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“Destined To Be” ~ Part 39

Part 39:

Lost in each other’s eyes they stood like that only in the center of the floor as of trying to convey their feelings through their eyes without even caring about the world around them as for them they both are each other’s world. Unconsciously Maan’s one hand cradled Geet’s face before he tucked away the loose strand of her hair beneath her hair caressing the sensitive spot behind her ear in the process making her gasp inaudibly as she clutched his shoulders tight in order to save herself from falling for she could feel her knees turning into jelly just with his look and soft touches. So lost they were in each other’s eyes that none of them realizes the painful look on certain someone’s face who was looking other side in order to hide the pain of his bleeding heart neither they could realize the danger lurking towards them which was nearing them by each passing second.






Loud voices of Omkara and Annie broke their trance thus bringing them back to the real world and Maan looked above only to realize the large chandelier was just an inch away and is about to fall on them and next what everyone witnessed was the loud crashing sound of the chandelier as they close their eyes while blocking it with their hands in order to save themselves from the shattering glasses of the chandelier as it finally fall down with a loud crash.


 “MAAN SIR!!!” It was Adi’s voice that made everyone open their eyes and what they saw was enough to take away their lives as they followed Adi’s gaze who was looking at the sight in front with utmost horror.




“Aaahhh!” She winced in pain as the burning sensation of tincture hits the wound on her skin thus making her cringe a bit but soon relaxed when she felt someone blowing a warm breath on her wound in order to reduce the burning sensation of the tincture unknown of the effect it’s having on the person in subject.


“I am sorry Geet. Zyada dard ho raha hai.” She heard his voice laced with concern and care for her thus making her smile as she shook her head in denial while he resumed his task of  cleaning her wound leaving her to admire lovingly the person sitting in front who is the sole reason of her existence.


She can’t even imagine her life without him. When just the mere thought of something happening to him is enough to take away her life, then she don’t even want to imagine what would have happened if she haven’t pushed him on time and let that chandelier fall on him. Though that’s a different thing that she herself got hurt in the process, but then that doesn’t matter to her either. She can lay her life for him if there comes a time then this injury is nothing for her. That moment when that chandelier was about to fall on him, still gives her goose bumps as she recalled what happened few minutes back in the hall.









Loud voices of Omkara and Annie broke their trance thus bringing them back to the real world and Maan looked above only to realize the large chandelier was just an inch away and is about to fall on them and next what everyone witnessed was the loud crashing sound of the chandelier as they close their eyes while blocking it with their hands in order to save themselves from the shattering glasses of the chandelier as it finally fall down with a loud crash.


 “MAAN SIR!!!” It was Adi’s voice that made everyone open their eyes and what they saw was enough to take away their lives as they followed Adi’s gaze who was looking at the sight in front with utmost horror.


All of them instantly rushed towards the spot only to find Geet and Maan lying a bit away from the place where chandelier has been fallen down with Geet on top of Maan as she covered Maan like a shield whose arms were wrapped around her protectively. It was so sudden that both of them didn’t understand and when they did the chandelier was already just mere inches away from them. Had it not been Annie and Omkara who had shouted at time then probably they both wouldn’t have noticed it either and next moment what Maan had felt was been dragged away and it was when he fell on floor he realized that it was Geet who had dragged him aside and now laying on top of him holding him protectively.


It didn’t came as a surprise to him that she had saved him yet again as whenever he faced any such situation it is her only who saves him like this then be it a day back while facing that gruesome accident or a month back when he was lying on that hospital bed or be it today. It is always either her or her love who brings him back from the clutches of death all safe and sound. They were surely “Destined to Be” like everyone says probably that’s why after everything happened with them they are still together and will always be no matter what, he thought as he wrapped his arms around her petite form protectively as f trying to shield her from every harm that she has taken in her way due to him.


“Geet, Jiju! Are you both fine?” It was Savera’s voice who had broke their trance and they realized that everyone has been gathered around them as they helped pick both of them to pick up from the floor.


“Maan Beta, Geet you both are fine right?” Dadimaa asked yet again once both Maan and Geet get up from the floor with the help of other family members.


“We are fine Dadimaa. Thanks to Geet we both got saved in a nick of time.” Maan assured everyone who were in the state of panic after seeing such a horrible accident.


“Kya hua hai yaha pe? Ye Chandelier kaise gir gaya?” Everyone heard NT’s voice who came to the hall running after listening to the shattering sound.


“Where were you NT? You are with us only right then where had you gone all of a sudden?” Dev questioned back instead of replying as he squinted his gaze at her thus making her nervous.


Wo… I got an important call and since music was going on over here so I went aside to attend it and suddenly I heard a loud sound so I just ended the call and came here.” Nayantara though was nervous with Dev’s questioning gaze in hers but still managed to explain her side of story. Dev though was not convinced as he shared a knowing look with Omkara who gestured him to be quiet right now due to the presence of other family members.


“But how come this chandelier fall down all of a sudden. I mean it was perfect till few minutes back.” Vidyut raised his doubts making others frown.


May be someone purposefully tried to tampered with it.” Dev’s gaze was fixed at NT who was looking everywhere but him.


“Guys! Calm down. It was just an accident. May be the string got loose accidently. Don’t make a mole out of hill. Both me and Geet are fine so just end this discussion.”


“But Bro…”


“Enough Dev. No more discussion on this. I’ll ask servants to see how did the string got loose like this ok.” Maan interrupted Dev in between to which he just nodded his head in positive but made a note of not leaving this matter so easily.


