice of his no matter how many months or years passed by not seeing him or hearing him for this only voice has been etched all over her heart and mind .


Tears welled up her eyes as she raise her head to look at the source of voice and there he stood in front of her in flesh and bones looking at her ever so lovingly, same Love which he have for her before and which she failed to realize then but to her surprise it was still there without even faltering a bit even after such a grave mistake of her ruining his life. And next she found herself running in his embrace hugging him tightly as if he’ll vanish once again in thin air and him wrapping his arms tight around her petite form cocooning her in his embrace close to his heart. She cried in his embrace as she muttered “I am Sorry” countless times but this time out of sheer happiness of him coming back to her while he just keeps on rubbing her back to calm her down hiding his face in the crook of her neck inhaling her sweet aroma.


They pulled out from hug after what seems like an eternity with Maan still keeping her in his embrace close to him as she caress his face lovingly while smiling amidst her tears trying to make herself believe of his presence, Maan’s hand instantly reached to cradle her face and wiping the trail of those salty water before placing a soft yet deep kiss on his forehead making her believe on the fact that he’s indeed there with her and it’s not just her dream before pulling her back into his embrace.


“You haven’t given me my answer yet Geet? Will you be my Valentine for whole of my life?” Maan asked after a while making Geet to pull out from his embrace and looked at him awed. How can he still love her in the same way like he did before probably even more than before even after her doing so wrong with him?


“How can you still love me so much Maan?” Geet asked as fresh tears brimmed in her eyes finding nothing but only Love for her just for her in his deep honeyed eyes. She had expected to see hatred, disgust in them for her like she had seen in the eyes of everyone but his orbs only reflected nothing but his pure Love for her.


Because I do. I just can’t stop loving you even if I want to. I tried to not think about you but couldn’t get my mind off you even for a second. I tried to hate you as much as I can but at the end I eventually ended up falling more and more in Love with you. Geet, do you think of me worthy enough to let me hold your hand and walk in this journey of life together crossing each hurdle, each difficulty with our Love? Do you think of me worthy enough for you to let me love you, pamper you and treat you like a princess of my heart? Do you think of me worthy enough to let me grow old with you? Do you think…”


His next set of words remain unsaid as Geet instantly sealed his lips with hers stopping him to say further. How dare he think that he’s not worthy enough for her? If someone is unworthy then It’s she who probably doesn’t deserve a gem like him owing to the mistake she had committed and here he’s asking if he’s worthy enough or her. How can his Love be still so selfless and unconditional, she thought as she sucked his upper lip pouring out all the love she has for him.


It took some time to Maan to realize what actually is happening. His princess is kissing him, O God! It’s their first kiss and as soon as he realized this fact he just wrapped his arm around her waist pulling her closer as he reciprocated the kiss in the same fervor. His other hand angled her face as he deepened the kiss before nipping her lips gently gaining an entry into the sweet crevices of her mouth pouring out his endless love for her. They kissed each other like there is no tomorrow forgetting the world around them as their virgin lips moved against each other in a perfect sync sucking, nibbling and kissing each other passionately. They finally broke out after what seems like an eternity when they felt the dire need to take breath before touching their foreheads together in order to calm down their ragged breathing.


“Don’t ever say that you are not worthy enough for me or else I’ll kill you. Your place in my heart is much above than my God Maan. If someone is unworthy then it’s me. Will you make me worthy enough for you by making me a part of your life Maan?” Geet looked at Maan with her expected hazels to which he just simply pecked her lips softly giving her his answer.


Got your answer? You are much more worthy for me and my Love Geet than I can ever ask for? Now never say that again. Whatever happened was our past and what will come will be our future and I don’t want to spoil the blissful moment of our future by mulling over our past. So right now from this moment I want us to forget everything and start a fresh. You’ll do that na Geet, for me?” Maan’s answer made Geet speechless as she looked at him with all the love she’s having for him seeing the depth of his love that had so easily freed her from her every guilt. Kakul was indeed right she is indeed a lucky one to have him in her life, she thought as she nodded her head in acceptance.


“I Love you Geet. I Love you a lot” Maan hoarsely whispered in his baritone voice as he looked deep into her hazels that were already looking at him with so much Love.


“I Love you too Maan. I Love you a lot.” She replied as she submitted herself in his embrace while he just held her close to him feeling the happiest man of this earth.


A loud sound of clapping and hooting broke the moment of blissful confession of these 2 love birds and as they looked at the direction they found their family and their friends and Mr. Singh standing with smiling faces adoring this lovely couple but what made Geet embarrass was the fact that they probably would have witnessed them kissing especially the elders and all she want at that moment is mother earth to swallow her for being seen in such position by their elders. But then something stuck Geet’s brain and she instantly looks at Maan and then back to her Dad who was smiling widely. And as she puts two and two together she understood everything that Maan is the guy who came to see her and what kind of Drama is her Dad doing till now.


“I know what’s running in your mind Geet. Well I’ll cut the long story in short. I found Maan after whole 2 months since that incident only to find him working as a mechanic in a small village nearby. Since Ved had already told me that Maan haven’t been back to Hoshiarpur and I know that he wouldn’t either, for he can’t let down his parents and that made my work easier. It took me lots of time to convince him to come back with me and finally he did just to fulfill his Father’s dream but I could see how broken and shattered he was for his eyes reflected his pain clearly hence I ask Mr. Singh to keep him at his home and with the help of some of my contacts I arranged everything by which Maan could complete his education and everything that could lead him to fulfill his dream. Here I had seen true remorse in your eyes too but I want you to realize the depth of your feelings and extent of the damage you had done so that you won’t repeat the same mistake again. And finally Maan’s determination and hard work showed its result and he had topped in his IAS examinations and rest you can comprehend yourself. And ya one more thing Maan’s name is all cleared from every criminal record hence there’s no need to worry about it. And ya in all this there’s someone apart from Mr. Singh who helped me a lot and that is “Panch Shakti” means Maan’s own friends who stood by him like his strength giving him support at his toughest time.” Mohinder’s last sentence made all the girls to look at the guys surprised and anger was visible in everyone’s face for hiding such fact from them even after being quiet close to them especially of Kakul’s who haven’t expected Ved to hide this from her for they really became very close to each other in these one and a half year, as she looked at him angrily while he just mouthed a sorry nervously.


“Umm… Guys what could we do? Mohinder Uncle has emotionally blackmailed us to be quiet. Ab who can refuse the order of Commissioner of Police. Abey bolo na tum log.” Ved said as he nudged his friends to speak in defense while smiling nervously who supported his statement and finally after lots of Roothna manana girls let go the matter as the moment of happiness was too much to think of any other thing.


“Waise Geet, along with Maan we all are waiting for your answer. Ab Bol bhi Do Warna my niece is all ready to marry him right now and here. If you have any dilemma then I can ask her.” Mr. Singh teased making everyone giggle and Geet to look at him pouting with cute anger. But then everything went silent as they saw Maan bending on his knees before taking Geet’s hand in his making her to look at him dazed.


Ms. Geet Handa, I Maan Singh Khurana, in the presence of all these people, is proposing you to marry me and make me a part of your life. Will you give me this Privilege to own you and make you my Valentine officially for rest of my life? Will you be mine?” Maan’s words stirred new emotions in Geet’s heart making her to fall for him even more as her lips broke into the widest smile while she nodded her head in yes.


“Forever I’ll be yours and only yours. But I have one condition.” Geet’s words made Maan and others confused as they looked at her furrowing their brows.


“You have to promise me that you’ll always be just my Valentine?”Maan’s lips curved into smile as he let out the breath that he has been holding till now.


“Today, tomorrow, forever and in every birth I promise that I’ll be only Yours Valentine’.Maan said as he slipped the ring into her finger marking her as his possession before filling her in his embrace amidst the huge round of clapping and whistling leaving everyone to witness the re-union of these two souls.




So this was the story of Maan and his only Love Geet who finally got together after a long period of separation. They both got married after Maan finished his training and Geet her studies and then with each passing day their Love for each other increased just more and more while their nights were filled with passion and madness for each other. Maan had finally convince their parents to stay with them in Delhi and Geet was so delighted to get the love of two fathers and one mother. Those bitter memories that were once the part of their lives now seem to be vanish somewhere long back for it has been replaced by all the loving and blissful memories created by Maan and Geet. And then an year later an Angel came into their lives and Maaneet named them as Seher’ who honored them to cherish the beautiful feeling of becoming parents and then after 4 years of Seher’s birth Geet gave birth to another Boy and they gladly named him as Garv’ and their family got complete.


Ved and Kakul too got married 2 years after Maaneet’s marriage. Probably Kakul had finally found her match in Ved and both are just perfect for each other and now is a Proud parent of one boy. After lots of hook ups and break ups Yash and Meera too got married and guess what they were still fighting even after having 3 kids and soon Pari and Vicky too got married though that’s a different thing that Pari still use to have crush on other guys.


And Salil… Wo Bechara is still searching for his Ms. Perfect in every girl but still no luck. Even after being an owner of such a big and successful advertising agency he haven’t got his soul-mate yet but still he never stops trying approaching every girl. Everyone has mark their names in their respective fields and are successful in their own ways. Some less and some more but still that couldn’t come in the way of the Bond they shared with each other and they were sure that it won’t change even in the future too..


Maan and Geet are celebrating their 12th Marriage anniversary and they are still madly in Love with each other just like they were before. It’s not that haven’t faced any difficulties or differences or ups and downs, they did but they crossed everything with their Love and understanding and are leading a blissful life. Maan still use to express his Love by writing Letters and Geet just use to fall more and more for him with his way to express his Love especially his way of still addressing himself at the end of Letter as “Yours Valentine.” 