Geet beta, your hand is bleeding.” Dadimaa’s voice diverted everyone’s attention towards Geet only to find wound on Geet’s hand which was bleeding. Guess she got hurt while saving Maan which went unnoticed till now.


“Geet yeh… Tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi abhi tak. Dekho kitna Khoon nikal raha hai. Nakul! Nakul! Bring the First Aid Kit fast.” Maan got panicked seeing his Geet hurt like this while Geet who was till now unaware of her injury looked at him in awe seeing him like this.

“Maan, Aap Geet ko apne Room me le jaiye. Yaha abhi bhi glass pieces pade hue hai. Hum Nakul ko wahi bhejte hai.” Dadimaa suggested and Maan instantly picked Geet in her arms before moving towards their room in spite of Geet continuously saying that she is absolutely fine and can walk on her own but Maan being Maan hear none and gave her a glare which was enough to shut her mouth as she looked sideways pouting which made Maan smile on her antics as they both made their way towards their room leaving all the family members behind smiling except one who was looking sideways in order to hide the pain of his burning heart.

                ~~~~~~~******Back to Present*****~~~~~~~~


Ye kya pagalpan tha Geet? Tumhe itni chot lagi aur tumhe ehsaas tak nahi hua? Thank God it was just a cut and glass pieces had not pierced inside the skin. And also thank Dadimaa who had noticed this wound on your hand otherwise you would have successfully hidden it from all.”Maan’s voice broke her trance and she looked back at him in admiration only to find him bandaging her wound with utmost care as id she is a glass doll who will break with a mere jerk and her lips curved into a bright smile as this thought crossed her mind while looking at him with all the love she had for him.

What? Now why are you smiling like this? Had I cracked some joke over here?” Maan knotted his brows as he raises his head after bandaging her hand to look at her only to find her smiling brightly at him to which she just nodded her head in denial still smiling. This girl is crazy, he thought as he shake his head on her antic before hitting his head with hers playfully


Tum Bilkul Pagal ho Geet. Pata hai na tumhe ye baat. Aur kya zarurat thi tumhe waha wo stunt karne ki? Main sambhal leta na sab kuch. I mean mujhe pata hai you were trying to save both of us but still Agar tumhe zyada chot lag jati to? Agar wo chandelier tumhare upar… Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to? Agar…”


Aur agar apko kuch ho jata to?” Geet’s words stopped Maan’s ranting in mid and he looked at her only to find her looking at him with some emotions which was way too intense to be explained in words and it just left him tongue-tied.


“Geet.” It was all he was able to utter as he looked deep into her hazels which was already looking back at him all lost on him and before he could understand anything he found her keeping her palm on his cheek as she cradled her face from one side while her thumb caressed his stubble filled cheek gently giving him an unknown pleasure.


“Aap soch bhi kaise sakte hain Maan ki aap ko khatre me dekh ke main chup chap khadi rahoongi. Kaise soch sakte hai Maan ke upar koi musibat aaye aur ye Geet apne bare me soch ke khud ko bacha le. Kaise soch sakte hai aap ki aap ko kuch ho jaye aur main uske baad khushi se reh paungi. Mere hote hue main apko kisi bhi musibat me nahi padne doongi Maan. Kisi bhi khatre ko Aap tak pahuchne se pehle mujh se ho kar guzarna padega. Yamraj bhi saamne kyun na ho aap ko chhoone se pehle usse Geet naam ki deewar ko paar  karna hoga. Mere jeete ji main aap par kabhi koi aanch bhi nahi aane doongi aur agar iske liye mujhe apni jaan bhi deni pade to main wo bhi kar jaungi par aap ko kuch nahi hone doongi. Main mar jaungi lekin aap ko kuch…” She couldn’t complete her sentence as she felt her lips sealing with of Maan’s as he chewed the words that she was about to utter.

Geet closed her eyes when she felt his lips moving over hers but for a change she felt a certain urgency in that kiss which was never there before. A certain kind of aggression and complaint whch she never experienced before. It was as if he was trying to make himself believe of something unknown of the fact that it is the impact of her words that had brought fear inside his heart; Fear of losing her, fear of his life without her. He don’t need that life where she is not with him and as this thought crossed his mind he increased the pressure as he bites her lips harshly thus making her gasp and giving her the entry into the sweet nectar of her mouth.


It would be wrong to say that Geet didn’t understand what is going though him as she knows each and every breath of his and hence she knows what feeling he is going through now with the intensity of his kiss and hence she caressed his back while kissing him back thus making his tense muscles flex in response while he continued kissing her. No sooner it was when she felt his heart and mind relaxing owing to the soothing touch of hers which was taking away all his fears and insecurities and as a result his kiss turned soft and full of love as he sucked her petals gently while his tongue played with hers, as they danced on their own rhythms.


They broke apart for a second to catch their breath when Maan once again captured her lips onto a soul-searing kiss pouring out all his love and care for her while she too responded back with same fervor as she caressed his rough cheek in order to take away all the remaining fear and insecurity from him. They kissed each other for what seem to be like eternity when he felt her gasping for air and he gently broke apart after giving a one last peck on her rosy lips before resting his forehead on hers panting heavily in order to catch his breath.


 “Aaj Keh diya, Aaj ke baad dobara kabhi ye mat kehna Geet warna pata nahi main kya kar jaunga. Tumhe andaza bhi nahi hai ki tum kya mayne rakhti ho mere liye. Main tumhe nahi kho sakta Geet kisi bhi keemat pe nahi. I won’t let anything happen to you ever because I just can’t afford to lose you. Never ever.”  His words came out as a mere whisper as he hugged her tight keeping his head on top of hers and Geet just hugged him back with a smile on her face.


“I won’t let anything happen to you ever Maan. No matter what I have to do for that.” Her words though were just a whisper but loud enough for Maan to hear and as a result he hugged her tighter if possible as if someone will take her away from him if he will loosen his hold on her.




“Mere jeete ji main aap par kabhi koi aanch bhi nahi aane doongi aur agar iske liye agar mujhe apni jaan bhi deni pade to main wo bhi kar jaungi par aap ko kuch nahi hone doongi.”


“I won’t let anything happen to you ever Maan. No matter what I have to do for that.”


Her words from that day echoed in his memory as he looked at the lifeless body of his life, his love, his Geet in his arms drenched in her own blood, the person who loved him beyond the level of insanity. He hugged her tight as a heart wrenching cry erupted his throat when he realized that she has indeed proven her words right with her act. The death which was meant for him she has taken that on herself but as she promised she didn’t let anything happen to him. His shoulders shook in an uncontrollable cry as he hugged her tighter as if trying to transfer his life into her if possible.


Heavens pour out for him as if they too were crying for his loss while he just sat over there hugging her tighter. Why? Why did she loved him so much that she didn’t cared about her own life? Why did she loved him this much that she had embraced the death which was actually coming for him but as she promised she stood in front of him like a shield while he could do nothing, nothing at all. Why he is the always the one to be the unlucky one in love; First Sameera and now Geet. He wasn’t able to save Sameera and he wasn’t able to save Geet either from the clutches of his cruel fate. Then why the hell is he still alive if he is cursed to lose the persons he loves the most, he thought as million cries shook his entire self while he sat there drenching in rain still holding her lifeless body in his arms.


Ek Pal ki Zindagi de di


Ek Dil ki Duniya


Bas Itni Mohabbat hai


“GEET!!!!!!”A loud howl escaped his lips before breaking into numerous as her words from her diary echoed in his brain making him realize the extent of his love for her which probably will not be there anymore for him to experience.




About a week back:


“Now do you still need any proof Omkara? Now still you will say that it’s just my imagination and nothing else. After seeing all the proofs and especially witnessing today’s accident you still feel that my doubt is wrong.” Dev throwed his hands in air in frustration as he looked at Omkara who was sitting calmly in study sipping his coffee thinking something deeply.


“Now why are you thinking so much Omkara? I am telling you that my doubt is correct. It’s high time to bring the culprit n front of everyone.” Dev knotted his brows at Omkara who was still sitting as calmly as sea thus increasing Dev’s confusion.


“Relax Dev! You know during our training what we were taught; that often what we see is not true. Truth is hidden under wraps of lie and we need to read between the lines to find that truth. And here in this case, I need to do the same.” Omkara gets up from his sitting position as he goes near Dev before putting his hand on his shoulders.


I can’t believe this Om. Even after witnessing everything…


“After witnessing everything only I am saying this.” Omkara interrupted Dev in between who was looking at him as if he had grown two heads.


“Look! I know it’s really hard for you to understand it but try to understand what I am saying. I agree that today’s incident was nowhere an accident but a planned act and I also know that the person is very close and in fact someone from the family only but that doesn’t mean that the person is the one you are doubting or should I say of you are being confirmed. Dev, this is my forte and hence I can judge the criminals better than you all.” Omkara put forward his point but Dev was still not convinced fully.


“I know it’s difficult for you to believe me okay let’s do one thing, Give me just 12 Hours to analyze everything and I promise that if your doubt is correct then I myself will bring the culprit on front of the whole family. Just 12 Hours is all I ask.” Dev nodded in agreement as somewhere he is getting convinced about what Omkara is saying before they both discussed on some points regarding Maan’s case.




He looked at the delicate design of the anklet in his hand which Adi has just given to him after he picked it up from the jewelry shop on Maan’s behalf since Maan was not allowed to go out of the house. His finger ran on its delicate design before he turned it back and stared at their names being carved together: “Maan ki Geet”. An instant smile crept on his M-shaped lips as he caressed the phrase with his long fingers while he gaze their names written together lovingly. It sounds so perfect as if it was meant to be like this only.


“Main intezar nahi kar sakta us pal ka Geet jab main is Payal se tumhe humesha-humesha ke liye apne Pyar ki dor me baandh loonga. 3 din baad jab main tumse apni dil ki baat keh ke tumhe ye payal apne haatho se pehnaunga to tum humesha ki tarah sharmaogi aur sharmate hue tum aur bhi zyada khoobsurat lagogi.” His lips curved into a shy smile as he imagined her reaction hen he’ll make her wear this anklet from his own hands.


The way her toes will curl in pleasute when he’ll kiss those soft delicate ankles of her after making her wear these anklets, the way she’ll blush, the way she’ll look into his eyes with her love filled gaze when he’ll confess his love for her and the way she’ll absorb herself in his arms when he’ll make her his in all senses; just by imagining these things has filled up her heart with so much joy and pleasure that he don’t understand how is he going to control himself for 3 days when here he is all aroused just by thinking of her.