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“A Moment of Love” ~ Part 3


“Hhmmm.. Silverman Finance. I knew that you had resigned but not that it was Silverman. Anyways, there’s nothing to be sad about it. Whatever happens, happens for good nd I am sure that you are having this capability in your to get placed in the company far better than Silverman. You see, you never know there’s something best stored for you in the next moment.” Geet looked at him in awe as he spoke, amazed at his positive outlook towards everything but what touched her heart was that he didn’t pitied her or anything like others but had unknowingly taken her out from her own negative world where everything seemed to be wrong but now everything seems to be so right. Was it due to his effect on her, she thought as she really felt herself falling hard for this guy. She can happily fall for him, in deep love nd never to recover if he would be this generous for rest of her lyf.


“Nice Car.” She said in order to give a break to her thoughts that seemed to forget their actual route after meeting him.


“Thanks. A few perks when you are born a little rich.” He said disdainfully as if this compliment doesn’t affect him a bit which too Geet by surprise as she thought that usually every guy loves his car to be praised nd flaunt to others.


“Don’t say that, you seem to be doing well. Manager of the Elan, that’s good isn’t it?” Geet said as she looked at him amazed.


“Well I own that place.” Now that comes as a biggest shock for her for not even in her wildest dream she could think of that coming. She’s been spending tym with the owner of the Elan who had chosen her out of all the hot nd beautiful girls nd super models who must be running behind him but still he’s spending his precious tym with her, a Girl who is emotionally wrecked at this moment. Was it really happening in real or is that she’s dreaming everything nd once she’ll open her eyes she’ll find herself in that mess again, she thought as she looked at him wide eyed still not believing on what he has just said.




“Well, I hope I haven’t given you a heart attack out of shock. And by the way you can close that mouth of yours before any fly gets into your mouth” Maan said as he chuckled with his last line making Geet to close down her mouth instantly feeling embarrassed.


“That’s… That’s really strange. I mean you being the owner… I mean then why are you acting chauffeur to drunken guest like me? I mean…” She couldn’t comprehend a proper statement that could depict all the questions running in her mind. Now the car suddenly seemed in place. There would be a few more like this in his garage, she thought and smiled on her own thought.


“Well tonight is the 31st night bash so I thought to give my people a break. And moreover, it doesn’t hurt to have a beautiful girl by your side on a breakfast table, does it?” He said as he looked into her eyes while raising his brows making her cheeks to get red and hot and she sank in her seat as if wishing to melt away in the seat and become one of the seat cushions.


“Probably Yes, Thank you.” She said all flushed while looking everywhere but him making Maan to chuckle on her nervousness. She knows she was falling for him and that too falling hard and strangely she was glad at the fact. I mean who don’t want to fall for the rich handsome guy like him.


“So where would you like to have your breakfast Geet?” Maan initiated the conversation I order to remove the awkwardness between them making Geet to bring back from her dreamland.


“Wherever you want to.” She said as she shrugged her shoulders making Maan to take a deep breath.


“Hhmmm… I’ll make it easier for you. I will drive past a few eating places and you choose the one you like. As simple as that. ok.” Maan suggested and Geet nodded her head in approval agreeing to whatever he said. Hell! She’ll agree even if he asks her to jump from the moving car, though she wished he didn’t ask something like that.


“That one” Maan was yet to drive along the first eating joint when he heard Geet shrieked in excitement making him to stop the car instantly.


“Which one?” Maan asked as if to confirm what he understood was right making Geet to look other way in embarrassment as if it was a mistake.


“Nothing.” She mumbled still not able to meet his eyes thinking what he would think of her


“Oh! You mean that?” Maan asked once again as he looked at the direction where she had pointed.


“Umm.. Yes… but it is no compulsion… I mean…” Before she could complete her sentence she found Maan already driving towards that place making her to get shock to her wits. It was actually a small roadside Dhaba across the road where all four of them i.e. Geet, Meera, Yash and Vicky used to come after office and that’s the reason Geet was this much excited had seen when she had seen that but she had never expected Maan to go to that place. Why a rich Man like him would dine at that roadside Dhaba when he can dine any other luxurious restaurant, she wondered clueless but as usual had no answer like other questions.




Vicky and Yash quietly went inside Geet’s bedroom just like Kids do when they had done any mischief only to find Meera was sitting there upset with tears continuously flowing down her eyes. Both sat on either side of her not knowing what to say or how to comfort her. They all are at fault but didn’t know what to do to rectify their mistakes or to turn back the time but in real they could do nothing instead of just mulling over the loss of those moments they had lost in their stupid Egos and misunderstanding. It’s true that they cannot bring back that tym but they can at least try to bring back the person they had lost and who had bind them together.  Both Vicky and Yash looked at each other as if asking to each other who is going to break the silence first but none had courage to speak anything. Finally it was Yash who decided to break the silence.


“Meera, I know I… in fact we all had wronged Geet in some way or other and you are right it was all due to my baseless ego and I can’t do anything to undo that. I know I rather we all had to behave maturely at that time but we didn’t and the most insensitive one was me. I had been insensitive at the time of Vicky’s and Pari’s relationship also. You were right at that time also it was my Ego only but thanks to Geet I was lucky to not lose my friend and again I did the same. But Meera I want a chance just one chance to rectify everything. I want to bring that happiness back, that spark back which was between all of us. Just forgive me and give that one chance Meera and I promise that I’ll make everything all right. I’ll bring back my old sister, your best friend, Our Geet back. Just one chance, Meer. Please.” Yash rather pleaded as he held Meera’s hand asking for forgiveness who was just looking ahead. How can she forgive him and most importantly who is she to forgive him when she’s also the one who had hurted Geet though unknowingly but she did then by which right she can forgive Yash.


“I am no one to forgive you Yash because we all are culprits. I, You, Vicky we all are culprits of Geet and only she had this right to forgive not only you but to all of us and she’s not here. You have to earn her forgiveness not mine, we all have to.” Meera replied still looking ahead making Yash to bow down his head in guilt. She was right they all are culprits and hence only Geet had right to forgive not only him but to all of them.


“Meera, you are right. It was my fault too. I was the one who said trash about her… to her… and I am too equally culprit of hers. And I was wrong with Pari too. I should have waited till Yash and Pari would have sorted things out between them.” Vicky spoke with equal guilt and regret that they all were feeling at that moment.


“No Vicky, I was wrong with that. I should have acted more maturely. I took that a little too far. I should have given you your space. Sorry for that but at that time I felt that you were ignoring me, your best friend for her but I know now that I was wrong.” Yash said as he stood up from his place and stand in front of Vicky.


“I didn’t knew what was the matter between both of you at that tym Yash and to be honest I was so into her that I literally forgot about you guys; you, Meera and even Geet. I don’t even remember that when was the last time I talked to her so I can’t blame you if you had felt like that. I am sorry Yash.”Vicky said as he took a deep sigh while Meera was looking at both of them feeling happy that they are opening up to each other as she knows that though Geet had sorted out things between them but still there was somewhere a crack in their relationship but guess that crack was healing now.


“I am sorry too Vicky. I screwed it up. I am sorry for whatever I said about you and Pari.” Yash said as he kept a hand on Vicky’s shoulder.


“It’s okay Yash, I incited you to do so.”


“Still it was me who crossed the line.”


“But I made you to do so.”


“But I crossed the line first.”


“What you did was understandable.”


“No Dude, it was silly.”


“What I did was silly.”


“I am sorry.”


“I am sorry too.” And they both hugged each other like a true brothers feeling happy that their relationship got saved from drowning down while Meera just broke out in a smile and then burst out in laughter making Yash and Vicky to look at her in amazement as if she had lost her mind.


“I am sorry… but it looks so husband-wife type. I mean now will you guys kiss now as it looks so… it’s my mistake honey… No its mine… no its mine sweetheart…!” She tried to say between her fits of laughter trying her best to control her laugh but couldn’t and once again burst into laughter while rolling over making Vicky and Yash to join too in her laughter parade as they understood her joke. First time during all these chaos there was genuine smile on all their faces which somewhere got lost between their egos and misunderstandings but thankfully before their friendship get drown in the sea of this ego and misunderstandings.




“Arey Maan Bhaiya Kya loge aaj?” A boy of 14 came to their table as soon as they settled down making Geet to look at him shock. This man since the time she met didn’t fail to shock her a bit.


” Chotu Aaj tera special le aa. Bahut tym ho gaya nahi khaya.” Maan ordered as he ruffled the boy’s hair making him to smile widely before running away while saying “Abhi laya”. Maan smiled at his childishness and turned to look at Geet only to find her gaping at him with mouth open making Maan to shake his head.


“Not my first tym over here. You see, every other eating joint in the city has competition. So I like this place.” Maan said as a matter of fact while shrugging his shoulders but Geet was still gaping him shocked. He can’t be real, she was sure now. It’s all being too good and perfect. She’s definitely seeing a dream and when she’ll open her eyes all these things will be vanished. She still would have been in her thought process if Maan haven’t clicked his fingers in front of her eyes thus bringing her out from her thoughts only to find Maan looking at her with his raised brows as if asking what’s wrong.


“Are you real?” Before she could know question shoots out from her mouth making Maan to laugh out loudly which was soon joined by her laughter who was feeling so stupid to ask such question.