A side of him just wanted to forget all his plans and confess to her right now in order to love and devour her endlessly but another logical side of him chided him for being so desperate. After all it is his Geet he was talking about and he has to do everything special for the girl who had filled his life with love and happiness. It will be her special day and he’ll make it more special by giving her this happiness because at the end of the day she deserves it. She had waited enough, they have waited enough and now it’s time for both of them to end all their waits and become one for forever, he thought as he kissed that anklet where her name is written lingering his lips on it for a longer time before shaking his head on his own act.


“What have you done to me Geet? You had changed me so much that now it is impossible for me to think a life without you. Yeh faasle bas kuch hi palon ke hai Geet, 3 din baad humare beech me koi dooriyan koi faasle nahi rahenge. Because after 3 days we’ll become husband and wife in all senses. I’ll make you mine with all my love and desire for you. Just 3 more days Geet and then there will be love and only love between us. I love you Geet. I Love you so much.” He whispered as ehe looked at Geet’s photo after picking it up from the side table before kissing those luscious lips in her photo imagining her to be in real, which in turn made him blush as he hits his head playfully before keeping the photo down and moving towards the cupboard to keep the Anklet and Ring safely into the drawer, waiting eagerly for the day when he’ll make her wear these 2.




Savitri Devi was pacing in her room lost in her thoughts. It seems that events happening from the past few days had affected her too, though that’s a different thing that she has kept her worries to her own self. But whatever is happening from past few days and especially in past two days has really forced her to think in that direction. People says that when continuously bad things happen in our life then automatically our thoughts started wandering in negative directions, same is the case with Savitri Devi. Whatever is happening from past few days has gave her a nagging feeling of something not right. She don’t want to believe in such things but still her instincts were saying that a very big storm is making its way towards their lives which will only bring destruction and unhappiness in their lives and this she can’t let happen.


“Dadimaa, is everything okay? You seem to be worried?” Savitri Devi’s trance was broken hearing Dev’s voice who has came to talk something important to her but seeing her so disturbed got worried.


“Yes Dev, I am fine. It’s just that whatever is happening from past few days is just making me worried. I mean first Maan’s accident at Noida site and then his accident last day and today’s incident. If Geet wouldn’t have been there then I don’t even want to think what would have happened and Geet herself has got injured. Aisa lag raha hai jaise ki Humare baccho ko kisi ki buri nazar lag gayi hai.” Savitri Devi let out a deep breath as she sat down on the bed worried while Dev who very well knows the reason behind these accidents remained quiet as he knows that it is not good for Dadimaa’s health moreover Omkara too had asked for 12 hours so he decided to wait instead of reveling everything to Savitri Devi, he thought as he sat beside Savitri Devi holding her hand.

Dadimaa, relax. Stop worrying so much. Everything is going to be fine. And these are just mere accidents and most importantly Bro and Geet are absolutely fine so don’t think too much ok or else you’ll get ill.”Savitri Devi just nodded her head in understanding when something strikes her mind.


“Dev, Hum Humare Guruji ke waha jaana jaate hai. Tell Driver to get the car ready.” Dev was shocked to hear Dadimaa. Though he knows that her life is not at risk yet given the circumstances he don’t want to take any chances.

Dadimaa, Aise achanak. I mean Aap ki Tabiyat bhi kharaab hai, Aap baad me chale jana.” He tried to reason with her though that’s a different thing that his reason was nowhere satisfying enough.


“Hum Bilkul Theek hai Dev. Aur Hum isi waqt Guruji ke paas jana chahte hai. Pata nahi kyun par humara Mann bahut Ghabra raha hai. Hum nahi chahte ki humare baccho pe koi musibat aaye. Hum ek baar ja kar unse mil aaye to humein Tasalli ho jayegi.” Savitri Devi was as stubborn as her grandsons but still Dev don’t want to risk her safety with so much danger lurking around.


“Wo sab Theek hai Dadimaa par aap janti hai na ki Bro in sab cheezon pe vishwas nahi karte. Sameera Bhabhi ki death ke baad se unka vishwas Bhagwan pe ya Bhagwan se related kisi bhi cheez pe khatam ho gaya hai. Wo Taveez jo Geet le kar aayi thi Dargah se use bhi unhone bas Geet ki khushi ke liye pehna hua hai warna vishwas to unhe us par bhi nahi hai. Agar Bro ko pata chala ki Aap unke liye Guruji ke paas gayi hai wo bhi un Guruji ke paas jinhone ye kaha tha ki Bro aur Sameera Bhabhi ka saath Saat Janmon ka hai, ki un dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta and they are match made in heaven, Dadimaa Bro Bahut naraz ho jayenge.” Dev tried to make her understand but it all went in vain as Savitri Devi was nowhere to listen.


“Aap bhool rahe hai Dev ki usi Taveez ki wajah se Maan Do baar marte marte bache hai Aur waise bhi Hum wo sab kuch nahi jaante. Hum abhi Guruji ke paas ja rahe hai matlab ja rahe hai. Aap Driver se boliye Gaadi nikalne ko. Aur waise bhi kuch baatein hai jinse ab tak sab anjaan hai.” Savitri Devi though has said the last line to herself but Dev’s ears were sharp enough to hear that line but before he could ask anything Savitri Devi moved out of the room leaving Dev behind confused.


Dadimaa is hiding something, but what?” He thought as he looked at the retreating figure of Savitri Devi before he moved out to call the driver and doing necessary arrangements for her safety.