“Yes, I am 100% real and I am sure if not before but this time I had definitely given you a heart attack.” Maan said between his fit of laughter and for the first time Geet had admired his carefree laugh. How much handsome he looks with that smile on his face but then he looks handsome in all ways, she thought and then mentally whacked herself for her own thought. They were still on their Laughter riot when Chotu comes back with their orders thus causing them to sober down.


“Now that’s the real food. Isn’t it?” Maan said as he looked at the order; Hot Laccha Paranthas, with buckets full of Dal Makhani and Shahi Paneer making Geet to smile too. She doesn’t know if it’s a coincidence or pre-planned but the order is her favorite but whatever it is she is loving it. In fact she is loving each and every happening after last night since the tym she has met him, she thought as she looked at Maan who was relishing his food like a small child. Within minutes all the containers were empty and the plated were licked clean as if they were starving from ages.


“Ab bas, I need my bed and a warm quilt and doze off! Brilliant start to a great day. Isn’t it?” Maan said as he stretched his arms out relaxing his muscles while Chotu cleaned their table.


“True” Geet said with a tinge of sadness in her voice which Maan was quick to catch. Sadness that she won’t be able to spend more time with him and sadness that she again had to go back to her gloomy house and gloomy life after spending such beautiful moments with him.


“Unless, of course… Ms. Geet has some other plans.” He said as he leant forward with his last line making Geet’s breath to struck in her throat as she looked at his eyes which were looking at her to melt down.  She can feel her heart thumping loud in her chest nd she is sure that Maan too had heard it.


“Other Plans? No, not at all.” She finally able to say after finding back her lost voice and kind of sighed when she found Maan leaning back on his seat but still looking at her smiling.


“You had a long day and you really need to sleep. Thank you for this but I really can’t take more of your time.” Geet said though non-chalantly but deep in her heart she wished that he don’t agree to her statement as she really wanted to spend as much time as she can with him.


“You are not taking my time. I am willfully offering you mine! So… Shall we?”Maan thrust out his hand to pull her out of her chair after he paid the bill giving Geet no time to protest.


“Maan, I think I need to go now.” Geet tried once again as she knows that as much as she wants to spend more and more time with him but she can’t be selfish to take his more time when all he needs to take rest.


“Why? Somebody waiting?” Maan asked as he raised up his one brow while giving her his killing smirk.


“No, but…”


“Then just shut up and let’s go. Want to catch a movie?” Maan suggested as they made their way towards the car.


“I don’t know… Ummm… New York?” she said as she shrugged her shoulders.


“Okay then New York! Will you drive?”  He offered while Geet looked at him surprised. Is he really asking her to drive his expensive car?


“I… I can’t drive! Not that thing” She said all unsure. She’s definitely not into the idea of damaging his car when she knows that she can’t afford even its headlight. But seems Maan is in no mood to give up this soon.


“Have a license?” he asked yet again while Geet just rolled over her eyes seeing his stubbornness.


“Yes… but…”


“Here take this.” He didn’t let her complete instead threw the keys to her giving her no room for argument.


She looked at the key and the four buttons on it all of which seems to equally capable of opening the car but to her everything is alien as she had never drove such car before nor even open it. She pressed one and nothing happened. She looked at Maan for help only to find him looking at her smirking and gesturing her to open it. She asked her head when realize that he’ll not help at all and pressed all the buttons and to her surprise the car opened. She looked at car amazed and then back to Maan as if not believing that she had actually opened it while Maan was giving her the look like saying“See I told you” to which Geet could only smile before they both got in the car with Geet in the driving seat this tym.


“These things are little funny Isn’t it?” Maan chuckled as he put on his seat belt while Geet pouted cutely seeing him making fun of her

“Shut up. Whatever happened to insert and open technique” she said as she put on her seat belt.

“They can have many connotations actually?” Maan said winking making Geet to open her mouth wide listening to his double meaning words.

“Dirty Mind” She whacked him playfully on his arm making Maan to laugh out loud.

“Thank you for the honor, your highness” He said as he bowed down dramatically making Geet to shake her head on his childishness.

“Whatever” She muttered as she put in the key. Even she didn’t know that why and how she became so comfortable with him that too only after knowing him for just few hours but whatever the reason is she’s loving this change in her. He really came like a breath of fresh air in her life to make it more beautiful; she thought as she turned the key and gave it too much making Maan to cringe at first then smiled while Geet just made a sorry face smiling nervously.

“I told you I can’t drive this.” Geet said as she raised her hand up in the air in surrender.

“You can” Maan said firmly in order to motivate her while Geet just rolled over her eyes.

“Ya of course! I am used to driving Porsche with someone like you sitting next to me.” Geet said sarcastically and instantly bit her tongue realizing what she has said.

“Excuse me!” Maan said as he raised up his brow while Geet just gave him a nervous smile.

“Nothing. Just Shut up.” She said looking everywhere but him while Maan just smiled at her childishness. It’s good that she’s opening up to him without feeling awkward.

“I am warning you once again, if I bang this thing into anything you know I can’t afford even its head light. So it is your loss.” Geet warned yet again hoping that he would change his mind but Maan was hell adamant  

“Dad’s” He said non chalantly in order to correct her while Geet could only sighed heavily as if in surrendering the argument. She definitely can’t win from this guy, can she, she thought as she shot a quick prayer to her Babaji before trying once again.

The first try was a horrendous one but thereafter she did better with Maan continuously guiding her and motivating her. At many instances there was slight brush of their hands or his warm breath fell on her face as he moved closer in order to guide her or help her with gears and every time both of their heartbeats raised especially of Geet’s whose heart seems to be out of control right now. Had not it’s about being driving the car, Geet would have been lost herself in his eyes but then the rational part of her mind always kept her reminding that this is not the right time for that, may be after sometime when she may be in his arms so close in his bed or may be the back seat of the car, she thought and then immediately whacked herself mentally for her erotic thoughts as she concentrate on the road ahead while giving her stupid thoughts a halt. Changing gears on time and driving smoothly, a feather touch and the car was already doing eighty. She is not that bad Driver, she thought as she looked at Maan who was looking at her smilingly as if being so proud of her achievement making her to smile automatically. He really had that aura around him that seems to burn all the negative thoughts and energy surrounding her, she thought as she smiled at him sweetly before continuing her task of Driving.



Here in Geet’s flat all three of them slumped on the ground after composing themselves from the laughter riot breathing heavily. Meera sat between them and put her hands on both Vicky’s and Yash’s heads which were on her shoulder as she patted them knowing very well what’s going on in their mind as the same thing was going in her mind too.

“Missing her?” She asked softly while still patting them.

“Very much” Yash said slowly as he kept his eyes closed in order to fight back his tears.

“Never missed anybody like this. It would have been so nice to have her here today.” Vicky consented as he sighed heavily.

“Ya… it would have been so nice… The four of us… on the new years’ eve… It would have been so ideal…” Meera said making Vicky’s eyes to widen in surprise as some realization sunk in him.

“What?” Vicky asked as he instantly sat up while Yash and Meera looked at him incrodously not understanding what happened to him all of a sudden.

“Arey why are you both looking at me as if I am some alien. Don’t you guys remember? Today is 31st of Dec.” Realization sunk in to Meera and Yash as they registered Vicky’s words and cursed themselves to forget this day

“Oh yeah… Totally skipped. Great! Now I miss her even more” Yash added as the three of the sat in the circle talking and remembering the beautiful tym four of them spend together.

“Hey, I have an idea” Meera chirped in between making Yash and Vicky to look at her gesturing to go ahead.

“Let’s decorate this place! What say a sorry plus a New Year Party? And then when Geet will come she’ll be so surprised and so happy to see this. What say?” Meera said excitedly while Yash and Vicky consented in equal enthusiasm.

“Yeah brilliant idea. Let’s also call Pari over here. She’ll be so happy to…”Vicky stopped in mid when he realized what he had said in excitement and both Meera and Vicky looked at Yash worried for his reaction. Just now everything went fine between them and none of them wanted to messed it up all again.

“It’s ok guys. I am ok with Pari. Seriously.” Yash’s words brought some relief to them as he assured them but still they both looked at him silently making Yash to roll over his eyes realizing that they are still not convinced. Hence to prove them he instantly took out his cell and dialed a number while Vicky and Meera looked at him confused.

“Hi Pari” Both Meera’s and Vicky’s eyes widen in shock as they realize whom he had called.

“Ya.. Whose it?”Yash heard Pari speaking from other side and close his eyes in order to formulate some sensible sentence. It’s been so long that he had talked to her then forget about talking nicely.

“It’s Yash.”

“Oh Hi Yash! It’s so nice to…” She couldn’t complete herself when Yash interrupted her in between.

“Pari can you come here right now… I mean we all are at Geet’s place… We are planning for a small party… So can you come here… You had seen Geet’s place right… See you in twenty minutes then… Bye” Yash said all in one breath and instantly cuts the call taking a sigh of relief while Pari looked at her cellphone not registering what she just heard but when she did a smile broke out on her face. Finally things are falling back to its place, she thought ad she instantly get up to get ready to go to Geet’s place.

Here Yash took a deep breath of relief as if he had just won a marathon and opened his eyes only to find Vicky and Meera looking at him numbly with their jaws dropped down.

“What?” Yash’s words brought broke their trance and they both started laughing loudly with Yash continuously asking “What, What” confusingly but their laughs were nowhere to subside.

“OK so Pari is coming right?” Meera asked after a while composing herself to which Yash just nodded saying that she may be on her way.

“Great then we should start preparing everything. I’ll go and arrange for food and drinks for ourselves.” Vicky said as he flicked up his car keys and in no time he was out of Geet’s apartment before anyone could say anything leaving Meera and Yash smiling at each other.

“Hhhmmm so c’mon let’s first start with the cleaning. We need to get the house in place.” Meera said with both her hand on her waist letting out a deep sigh after Vicky left and stared at Yash.

“Don’t tell me you want me to get all this cleaned up.” Yash’s eyes widen in horror as he registered the look on Meera’s face.

“As a matter of fact, I do.” Meera said in the tone of finality making Yash to cringe his nose in disgust as he imagined himself cleaning this messy house.

“Arey, we will do it together na. What will you do if I do this?” Yash tried cooing Meera as he hugged her from behind while Meera just nudged her elbow to his stomach lightly understanding very well that he’s trying to flatter her.

“We need to decorate this place. Balloons and all that. I will go and get those.” Meera said as he smiled cunningly washing away the color from Yash’s face.

“Please let me go. You will have to walk so far to get that.” Yash literally pleaded like a small child while Meera could just chuckle at his behavior.

“As if you care!” she said as she turned to leave.

“I do! Please let me go.” Yash literally begged this time but Meera paid no heed.

“Shut up! Stop behaving like a child Yash. I am going now and by the time I come this should be clean.” She instructed strictly and left leaving Yash behind looking at the soiled floor and heavenwards with a pleading face.


“Take a left from there” Maan pointed looking at the direction. It’s been quite a sometime they were driving and Geet was actually doing very good.

“Maan are you sure you want to watch the movie?” Geet asked while driving making Maan to look at him confusingly.

“Why? You don’t want to? You chose the movie right?” Maan furrowed his brows  in confusion while Geet felt that she could just eat him raw such cute he was looking in that expression.

“No, I mean I can drive this for three hours you know. You go and watch the movie.” She laughed while Maan was just lost in her musical laugh. She really looks pretty when she laughs this freely, he thought as he admired her lovingly.

“You seriously want to?” Maan asked once he came out from his trance

“Ya, I mean I can. It is the first time and probably the last time I am sitting in an expensive car like this. So you see I want to make out the most of this opportunity.” She said winking while Maan just shaked his head.

“Good for me that you like driving it.” Maan’s statement made Geet to look at him questioning asking “Why So”

“I always dreamt of date where my girl would drive!” Maan said as he let out a deep sigh leaning back on seat.

“Your girl?” Geet said with a scorn. Though that’s a different thing that her brain erased everything else to accommodate this memory of her this tym with him and make several copies of it.

“Ummm… I mean the girl with me…” For the first time Maan fumbled with his words and this time for a change Geet enjoyed his nervousness. Why should its always him to make her conscious around him even she can do the same.

“And what about the word “Date”?”  Geet asked thoroughly enjoying his nervousness.

“Yes… That is true. It is a date, isn’t it?” Maan asked as he leaned towards her looking straight into her eyes. Hell! This man knows how to make her weak on her knees.

“Okay, I will give that one to you.” Geet said as she composed herself and looking back at the road while Maan lean back on his seat smirking.

“One question” He heard Geet asking and gave her a look of “Go Ahead” while pointing to a direction that leads to a highway. She was now driving at ninety kilometers an hour now.

“How many “my girls” have been there?” She said as she quote the word “my girls” with her fingers.

“Hhhmmm… You wouldn’t want to know.” Maan’s answer was totally unexpected by Geet. Even though she knows that there may be many girls in his life or hell he may be bedding many girls every night. A guy like him can’t be single but still she wished him to answer opposite to what he answered right now may be like “You are the only girl in my life” she thought as she looked straight.

“Okay.” She clenched the steering wheel tight in order to control her anger. Of course she’s feeling jealous but don’t know why. May be she don’t want to lose such a handsome and rich guy to someone else yes this is the only reason, she thought and then consented with her own thought.

 “But you are the first one to drive my car!” Maan whispered softly in her ear making Geet’s heartbeat to rise rapidly but she just maintained the straight face.

“Thanks for the privilege.” She said wryly trying her best to maintain her cold posture but she knows that she was melting every second and unknown to her Maan was enjoying this state of her each and every second.

“You are welcome. But tell me one thing, Are you jealous?” Maan asked raising his brows as he looked at her keenly trying to gauge her expressions even though he knows the answer.

“Of course not! Why would I be?” Geet knows that she just said a plain lie but he shouldn’t know this right? But unknown to her Maan could read each and every expression of hers and he could see through her lie very well.

“May be you have started liking me?” Maan said as a matter of fact and smiled while looking at her.

“Not at all.” Geet knows that she had lied yet again when all she wanted at that moment to thrust her head out from the sun roof and shout out to the world “This guy is mine”.

“Okay, then why are you with me right now?” Maan probed once again while Geet looked at him huffing in anger. This guy is not going to leave this matter so easily, she thought as she tried to formulate some sensible sentence.

“Well I have many reasons. First, I am jobless. Second, I have nothing to do. And third, I am hoping to use you to get myself a job somewhere.” Geet patted herself mentally for her brilliant answer while winking at him with her last sentence.

“How mean Geet. You truly hurted me.” Maan said as he faked a hurt look while keeping hand on his heart while Geet just chuckle at his nautanki.

“That is how I am.” Geet said as she shrugged her shoulders.

“I like the way you are.” Maan said in trance as he kept his gaze fixed on her face but immediately looked away when found her looking at him.

“Are you flirting with me?” Geet asked raising his brows making Maan to give her his killer smirk.

“Depends. Is it working?” He asked

“No.” Geet said non-chalantly even though she knows that it is working more than he can ever imagine.

“Then, I am not.” Maan said as he raised his hands up in air in surrender while Geet just shaked her head.

“You know what; I have heard these dialogues somewhere.” She asked as she tries to remember where she has heard it.

“Get Smart, the movie.” Maan answered while Geet smiled finally remembering the name of movie.

“You have seen that movie?” she asked

“I watch every movie that comes out.” He said as a matter of fact.

“Why did you miss that movie then? One we were going to see.” Geet asked as curiosity seeped in her

“I have seen it.” Maan’s statement made Geet to look at him confusingly.

“But it released today.” She asked in a confused manner not getting head and tale of his statement.

“Special screening. John Abrahim and friends.” He said as he looked at her winking and smiled when found her looking at him with her mouth wide open realizing that he had yet again given her another heart attack. He closed her mouth with his hand and asked her to drive on to which she just nodded absent mindedly but her mind was continuously contemplating on his words.

Who is he and how much actually rich he is? And most importantly if he’s this rich then why is he wasting his tym with her and why not some super model or some other girl of his standard. So many questions and there are no answers so she guessed that it’s better to get with the flow. Who knows destiny had something better store in for her, she thought as she kept aside all her thoughts and continued driving unknown to what Destiny had actually planned for her which will make her life beautiful and worth living.

Ok… ummm… i updated Finally… well wont give any excuses as i know that none of you will believe but trust me guys life has become hell hectic with job and studies… but promise will try to squeeze sometym out just for you guys,,,, Talking about job well i got a new job guys… going to join from tomorrow so here’s my treat for you all… Love you all for your Bada wala Support and patience… Truly blessed to have you guys…

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MG OS: “Adhoori Si Ek Kahaani”

Hello Lovely peoplesBig smileBig smileBig smile… Guess who is backShocked… Yes its meLOL… i am finally back to forumEmbarrassed… ok i know that you all must be waiting with jutis and chappals for  me becoz of my sudden disappearanceOuch Ouch  but very few people over here knows the reason behind itEmbarrassed… But that doesnt mean that i forgot you allEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed… No!!!! Never  Ok i wont pakau you all but instead presenting to you all my new OS… But but but i am telling you all beforehand thats its strictly going to be one part OS so please i request you all that please dont ask me to write another part of it… ok so now without making you all wait for long here’s my new OS… do let me know how’s it… “Fingers Crossed”… Enjoy Reading!!!!


“Has the bus E104 already Left?” She breathlessly reached the bus stop and asked the man standing there who was taken by surprise, as if she asked him for his wallet.

No” he replied after a pause making her to sigh in relief.

“BTW I saw your tag, do you also work for Khurana’s Constructions?” She asked after she returned to her normal breathing speed..

“Yes I Do.” He replied in his strong yet polite voice.

Dressed in neat formal clothes, he was looking absolutely breath taking with his stubble on his face, sharp jaw line, olive tanned complexion and dark chocolate brown eyes which looks to melt her; he looked like a well cultured man. She quickly glanced at his fingers, No Rings, Phew, she thought but what’s with these short answers. She wondered if he was simply shy by nature or just plain arrogant. But then she was also not one of those who would give up easily. There’s something strange with her nature and that is when someone ignores her, she tend to get more attracted to her. It’s a classic flaw introduced to her by the naughty Almighty, but still could not resist talking to him further.

“Hi, my name is Geet, I joined KC recently” she extended her right hand hoping to involve him in a conversation.

“Oh, that’s good to know, I am Armaan” he rendered rather a weak handshake and did not bother to extend the conversation.

“So which department you work for, Amy? I guess I can call you that, right?” she continued, moving closer to him. Wow! He smells great as well, she thought as she took in her smell. She was hoping to end up having a couple of dates, if not more.

“I am in the training department; actually, I am one of the coordinators.” He replied in as formal manner as he could, making Geet to pout cutely. Can’t he just reply in a pleasing manner?

“And ya Amy is fine” He continued after a small pause making Geet to flash her sweet and charming smile.