“Tumhe Ek baar ki baat samajh nahi Aati? Kitni baar kaha hai ki humein yun Baar baar phone mat kiya karo.” NT gritted her teeth as she talk over the phone only to hear a laughter from other side.


“NT Madam what to do? I was missing you so much. You know na how much I Love you.” NT fumed in anger seeing the audacity of the person who is just her mere pawn.


“Bakwaas band karo apni aur yeh batao Ab kyu phone kiya tumne?” And once again she heard his laughter thus adding fuel to her anger.


“Wahi Purani kahaani NT Madam. I need money. Wo kya hai na ki Police se bhagte bhagte mera sara paisa kharch ho jata hai to badi problem ho hai uske baad aur musibat me to apne hi yaad aate hai, hai na NT Madam.” He chuckled on the phone while NT just clenched her fist in anger.


Ek Phooti kaudi nahi denge ab hum tumhe. Pehle hi bahut paise le chuke ho tum wo bhi aise kaam ke jo tumse theek tarah hua hi nahi. Ab tumhe ek paisa nahi milega.” Her voice was menacing while her eyes were red in anger as she spoke over the phone.


Tch.. Fir wahi baat NT Madam. Aap baar baar mujhe ek hi kaam karne pe majboor kyun karti hai. Chakiye ab agar aap yahi chahti hai to yahi sahi. Ab Aap mujhe Paise nahi de rahi hai to main Dev Sahab se le loonga. I am sure wo mujhe mana nahi karenge. Aakhir bahut bada dil hai unka.” Her anger reached another level when she realized that he is yet again blackmailing her by Dev’s name and all she wanted at that moment to kill this person with her bare hands as she throwed the vase she was holding on the floor.


“Ruko, Tum Dev se kuch nahi kahoge. Theek hai hum aaj raat hi tumhara full and final settlement kar denge uske baad tum dobara kabhi Humein pareshan nahi karoge samjhe tum.” The person on the other side grinned as he finally saw his demands getting met.


“Pakka, Aai shapath mera matlab hai wo kya bolte hai aap log angrezi me.. haan,, Mother Promise iske baad apko koi pareshani nahi hogi.” NT Smirked listening to his statement telling him that she will message him the address of the place where they will meet.


Aaj Raat ke baad tum humein to kya kisi ko bhi pareshan nahi kar payoge kyunki aaj raat ke baad tum zinda hi nahi bachoge. Bahut badi galti kari humne jo tumhe ab tak zinda rakha aur use bhi badi galti ki tumne humein blackmail kar ke. To Abu ski saza to tumhein milegi hi. Tumhari maut ke saath ye raaz bhi wahi dafan ho jayega, humesha ke liye.” NT laughed hysterically as she caressed her pistol before messaging the person the address of the place.




The calm and serene atmosphere of the Aashram gave a soothing effect to Dadimaa’s restless heart up to great extent yet that nagging feeling was still there and she knows that unless she will meet with Guruji this restlessness will be there. She greeted the disciples of Guruji on the way before going towards the room where he is meditating. She took a deep breath before sitting in front of him while he was still in his meditation. He is not any ordinary Guruji nor having beard or wearing orange clothes like people usually assume him to be in fact he is a great scholar and had even given lectures in abroad on divinity and spirituality. Savitri Devi has great respect for him as has a great knowledge and he never predict anything wrong. No matter what Maan says or think about him, she still believes him and for that belief only she is here today.


“Aao Savitri. Mujhe pata tha tum Aaogi. Dadimaa was surprised to see him recognizing her presence even when his eyes were closed but then she smiled when she realized that his meditation power is strong enough to recognize her. She greeted him once he opened his eyes after his meditation to which he just nodded smilingly.


“Kuch uljhan me lag rahi ho Savitri. Kya Baat hai?” Savitri Devi face fell off when she heard him asking this question after they finished with exchanging pleasantries.


“You know everything Guruji (And she told every happening in Maan and Geet’s life till today’s morning incident). And not only Maan, Geet too have been in danger many times while saving Maan. Aisa lagta hai jaise Humare baccho ko buri nazar lag gayi hai kisi ki. Pehle hi in dono ne apne rishte me kayi pareshaniya jheli hai. Aap to jante hai na ki Maan aur Geet ki shaadi kin haalaton me hui thi. Uski wajah se kafi samay tak dono me dooriyan rahi hai aur ab jab sab cheezein theek ho rahi hai, humare baccho ki zindagi me khushiyan aa rahi hai to ye sare haadse. Humara mann bahut ghabra raha hai Guruji. Aisa lag raha hai jaise koi bahut bada toofan aane wala hai Humare baccho ki zindagi me. Hum un dono ko toota hua nahi dekh sakte. Please give me some solution. Hum kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hain lekin Hume apne ghar aur apne baccho ki zindagi me khushiyan aur sukoon chahiye.” Dadimaa’s voice turned helpless in the end as she forwarded Maan’s and Geet’s Kundli towards Guruji who took it smilingly before going through it and dong some calculations in his fingers after which he remained pause for a long time.


Kya hua Guruji. Aap Chup kyun hai. Koi sankat hai kya humare bacchon par. Agar aisa hai to hum kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hai, koi bhi upay, koi bhi Pooja. Bas humare bacchon pe koi musibat nahi aani chahiye”Dadimaa who was worried seeing Guruji’s expression asked in desperation.