And with those words he looks into her eyes for the first time with a slight smile and for her that’s all it takes. Once someone looks into her eyes, they got lost as if they are hypnotized by a magician. The eye contact lasted exactly for five seconds before their brief interesting little moment was abruptly ended by the arrival of the bus. Geet looked up to her Babaji and cursed him umpteenth time, complaining him as to why he has to break such a lovely moment but it seems that her Babaji is in a mood of teasing her and now was laughing on her plight. She twisted her lips and get on the bus and Needless to say sat next to him making him to look at her surprised but then he just shake his head and started looking outside the window while Geet was patiently waiting for him to start the conversation while counting the numbers 1 to 10 backwards in her mind. After the brief Quixotic moment at the bus stop, she was sure that he would be the one to restart the conversation but then why is he not restarting yet, even her numbers are going to end now, she thought as she tapped her foot waiting for his turn.

“Well, How about you, Geet? Which department do you work for and how do you find our KC?” he finally initiated the conversation and Geet did a little Bhangra in her mind but to him just gave a small smile.

There you Go! It was the magic of her Hazel eyes and her charm that was putting those words in his mouth, she thought as she giggled inwardly before replying to his question. She gave him more details than he asked for, talking about her department, work colleague and so on making Armaan to widen his eyes seeing the capacity of speaking so much of this girl  but he did not interrupted rather just let her speak while he listened with great interest. She even hinted  that she is the girl to party with and can be available anytime he wants but she could also sense that he was a shy and quiet person.

Both didn’t realized or rather she didn’t realized when the time passed by and when they reached to their desired destination until the conductor of the bus told them about it. Time is heartless; when you want to move slower, it flies and when you are waiting for something important, it crawls. Same was the case with Geet as though they travelled for almost 12 Kms. And for about 35 minutes, it felt like less than 5 minutes. But then everything has to come to an end as so as their meeting. They shaked hand as they got down from their bus before they reached to their office and went to their respective Desks. The day had started on the bright note for both of them especially for Geet who was looking forward for many more such meetings with him.



 After she reached to office, she went to her cabin, checked her e-mails, had coffee with her colleagues and then returned back to her cabin. Being a new member, she had very less responsibilities to handle. In fact she was almost through with her day’s work within first couple of hours and now she has nothing more to do except of Day dreaming about Amy. His face, his voice, his attitude and especially his eyes was coming in front of her eyes again and again and thus was driving her crazy and she just blushed at the thought that how would it felt if he held her in his muscular arms while looking into her eyes deeply. Where Her crazy mind was recollecting the time spent with Amy, her logical mind was telling her that it’ll take more effort from her side to make things work between them, she thought as she mentally started making ideas as to how to make things work between them when her thought flow was disturbed by the loud voices she heard from the corner of the floor where she had her cabin.

She came out from her cabin to see what was happening when she saw A Muscular man in his late twenties, with his shirt torn was walking out furiously as if he’ll kill anyone who’ll come in his way right now. Curiosity kills a cat nd same was the case with Geet as her Curiosity took over her and she went to investigate after which she came to know that he was involved in an argument with one of the staff members and had left the scene furious. She saw him going towards men’s room and casually walked towards same direction all the way wondering how to approach him and what to ask him when he suddenly came out and looked at her strangely making her to give him a nervous and weak smile. He looked very confused as if he didn’t know where he was and where he wanted to go and Being a responsible employee, she decided to stepped in.


“Excuse Me Sir, may I help you?” she asked him looking at his face sweetly

“Er… I don’t know. I am not sure why I am here. Is there any artists’ association or something like that?” he asked in his baritone voice as he looked at her confused while rubbing his temple.

So she was right, he was indeed confused – a lot more than she had thought but then he looked so cute with that confused expression on her face that she wanted to pull his cheeks right now, she thought as she looked at him dreamily but then immediately whacked herself realizing that he needs her help. As she looked at him closely she realized that there was no mention of the events that had transpired minutes earlier therefore she chose to carry out with the momentum.

“Yes, but not in this office. It’s just a couple of blocks away that. I can help you with that.” She offered her help to him mentally wishing that he would agree to it so she can get some more time to spend with him and seems that her Babaji was in good mood at that time as she saw him flashing his killer smile to her for which any girl would die for.

“Oh! That’s really so sweet of you. BTW I am Angad a columnist for one of the magazines, called “The Impression”.” He introduced himself by extending his left hand.

“Hi, I am Geet. I…” She couldn’t complete her sentence for she was dumbstruck by their handshake. What a firm handshake, strong and confident unlike the one she had with Armaan in the morning. She could see the veins distinctly visible on his strong forearm. Either he was very angry or he hits the gym regularly, she thought she checked him top to bottom before coming back to her senses realizing how openly she’s drooling over him.

“I am glad to help you. I was going out for lunch anyway. So you are a columnist for “The Impression”? What do you write about Angad?”She finally found her lost voice back as she unwillingly ended the handshake and walked with him towards the exit door.

In between she had gently mentioned for about having lunch as well as she was curious to see if he was sharp enough to catch the hint she’s giving to him because she had heard that usually Physically strong people are usually dumb but he proved her wrong with his next sentence of his which made her to literally jump in joy and excitement

“It’s mostly philosophy Geet. We can talk it about it more over the Lunch” He replied with his head tilted slightly towards left as he looked at her with his intense gaze that seems to melt her down right then and there making Geet to feel like thousand Butterflies running in the pit of her stomach with the way he was looking at her. His left hand was stretched out to open the door for her and there was a smile on his face which read “You are so Gorgous!”


It was hard to believe that he was the same angry young man from a few minutes ago for he seems to be completely contrast of what she had seen him few minutes ago but nevertheless it was good for her only as she would rather prefer his sweet nature rather than the aggressive one she had witnessed few minutes before. He took her to a Posh five star restaurant which was expensive but was worth it for they really had a very good time together talking  about anything or everything as they relished their lunch which was of course tasty. But more than food Geet loves the company of this Angry Young Man sitting in front of her earning a deep sigh of every girl present in the restaurant and Geet was sure that they all were cursing her for having this opportunity with him while they can just see him from far.

 Oh! She felt so lucky right now as if she’s having lunch with superstar or something. But then he’s a superstar for her, isn’t he? He asked her after lunch and clearing the bills that whether she was in a hurry to get back to office to which she assured him that she’s not and once again earned a killer smile from him in a response. So they walked all the way back instead of hiring a taxi while chatting throughout the way. She left him at the Vintage Artists’ association once they reached to their destination and returned back to her office before thanking each other for the lovely time they had. Though Geet was looking forward for such more meetings with him and she was sure that her Babaji will definitely listen to her, she thought as she returned back to her office and resumed her work while continuously thinking about Angad.



After a rather eventful day, she was sitting in her cabin playing solitaire on her computer while continuously glancing at her watch which showed 6.10 p.m. The staffs were starting to get dispersed while she was waiting for her cellphone to buzz. It was strange as usually it beeps between 6 p.m. to 6.07 p.m but it didn’t happen today. Before her thought would have processed in some wrong direction, her phone beeped and the message appeared on the screen:

“Come out Baby, I’ll be there in 5 minutes”

It reads and involuntarily a smile appeared on her face as she gave a blow kiss in reply before packing up her things and heading outside and within exact 5 minutes a black Mercedes arrived and she found the door of the passenger seat being opened indicating her to step in and she did the same and kissed the person sitting on the driver’s seat on his forehead more in relief making him to smile widely for he could feel what was going inside her heart with the way she had kissed him and looked at her while raising his brows as of asking what happen

“I was kind of worried Maan when I didn’t found your text at the usual time.” She confessed her fear slowly making him to chuckle slightly at her caring and loving attitude. How much she loves him and cares for his well-being, he thought as he cupped her face before kissing softly on her forehead.

“I am perfectly alright Jaan. You don’t have to worry for anything ok.” He assured her while giving her his famous and killer smile making Geet too smiles slightly while nodding her head.


“Anyways, how was your day sweetheart?” He asked with the same enthusiasm, same undying love and same everlasting care as he had for her always making Geet’s heart to swell in Pride, respect and Love for him.

“Wonderful Honey like always. Let’s grab some dinner on the way.”She said as Maan started the engine driving back to their home.

“Sure dear, anyways we don’t have time to cook tonight. Oh! I am all excited about our big trip tomorrow. Finally you can meet my childhood Friend.” Maan said enthusiastically making Geet to smile weakly while he continued telling her all the plans he had made for the trip. Once they stopped in front of the McDonalds, Maan ordered two Happy Meals for takeaway while Geet was waiting beside him patiently.

What would you like to have as a drink, sir?” The person at the counter asked while entering the details in his system.

“I’ll take organic Milk. How about you sweety?” Maan asked as he turned to look at Geet who was looking at the happy couples around her 

“Diet Coke.” She replied with a smile before resuming back her precious work of admiring the happy couples around her.

“So one organic milk for me and a Diet Coke for my WIFE.He ordered before the counter boy took their order and within 10 minutes handed it over to them and they head back to their home after collecting their order.



Once they reached home which was after whole 1 and a half hour thanks to the traffic; both got freshened up and ate their dinner discussing simultaneously on some random topics after which they settles down in the living room watching some sport in which Geet was barely interested in but it seems her Loving husband very much excited for it. He tried to explain her how different rules apply in different formats while she acted as if she cared. She was nodding to everything but was hardly listening for she was busy admitting her sexy and handsome husband. She saw his handsome face brightened with Excitement when he saw one of the rules was particularly tricky. She can do anything or lose everything for that one smile on his face. She loves him more than he can ever imagine. Just like the Sky has no limits same like that her Love for him had no limits. Just like the starts were countless same like that her Love for him is endless. It’s beyond his imagination how much she loves him and will continue loving him no matter what.

They finished Packing after Dinner and watching TV and Maan was as excited as a little kid whose summer holidays were about to start after a long-and-hard exams while Geet could only chuckle at his excitement.  She really had a hard time in controlling him and making him to sleep by convincing him that they’ll get late in the morning for their trip if he won’t sleep now just like a mother do to her child and it indeed worked as Maan laid down on bed and went to sleep but not before Kissing his Lovely and Darling wife passionately promising her that next day will be the best day of her life to which Geet just smiled and laid next to him while keeping her head on his chest, a place where she found her solace always.


It was past midnight when Geet gently disentangled herself from Maan’s hold before getting down from the bed. She looked over her shoulder to make sure that his sleep was not disturbed and sighed in relief when found him in a deep sleep. She wears her robe over her nighty, poured herself a glass of Red Bordeaux wine, opened the balcony Door of their room and sat on the chair kept into the balcony staring out at the dark sky. She was feeling totally exhausted right now and really need a fresh air to calm herself down and give some peace to her aching heart. It takes a hell lot out of you when you meet different people and try to connect with each of them emotionally and she did the same today, she thought as she once again looked back at the sky and found it still dark. Even some of the stars which were usually visible were missing today. It was completely dark just like her life.

She took a couple of large sips and revisited her day in her mind. So it was a day of Three persons, usually it would be two, but today it was three, she thought as she took one more sip and leaned back into the chair while keeping her legs on the table in front. A cold Breeze has picked up and unknowingly her eyes got moist and she gulped down her sorrow with her wine as she once again recollected the incidence of the whole day. Amy, Angad, Maan – She’s living a fake life. She’s going down to the road where she don’t know where her destination is but still she’s walking without any idea where her destiny will take her now. But then it was her only who had choose this life so now there is no looking back, she thought as Dr. Shashank’s words crossed in her mind as she closed her eyes and took a deep breath as her mind walked down the memory lane of that unfortunate day that had changed their lives forever




“You have to make a choice Geet. Either you can leave Maan over here and we’ll take care of him like any other patient, or you can take him with you.” It sounded insensitive not only to Geet but to anyone but then Doctors can’t be diplomatic.

“He’s the only one for me Uncle. I don’t have anyone apart from him in my life. I love him and I want to take him with me Uncle.” Geet fought back her tears as she spoke while Shashank just looked at the girl sitting in front of her who is breaking by every passing second by still kept herself trong for the sake of Maan.

“I understand the emotions behind those words Geet, but you have to understand that it’s very complicated. We have observed him over a month now and he has clearly shown us two distinct personalities. Some days even three. The accident has made him develop an MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder). Though it was an accident but Maan thinks that he’s responsible for the death of his childhood friend Armaan. In some of the situations where he is put under stress, there is another angry personality, Angad. As we discussed earlier, I have no idea where this personality has come from. But the most important and worse thing is that Maan’s memory is limited only to the day before the accident. Now you tell me how I would allow you to take him with you in these circumstances.” Dr. Shashank explained everything in detail in order to make her realize that how much risk she is going to take with her act. He had always considered her as his own daughter even though she’s the child of his late best friend

“I know Uncle, and I completely agree with you but even you know na that multiple personality disorders have been successfully handled by treating every personality with equal respect and attention. Proper love and care can make things work right.” She argued with a hope while her eyes were continuously shedding tears seeing how her small heavenly paradise has fallen apart.

“Yeah, but you don’t know what you are signing up for, Geet. There can be more personalities than we have seen so far. Angad can be more dangerous and destructive or Armaan can be more reserve and quiet. Anything can happen Geet. It demands round-the-clock attention. How are you going to manage it all alone along with managing his business too? You are not understanding but you are putting the people around him in trouble as well. Geet, you are“Flirting” dangerously with life!”   Dr. Shashank replied agitatedly as he saw her stubbornness of taking Maan with her. No way he’s going to let her play such a risky game with her life.

 “I understand uncle but what’s the life without an impossible challenge? I love him more than my own life and I know that my love will give me enough strength to handle all this. I can do this as my love is my biggest strength. I’ll make sure that he’ll get all the attention he needs and anyways isn’t it great that I will get the chance to meet two different persons every day.” Though she said the last line jokingly but Shashank can sense the hidden pain behind that smile but more that that he was amused to see the amount of unconditional love she had for Maan that she’s ready to play such a risky game with her own life but not ready to leave Maan alone. His head bowed down in front of her irrecoverable and unconditional Love and strength.

“Geet, it’s not easy. You have to keep him engaged in every personality, you have to care for him, give attention to him, making life interesting for him in each of his personality. Just think once again.” Dr. Shashank tried one more time but he knows that it’s useless yet he tried hoping that Geet will understand.

“Uncle, I love Maan and I love him in every form. I love the challenge of making him fall in love with me every day or rather twice a day. I can bear anything or everything for him but I can’t bear a single second without him.” Geet replied in a determine way and Dr. Shashank knows that he had already lost the argument nd hence has to bow down in front of her wish.

Geet knew that it was not for a day or a month. It can take years or worse it might never end but still she’s ready to take any risk for him but will not leave him alone in this. They had promised each other in front of the holy fire that they’ll be with each other in every good and bad times while taking the vows of marriage then how can she break her promise, how can she leave Maan alone in all this when she knows that even Maan had done the same if the condition were reverse. No matter what anyone says but she had trust on her love on their Love nd hence she knows one day her Babaji will definitely had mercy on her and he’ll give her back her Maan, he can’t be this heartless to take away the only person she had in her life but till then she was ready to go through this test in which her Babaji had put her into.


It was not easy for her as she had to do a lot of preparations before taking Maan from the Hospital. But thanks to some of their wonderful friends like Adi, Pinki, Vicky, Pari, Jay and Meera and the loyal staff of KC she was able to do everything smoothly. She had spoke personally to every employee in KC to carry out this drama and they being the loyal employees of Maan were ready to do anything for him. She also checked with the Vintage Artists’ Association about occasional visits whenever Angad comes up and they were ready to help her in any manner they can. But more than that she had to prepared her mind to act, to involve and to love each and every personality of Maan without breaking Down even a bit and she knows that she can do this as Maan is her everything and she can do anything for him even die for him if it costs his well being but will not leave him alone in any cost.


   ************~~~~~~Back to Present~~~~~~***********


The cold breeze had now become even colder and had broken the chain of her thoughts bringing her back into the present. It’s been more than 2 months now and each day of her is a challenge but she loves to take this challenge every second if it’ll bring back her Maan to her, she thought as she looked around herself and smiled sadly realizing that they had spent many of their most romantic and memorable moments here in the balcony, sometimes even made the love under the stars but today all it seems to be just like a beautiful dream. How she wished those days to come back again where she was in the arms of the person she loves the most and don’t have to worry for anything as he was there for her.

But she knows that those days will come back for sure may be she has to wait it for her entire lifetime but those days will come back as she had trust on their love on their sacred bond of marriage and hence she’s ready to wait for him not only this lifetime but in every lifetime and till then she’ll keep on “Flirting” with his each personality, with her own life, she thought as she took a deep breath before looking at her wine glass only to realize it was empty. The tears had soaked her cheeks and she got up from chair with a new zeal and new determination as she checked the time only to find that it was nearing dawn.

She smiled slightly as she thought that very soon the darkness of her life will also end and there will be a new dawn to her life, to her Love, she thought as she went inside, washed her face and went to bed settling beside Maan cuddling into him close seeking his warmth and solace as she knows that she can gain her strength from him only. She had to get ready again to meet Armaan the following morning and for that she needs strength which only he and his love can give to her, she thought as she closed her eyes and slipped into her dream world with her Maan.



“Has the bus E104 already left?” Geet breathlessly reached the bus stop and asked the man, Armaan standing over there.

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“Mitra” ~Part 9~

                          Part 9:
“Always remember beta that your Papa is always there for you. You can share with me whatever you want”


Her father’s words ring back in her mind making her heart to cry even more as she sobbed bitterly feeling all alone without any support or companion in this pain.


“Jhooth kaha tha Aapne. You lied to me that you’ll always be there with me. See you had left me alone to face all this. Why had you left me alone Papa? Why everyone had left me alone? First Maan then you nd now Maa too. Am I this much Bad? Please Papa, Please come back. I can’t bear this anymore; I can’t handle all this alone now. Everyone had left me alone; Maan, you, Man; everyone. I am tired now, I wanted to sleep peacefully. Please help me Papa. I can’t see Maa like this anymore. I can’t stay all alone like this anymore. I need you Papa, I need Maa, I need Maan. I need every one of you. Please free me from this pain or else call me to you too. I can’t suffer all this alone anymore now. Please come back Papa. Please come back. I am all alone.”Geet cried her heart out to her father while looking up in the sky as her body wrecked with endless sobs while crying bitterly


“Laddoo”she heard a familiar yet soothing voice behind her as she was crying bitterly thus making her to look back only to find Maan standing over there all amused nd worried for her as he looked at her both in disbelief nd pain.