“Tum Niyati (Destiny) se lad nahi sakti Savitri. Koi bhi nahi lad sakta. Tumhari Bahu Sameera ne koshish ki thi Kismat se ladne ki aur Anjaam tum janti hi ho. Unki kismet me jo likha hai wo ho kar rahega aur use koi nahi badal sakta. Aur jaisa main dekh pa raha hoon to unki kismet ek naya mod lene wali hai.” Guruji’s words confused Dadimaa further as she couldn’t understand the meaning behind his words.


“Aap kya kehna chahte hai Guruji. Humare Bacchon ki zindagi me koi musibat aane wali hai?”


“Musibat aa chuki hai Savitri. Ateet ka koi Panna fir se palat ke aaya hai in dono ki zindagi me. In dono ki zindagi bahut bade toofan se guzarne wali hai. Aane wale 10 din bahut bhaari hai in dono ke liye aur inke rishtey ke liye bhi. Kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Ek zindagi bhi ja sakti hai is toofan me par wo zindagi kiski hogi ye main nahi keh sakta. Waqt aane pe sabko khud hi pata chal jayega.” Guruji’s words scared Savitri Devi as she looked at him in horror.


“Ye Aap kya keh rahe hai Guruji? Humare Baccho ki zindagi me sankat? Kisi ki zindagi ja sakti hai? Hum humare bacchon ko kisi takleef me nahi dekh sakte. Koi to Upay (Solution) hoga na iska. Kuch to aisa hoga jisse Hum humare Bacchon ko is musibat se bacha sake. Koi Pooja, ya kuch bhi.” Savitri Devi asked in desperation while Guruji just smiled.


Un dono ka saath hi un dono ka Raksha Kawach (Safety Guard) hai Savitri. Jab tak wo dono saath hai koi bhi taakat unhe alag nahi kar sakti. Geet ke hote hue na Maan pe koi musibat aa sakti hai aur na hi Maan ke hote hue Geet ko kuch ho sakta hai. Par haan un dono ke liye aur unke rishtey ke liye ye Pariksha ki ghadi hai. Bahut utar Chadhav aayenge unki zindagi me in 10 dino me. Agar wo dono is toofan ko jhel  gaye to fir kabhi koi taakat unhe nuksan nahi pahucha sakti aur agar nahi jhel paye to…” Guruji Left her sentence in the end incomplete but Savitri Devi was intelligent enough to know what he meant to say.


Tum Chinta mat karo Savitri aur Bhagwan pe bharosa rakho. Mujhe Vishwas hai ki ye dono poori himmat ke sath is toofan ka saamna karenge. Inka rishta hi in dono ki raksha karega. Maa Durga sab theek karengi.” Savitri Devi just noddd her head slowly while her mind was stil lingering on one sentence. “A Life will go away?” But the main question is “Whose?”“Geet’s or “Maan’s” or “someone else’.”




NT reached at the scheduled time on the address where she and that person has decided to meet. She parked her car at a distance before getting down and checking her pistol in the purse. Once sure everything is in its place she moved towards the place where that man was waiting for her with a evil plan in her mind. All she had in her mind at that time was to finish this chapter once and for all and with this determination she moved near the person after she spotted him standing at a distance.


“So you are here? Himmat kaise hui tumhari, humein, Nayantara Khurana ko blackmail karne ki.She spoke in anger looking at him who was still standing with his back towards her in the dark.


“Tumhe kya laga ki hum darr gaye hai tumse aur tumhari dhamkiyon se isliye yaha aaye hai? Nahi, hum tumhe yaha tumhari aukat dikhane aaye hai. Bahut badi galti kar di hai tumne humein blackmail kar ke aur ab tum apni usi galti ki saza bhugtoge.” She pointed her pistol towards him only to find him flinching a bit which made her smirk seeing him in fear.


Kya hua? Darr gaye? Kash ye darr tumhe Humein blackmail karne se pehle lagta. Par Afsos it’s too late now. Galti ki hai to saza to milegi hi na. Marne se pehle koi Aakhri khwaish ho to bata do. Wo kya hai na ki Nayantara Khurana ka Dil bahut bada hai. Tumhari Aakhri Khwaish zaroor poori karegi.” She still didn’t get any response from him but this time finds his body shaking in fearthus making her smirk her wider.


“Chalo Tum mat batao hum hi tumhe apni Aakhri Khwaish bata dete hai. Hum tumhe Maarte waqt tumhari aankhon me Apne liye Darr dekhna chahte hai taki tum kisi bhi jaman me humein Blackmail karne ki koshish na karo. So turn and face your death like a brave. Aur waise bhi Nayantara ko Peeche se vaar karna acha nahi lagta. TURN AROUND!!!” She shouted last line in anger while her eyes were reflecting pure rage and next moment she found him turning so that his face was facing hers and her eyes went wide in shock and horror as she came face to face with the person she was least expecting at this hour.


“Dev? Aap?” She whispered in horror as moon light fell on Dev thus reveling his face to her but what scared her more was the expression of hatred and anger on his face thus making her realize that her doom is finally here and next moment she found herself surrounded by Omkara and his men who were pointing their guns at her.


Drop your weapon NT. You are trapped now.” Omkara commanded as he pointed his Gun towards her head thus making NT to lose her hold on her pistol.


Dev… Aap yahan… Kaise… Mera matlab… wo Aadmi. Wo phone Aap ne kiya tha?” Probably for the first time Dev has seen fear on NT’s face and it made him both happy and sad at the same time; Happy because he was able to caught her red-handed and sad because somewhere he wanted himself to be proved wrong.