“Maan” Geet whimpered as she ran towards him nd next moment she just submitted herself in the solace of the arms of the person who is her lyf crying bitterly nd Maan too enveloped her in the loving folds of his embrace absorbing all her pain nd miseries as she cried her heart out in his arms because no matter how much she run away from the fact but at the end of the day his arms are her only solace where she’ll be safe from all the pain nd troubles in this nd nothing absolutely nothing could change this fact not in this lyftym; not in any lyftym.




Maan was waiting for Geet from past 3 hours after he came back from Mumbai branch of KC but to his surprise Geet was not back yet. It was strange, she should have been back by now as its been long since she has gone, he thought as he fished out his cell phone to call her but to his surprise she didn’t picked up the call. 1 time… 2 times… 3 times… 20 times… But everytym his call went unanswered. Fear gripped his heart as he felt her being in some danger nd without a second he dashed out from her flat nd drove towards the hospital where Geet had went to see her Friend’s MIL.


He almost barged inside the room of the hospital where he had seen Geet last shocking the attendant of the lady to the core seeing a stranger barging into their room lyk this, but Maan had always left all the logical ideologies back whenever it comes to his Laddoo. He instantly recognizes the lady as she was there in the morning too. Ignoring all the weird nd irritating look she was giving him, Maan instantly enquired about Geet nd was shocked to know that she had left from there long back. Then where is she nd why she haven’t been back home by now, he thought as he left from there dejected after muttering a thanks to the lady who just looked at him amusingly. He kicked the tyre of the car hard in frustration as he tried her cell yet again only to be met with the same response. By every passing minute the fear of her being in some sort of danger was gripping in his heart making him to lose his scared to death. He cursed himself umpteenth tym for not taking Meera’s number or for leaving her alone over here. God knows where she is now, he thought as he pushed back his hairs in helplessness.


“Where are you Laddoo? Please just be safe wherever you are” Maan muttered as unknown to him tears made way down his eyes with the fear of losing his Laddoo yet again when suddenly something struck his brain. Why haven’t he thought of it before? Such a stupid he is, he thought as he quickly take out his phone nd opens his GPS system to trace Geet’s location nd his eyes twinkled in joy nd relief as he got the location of hers nd without wasting a minute he rushed inside his car nd drove towards the place where Geet is.


As he reached at the spot he could see Geet’s car being parked at a distance making him to sigh in relief but next moment that relief was all gone when he peeked inside the car nd found no Geet over there making him frown in confusion. He could see her cellphone lyieng carelessly on the dashboard giving him the answer why she haven’t picked up his calls but still the question is where is Geet? His instincts were saying that Geet is somewhere near only. He could feel her presence around him. He looked here nd there around himself when he saw a faint figure sitting near the lake far away nd it didn’t took him long to realize that its his Laddoo. And next moment he almost ran towards her but hen stopped dead in his tracks when he saw her crying bitterly. He couldn’t hear what she was saying except “Please come back Papa. Please come back. I am all alone” Nd then again crying bitterly.


Maan felt like someone had slit his heart ino thousand pieces seeing his Laddoo so broken nd shattered. He didn’t know why is she crying so bitterly, he didn’t know why is she saying that she’s all alone when he’s there with her all he knows that his Laddoo is in pain nd he’ll do anything to free her from that pain which had snatched the smile from her face. And then as if in trance he called out her name making her to look at him with her teary eyes making Maan to die thousand deaths nd as she came running down to him submitting herself in his embrace Maan instantly hides her in the safe vicinity of his arms where she’ll be safe forever from every pain in this world.


So now here he’s hugging his Laddoo tight to himself while rubbing her back to calm her down who was crying her heart out in the embrace of the person she loves the most in this world. Her each nd every tear were piercing his soul nd the worst part is that he don’t know the reason for her pain. He so wanted to know what’s bothering her, he so wanted to know what made her Laddoo to be so shattered lyk this but at that moment he could do nothing but to just hold her in his embrace saying sweet nothings to her to make her calm down.


“Ssshhh Laddoo, Don’t cry lyk this. Everything is gonna be ok. Don’t cry baby please.” Maan comforts her as he rubbed her back but his own voice was choking seeing her in so dishelved state.


“Sab mujhe chod ke chale gaye Maan. Everyone had left me. Koi nahi hai mere paas. I had become all alone. No one is there with me Maan. Why everyone had left me lyk this? What wrong I did to get this punishment? Am I this bad? Itni zyada buri hoon kya Main Maan? Why had it happened with me? Why everyone had left me alone lyk this Maan? Kyun?” Geet cried her heart out unknown to what all she’s speaking while Maan just rubbed her back listening to her agony. His own eyes burned with tears seeing her in this broken state but at that moment he could do nothing instead of hugging her close to him absorbing all her pain


“Sshhh Laddoo… It’s okay. You are not alone. Main hoon na tumhare paas, tumhara Maan. You are not alone baby. I was, am nd will always be there with you. I Promise you that I’ll never ever leave you alone. Trust me” Maan whispered softly in her hairs, placing a soft kiss over there as he hugged her closer to him while rubbing her back in a soothing manner while silently promising himself that he’ll never ever let her go from his lyf again and no matter what comes he’ll always be there to protect her from every harm even if it costs his lyf but he’ll not allow a single harm on her life


They remained in each other’s arm for god knows how long until Maan felt her cries getting subsided but she was still sobbing softly. He gently pulled her out from his embrace nd cupped her face wiping away her tears gently with his thumb while shaking his head in the gesture of “Don’t Cry”. Geet was all lost in the depth of his eyes that were showing the reflection of her pain in them like it use to show before but things were changed now nd so is her. Now she’s no more that same Geet neither he’s the same Maan but still at that moment this fact was there somewhere back in her mind about which she don’t even want to think right now as right now she just wanted to be in the embrace of the person she loves the most nd whose warmth was giving her solace soothing all the wounds of her heart.


“Laddoo what’s wrong? Why are you so broken? What has happened in your lyf that had shattered you like this? Won’t you tell it to your Maan? I said Na that I’ll always be there with you then why are you worrying for anything? Tell me Laddoo what happen?” Maan’s soft voice laced with concern and care melted Geet’s heart and for once she decided to put down all her guards nd tell him everything that has been happening in her lyf since the tym she went away from his lyf.


“Maan wo… I… Dev…” Her lips trembled as she tried to speak her heart out after gathering much courage making Maan to look at her curiously in the anticipation of what she’s going to say next


“Geet” Both Maan nd Geet turned to look at the source of voice and her eyes went wide in shock and horror seeing Dev standing over there looking at both of them with his eyes spitting fire seeing the closeness between Maan and Geet. All the strength that she felt few secs back flew out of the window seeing the look Deb was giving to both of them and she instantly pulled away from Maan’s embrace much to Maan’s confusion and disappointment


“Where were you Love? You were not taking my calls either. You know how much worried I was for you? Thank god you are safe.” Dev said in his extra sugary voice as he came near them and hugged tight more than required right in front of Maan to let him know that Geet is his possession.


Maan felt like someone has stabbed right in his heart with thousand knives as he saw both of them together. His palms turned into fist and his jaws tightened seeing the way Dev was holding Geet while he just stood over there watching everything numbly. He don’t know why but he couldn’t accept or rather bear the fact of someone else’ in Geet’s life other than him. His heart burned with the mere thought of Geet being someone else’ and the reason was still unknown to him. It cant be just friendship, Can it he thought as he looked at Geet who was looking back at him with her eyes filled with pain and some emotion on which he couldn’t put his finger upon but whatever it is he knew that it is something deep and something just for him but what it is and most importantly why he is feeling so ummm… jealous or whatever you call that feeling seeing them together. He should be happy right that his best friend is getting someone who loves her so much then why he’s feeling everything but Happy. Is it because he’s not getting any good vibes from Dev or he don’t want see Dev or any other person other than him in Geet’s lyf in a good light, he thought as he looked at both of hem painfully with his heart shattering into pieces and reason he still don’t understand.


“Oh, Mr. Khurana! You are also here? Sorry I haven’t noticed you earlier. I was so worried for Geet that everything else seizes for me in this world afterall I Love her so much.” Dev said with a feign ignorance as he pulled out from Geet making Maan to burn even more with jealousy or whatever that feeling is listening to his last line.


“It’s ok. I understand. Laddoo, let’s go. I’ll drop you to your home.”Maan said completely ignoring Dev as he move forward to hold Geet’s hand only to be stopped by Dev


“You don’t have to bother Mr. Khurana. I am here for my Love. I’ll take care of her and will drop her home safely.” Dev said while smirking evily as he removed Maan’s grip from Geet’s wrist while holding it tight in his grip causing pain to Geet but at that moment she choose to remain numb as ahe looked helplessly from Maan to Dev and then again back to Maan before Dev took her towards his car after bidding Maan a bye.


Maan felt her eyes saying something to him rather pleading him something as she turned to look at him while going away with Dev. It was as if she was asking him to stop her, to not let her go, to keep her with him forever. He don’t know why but he fely like that someone is snatching her away from him. He felt like an integral part of him was going away while he could do nothing except watching everything helplessly and numbly as he watched her walking away with her eyes continuously looking at him before she sat inside Dev’s car and disappeared from his eyes as Dev drove away.