“Kyun? Hairan ho mujhe dekh kar NT? Oh haan tum to yaha us Aadmi ko expect kar rahi thi jo tumhare har jurm ka saathi hai? Jiske saath mil kar tumne Baar baar mere Bro ki jaan lene ki koshish kari. Kyun kiya tumne aisa NT? KYUN???” He shouted in anger thus making NT jump in fear with his demeanor.


Ye Aap kya Keh rahe hai Dev? Maan Veerji ki Jaan? Humne? Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai.” NT was confused with the allegations Dev was putting on her thus adding fuel to Dev’s fear.


“Jhoot mat bolo. Aur kitna Jhoot bologi Nayantara. Mujhe pata hai tum mere parivar ko pasand nahi karti. Bro aur Geet se nafrat karti ho par main nahi jaanta tha ki tumhari ye nafrat itni badi hai kit um mere Bhai ki jaan lene par aa jaogi. Kya bigada tha meri family ne tumhara? Kya bigada tha Bro aur Geet ne tumhara NT? Kya kami rakhi gayi hai tumhare liye NT ki tum is giri hui harkat pe utar aayi. Mujhe is baat pe bhi sharam aa rahi hai ki maine tumse pyaar kiya, ki tum meri wife ho.” Dev’s words were confusing her as well as piervcing her heart as no matter how much bad she is yet she had always loved Dev.


“Dev Humara yakeen kijiye. Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai. Hum maante hai aap jo kuch bhi keh rahe hai wo sach hai. Hum maante hai ki hum Maan Veerji aur Geet ko pasand nahi karte par uske liye hum Maan Veerji ki jaan nahi le sakte, Maan Veerji to kya hum kisi ki bhi jaan nahi le sakte. Humara Vishwas kijiye.” She literally pleaded while her eyes clouded in tears and for once Dev wanted to believe her but then reminded of her betrayal he thought otherwise.


“Vishwas karu? Us insan ka vishwas karu jisne humesha meri family ka bura hi socha hai? Aur kya kaha tumne, ki tumne ye sab kuch nahi kiya. To fir tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Kyun aayi thi us insan se milne jo tumhe blackmail kar raha tha itne dino se. Jise tum baar baar paise deti thi mere bro pe attack karane ke liye. Batao NT, kya main Jhoot bol raha hoon?” NT shaked her head in denial not knowing how to defend herself.


“To tumhare according main galat hoon? Tumne Noida wali site pe Bro pe attack nahi karwaya, Tumne hospital me Ventilator ka plug nahi nikalwaya aur na hi tumne Bro ko expired medicines dene ki koshish kari, Tumne kal Bro ka wo gruesome accident na hi karwaya aur na hi aaj chandelier girane me tumhara koi haath tha. Yahi kehna chahti ho tum. Hai na?” Nt nodded her head in acceptance making Dev angrier.


“Fir Jhoot. Jhoot pe jhoot bolti ja rahi ho tum? Maine khud suna hai tumhe us Aadmi se baat karte hue phone pe jab wo tumhe blackmail kar raha tha paiso ke liye. Tumhare Accounts check kiye hai jaha har baar transaction usi din kea as paas hua hai jab Bro pe attack hota tha aur haan maine khud tumhari call records bhi ckeck ki hai jaha Attack ke samay tum us aadmi se baat karti thi. Aur Aaj subah Chandelier girne se kuch minute pehle hi tum waha se chali gayi thi. Kya itne Proofs kaafi nahi hai NT ye saabit karne ke liye ki culprit koi aur nahi balki tum hi ho.” NT was shocked listening to Dev’s words. She never thought that Dev will dug so deeper into her secrets.


“Dev, hum jaante hai ki is waqt hum jo bhi kahenge aap ko wo jhoot hi lagega par hum sach keh rahe hai ki humne Maan Veerji ki jaan lene ki koshish kabhi bhi nahi ki. Hum maante hai ki humne is Aadmi ko paise diye hai aur ye humein blackmail kar raha tha par humne ise paise Maan Veerji pe attack karne ke liye nahi diye the. Ye aap ki Noida wali site ka Union Leader tha aur un dino hum Maan Veerji ke against the kyunki unhone Geet ki wajah se humein Dhamki di thi aur humein isi baat ka gussa tha. To humne socha ki kyun na hum kuch aisa karein jisse Maan Singh Khurana ki reputation pe chot pahuche. Aur bas isiliye humne Noida construction site pe wo problems karayi and I had made sure that Media covers that. Bas Dev humne bas itna hi kiya hai. Iske alawa humne aur kuch nahi kiya.” Nt tried her best to clear the misunderstanding that Dev was having but he was no where to belive her.


“Acha, To fir tum us Aadmi ki blackmailing se itna darr kyu gayi thi? Kyun baar baar use paise deti thi aur wo phone calls.” Dev probed further while NT just don’t know how to explain herself.