Maan’s finger automatically reached on his cheeks when he felt something wet below his eyes nd his brows frowned in confusion when he realize that it was nothing but his own tears. But why is he crying? Why is he feeling bad seeing Geet going away with someone else? Why he’s feeling pained when Dev removed his hand from Geet’s wrist? Why is he feeling that he’s losing something very precious to him? Why? He should be happy for Geet right, seeing the way Dev loves her then why he’s not happy? And why is he feeling that even Geet is also not happy with Dev? Why is he feeling that Geet’s eyes were pleading him to take her away with him? Was it just a frigment of his imagination due to him not liking the fact of Dev being in Geet’s life or is it really Geet is not happy, he thought as he watched at the empty road in front of him for god knows how long until he felt the vibration of his cellphone in his pocket thus breaking his trance and he looked at it only to find it from his office which he completely ignored as right now he’s not in the state of mind to talk to anyone as right now he needs sometime to figure out what is actually happening to him and with this thought he switched off his phone and moved towards his car before droving away towards his home still lost in his own thoughts.




“So you were going to complain about me to your Boyfriend, Don’t you?” Dev’s cold voice sent shivers down Geet’s spine as she looked at him only to find him concentrating on road but the way his knuckles turned white while clutching the steering wheel made Geet realize how much he’s burning in rage.


“Maan is not my Boyfriend. He’s just my best friend and you know that.”Geet snapped back totally irritated wih his over-possessive behavior towards her.


“Ya ofcourse, Best friend with whom you are in love with and who is hugging you like his lyf depended on you. Why don’t you just go and marry him too” Dev’s sarcastic tone made no effect on Geet as she’s now used to of it.


“You know what Dev, you are sick.” Geet scowled as she turned to open the door of the car when Dev stopped in front of her apartment but before she could she felt him grabbing her hand turning her towards him harshly


“Dare you speak to me like that Geet or else you know the consequences.” Dev hisses in dangerous voice as he sqeezed Geet’s cheek hard making her to wince in pain as she looked at him in pain.


“Don’t think that Maan is here so you can get rid of it. Don’t forget my power Geet neither forget what can I do? If I want Na then I can ruin you just in seconds. Your one wrong move and you’ll lose every precious thing that remained with which you are left with. Therefore never ever dare to act smart with me or else you know the consequences. Just get this thing straight in your head Geet that you are mine, my possession and apart from me you don’t have any lyf. Got it?” Dev said harshly as he squeezed her cheeks more when he got no response to which Geet just nodded her head meekly with tears flowing down her eyes continously before Dev jerking her away nd looking other side.


Geet watched Dev’s car zooming past away as she stood on the road in tears. She recalled what Meera told her and what Maan said to her few moments back and chuckled sadly at her bitter fate realizing that it’s impossible to go back now. She’s badly trapped in this hell and now there is no escape from it. No matter what Maan says or do but its true that if she had to save whatever little thing she was left with then she had to choose living in this hell and probably this is her only destiny and she can’t run away from it even if she wants, she thought as she sighed heavily before turning back to go inside her apartment accepting her fate like always.




Its going to be night and Maan still was not able to overcome from plethora of emotions that surged inside him whenever he thought of Geet being with Dev and more than that he was confused about his own feelings. He tried to divert his mind in work, in practicing tai-chi, listening to music but nothing was working for him. Each passing second was making him remind of Geet and his changing feelings towards her. He couldn’t understand what this feeling that he’s having for her is but he knew that it’s something deep and something which is not just friendship. He thought of calling Geet but then he dropped the plan knowing very well that he’ll only do the blunder. He may be The Maan Singh Khurana, king of Construction business but when it comes to matter of heart then he’s still the same Maan who needs his Laddoo but this tym the feelings were not for someone else’, this tym this changing feelings are for Laddoo itself and hence he don’t know who to consult regarding this. He just wished that things shouldn’t be this complicated and he could get a way out from this situation. Like answering his prayers Maan felt his cellphone ringing and his brows frowned in confusion as he saw “Nayantara” flashing on the screen.


“NT, you called so late? Is everything fine? Is Dadimaa fine?”NT rolled her eyes on the tirade of questions Maan was asking and waited patiently until he calmed down


“Maan, calm down first of all. Ok now first thing first everything is fine over here and Dadimaa is also fine, its just I was missing you and felt like you need e so just thought to give a call.” Maan sighed heavily as he heard her. Its very rare when they both use to talk like this. Initially he had Geet and after she left he had shunned himself from everyone including NT too.


“Actually NT you are right I badly need someone right now.” Maan said as he sighed heavily before leaning back on the bed post making NT tensed.


“What happen Maan? Is everything fine? And Geet, is Geet fine?” NT asked worried and Maan took a deep breath before narrating everything from the tym he met Geet again till the event of today.


“I don’t know NT but I just don’t like seeing her with her fiance. I mean I should be happy right seeing her getting settled in her life but I am not. Again and again I am feeling like I am losing something very precious to me. Like a part of me will die. I don’t know what’s happening to me NT? I had never felt like this before for anyone. I ean such kind of intense emotion I had never ever felt like I was feeling now and I just don’t know what to do.” Maan narrated everything helplessly as he pushed back his hairs back while NT just smiled realizing what Maan is going through.


It didn’t took her long in realizing that finally Maan is realizing his feelings for Geet but is still unaware of it. She don’t know who is Geet’s fianc but right now she wants to thank him as he had made his dumb-headed brother realize that the feeling he’s having for his Laddoo is not just friendship and something more than that but right now she knows that if she’ll say this to Maan then he’ll not accept it and will just argue with her hence she decided to let him figure it out himself as no one else can help him in that.


“You know Maan, you now it very well but its just you are not ready to accept it. Just analyse everything since start and you’ll get your answers but don’t use your mind for it just use your heart and you’ll get all your answers for your restlessness. But just don’t make it too late Maan. Realize it before it’s too late.” NT said before hanging up making Maan all the more confused with her answer.


What was that which she was trying to say? Oh! He so hate his sister as inspite of helping him she had made him all the more confused but then ,ay be she’s right. May be he should just listen to his heart and not his brain right now to know what’s happening to him. But before that he needs to get all the information about Dev as he’s really not getting any positive vibes from him. Even its just his imagination but still he wanted to make sure that he’s right for his Laddoo or not. As far as his feelings are concerned then he’ll sort it out anyhow before going back to Delhi and he knew he can as this tym he’ll just use his heart and not brain, he thought as he sighed heavily before Laying down on bed nd closing his eyes trying to analyse everything.




Savitri Devi raised her head from the book she was reading to look at the person standing on the door only to find NT standing over there with a frown on her face. She chuckled softly as she realizes that for what she’s here. It’s her childhood habbit that whenever she’s disturned or wanted to confess something she comes to her room at stands at the soor step until Savitri Devi asks her to come inside. Though NT has been grown-up now but guess old habits die hard, she thought as she gestured NT to come inside which she followed and sat on the bed keeping her head.


“What is it NT? Is there something you want to confess to me?”Dadimaa asked as she caressed her hairs seeing NT in deep thought.


“I did a sin Dadimaa and today I am here to confess it to you.” NT replied with her eyes still somehwhere in the oblivion with her mind replaying the past while Savitri Devi just listened to her patiently.


“You remember Dadimaa me and Maan were so close to each other in childhood. Even though I was an year older to him but still that didn’t made any difference. I use to be his best friend and he use to share everything with me even that also which he couldn’t share with Mom. I never had any friend other than him as I never felt any need of any other friend though that’s a different thing that Maan use to have many friends but for me Maan is my only friend. And then Geet entered in our lives. And then everything changed, Maan has changed.”NT narrated as she replayed everything since start while Savitri Devi chooses to say mum.


“Maan use to spend more tym with her, he use to share every secret with her. The place which was mine is his lyf was of now Geet’s. we hardly use to sit and talk Dadimaa as in school he use to stay with Geet like her shadow wenever he was at home he still use to be with Geet through phones and Messages and to make the thing worse Geet sometimes use to stay at KM only. Even You, Mom and Dad too seems to be so fond of her. I was left all alone Dadimaa. My brother who use to be my Best friend was now Geet’s best friend. My family seems to like her more than me and I didn’t realize when I started feeling insecure with Geet and when that insecurity turned into jealousy and when that jealousy turned into hatred.


Yes I started hating her Dadimaa, even though she was nice to me evrytym we met but still her presence use to irk me and whenever I use to see her with Maan all I wanted is to throw her away from Maan’s lyf. I know it was all wrong and I should have behaved maturely but then I too was just a teenager at that tym Dadimaa and if I would have shared it with anyone then may be the case would be different but then I thought that may be you all will start hating me as seeing the admiration for Geet in everyone’s eyes I always felt myself unworthy and hence that seed of hatred grew deeper and I could do nothing.


And then Sameera entered in Maan’s lyf and I was genuinely happy for him as for me Sameera is perfect in every sense for Maan. She was rich, has class, was beautiful and most importantly she was the sister of the person I Love the most. Yes Dadimaa I never told this to anyone but I too was in Love with someone that too very deeply and Sameera was his sister. I knew Sameera even before Maan met her and it was my secret wish to see both of them together and when I heard of their relationship I was the happiest person as I knew that if Maan deserves anyone then its Sameera.


But then once again Geet was there in Maan’s lyf. As even if Maan was in relationship with Sameera still his all tym use to devoted to Geet and I could see that seed of insecureness soing in Sameera’s heart which has been in mine and hence I started supported Sameera ineverything she use to do against Geet. She purposefully use to keep Maan away from Geet and I supported her in that too without even realizing that biggest sin I am doing but I just wanted best for Maan and somewhere I was selfish too as I don’t want to lose the love of my Lyf due to Geet. But seeing Maan’s protectiveness for Geet always feared me for Maan and Sameera’s relation and in that fear I did something which I was not suppose to do and which has changed everyone’s lyf Maan, Geet, Sameera and mine too…

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