“Kyunki Maan Veerji ke accident ke baad hum darr gaye the. Humein laga ki us blast ka ilzaam bhi hum par hi aa jayega aur wo Union leader humein baar baar darata tha ki wo Apko sab bata dega Noida site ke bare me aur humein laga ki aap Noida site me hue blast ka bhi doshi bhi humein hi manenge isiliye hum uski demands poori karte rahe. Aur Aaj bhi subah usi ka call aaya tha jab wo chandelier gira. Ye sirf co-incidence hai ki us Aadmi ka call tabhi aata tha jab Maan Veerji pe attack hota tha. Dev humara vishwas kijiye humne Maan Veerji pe attack nahi karwaye. Humne unki jaan lene ki koshish nahi ki. Haan Aaj hum us Aadmi ki jaan lene zaroor aaye the kyunki hum thak gaye the uski blackmailing se par humne kisi aur ki jaan lene ki koshish kabhi bhi nahi ki.” NT cleared all the air between them while Dev was still far from believing her any word.


“You know what NT, story achi hai. But unfortunately mujhe pasand nahi aayi. I am sure you’ll think of a better story when you’ll rot in jail. Omkara, Take her away and throw her into the jail. I don’t even want to see her face ever in my life.” Dev commanded Omkara who just nodded in acceptance before signaling a lady constable to handcuff her.


Leave me. Dev, Dev please believe me. Hum sach keh rahe hai. Humne Kuch bhi nahi kiya hai. Humne Maan Veerji ki jaan lene ki koshish nahi ki. Please believe me.” NT tried to jerk of her hand as the lady constable handcuffs her but her words fell on the deaf ears as Dev was nowhere budging from his decision. Just then he felt his mobile ringing and he took it out from his pocket only to find Adi’s name flashing on it. He instantly picked up the call without realizing that it has been on he speaker mode.


Dev Sir, Where are you? Please come to the mansion fast.” Dev heard Adi’s panicked voice from other side making his brows knit in confusion.


Adi, I am with Omkara. You remember our plan right? So I am executing it in the final stage only. But why are you sounding so tensed.” Dev asked and Omkara who was about to take NT towards jeep stopped listebing to their conversation.


“Sir, Aap aur Omkara Sir Please jald se jald KM aa jayiye. Maan Sir pe fir se ek attack hua hai. Yaha sab ghabraye hue hai. Please come to KM as soon as possible.” Dev’s eyes widen in shock listening to the piece of information by Adi while he looked at Nayantara in surprise.


“Dekha Dev Aapne. Hum to yaha Aap ke saamne khade hue hai. To fir waha Maan Veerji pe kisne attack kiya?” NT’s words made Dev tongue tied as he looked at Nt and then at Omkara who was as shocked as him not understanding the sudden turn of events.

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“Mitra” ~ Part 10~

Part 10:

And then Sameera entered in Maan’s lyf and I was genuinely happy for him as for me Sameera is perfect in every sense for Maan. She was rich, has class, was beautiful and most importantly she was the sister of the person I Love the most. Yes Dadimaa I never told this to anyone but I too was in Love with someone that too very deeply and Sameera was his sister. I knew Sameera even before Maan met her and it was my secret wish to see both of them together and when I heard of their relationship I was the happiest person as I knew that if Maan deserves anyone then its Sameera.


But then once again Geet was there in Maan’s lyf. As even if Maan was in relationship with Sameera still his all tym use to devoted to Geet and I could see that seed of insecureness soing in Sameera’s heart which has been in mine and hence I started supported Sameera ineverything she use to do against Geet. She purposefully use to keep Maan away from Geet and I supported her in that too without even realizing that biggest sin I am doing but I just wanted best for Maan and somewhere I was selfish too as I don’t want to lose the love of my Lyf due to Geet. But seeing Maan’s protectiveness for Geet always feared me for Maan and Sameera’s relation and in that fear I did something which I was not suppose to do and which has changed everyone’s lyf Maan, Geet, Sameera and mine too…


             ~~~~~~******* FlashBack********~~~~~~~~

It was Sunday and I had went to Sameera’s home early morning to meet her as she had called me last night to talk something important and as I reached there a servant told me that she was in her room I was shocked to see Sameera in disheveled state as soon as I reached her room. Whole room was in mess as if some tornado hits the place with all the things scattered here and there, mirror broken while she sat in the mid of the room all messed up with her eyes spitting fire. It took me no time to register that condition of this room is the result of Sameera’s anger but what I couldn’t understand is what could have happened that had infuriated Sameera like this as when she had talked to me on phone she seems normal then what could have happened that had resulted into this. Sameera’s condition was not less than that of person possessed. For a moment even I was scared to see her in such condition. I feared for the worst and my fear come true when I heard Sameera’s next set of words


“He broke up with me. Your brother broke up with me and do you know why? Because of that Geet. Because of that good for nothing girl your brother had rejected ME. He said he don’t want to even see my face as my face disgusts him. Can you believe it; he said my face disgusts him. ME SAMEERA for whose one look every guy dies that face disgusts him. And you know for whom he said this; for that good for nothing girl GEET. That fatso ugly duckling who has no match with me for that Girl your brother said that he disgusts me. Didn’t I told you that Geet will never let me and Maan stay happy. I told you Na that she’s a jinxed, a curse to everyone’s life. You remember what my Tarot card reader Aunty said about her that she’ll be the cause of everyone’s destruction and see it all had started also. Her father is facing losses in his business and now me and Maan are separated. She’ll ruin everything around her. She’ll ruin Maan and along with Maan she’ll ruin you.” Sameera’s words made me scared as she looked at me evily making me believe that something really cooking up in her mind.


Your Brother thinks that he’ll live happily with that fatso after breaking my heart. Tch.. Tch… Tch… Not so easy. As my brother will never let him live happily. My brother will burn the whole world if anything happens to me. He’ll destroy everything including you. You love my brother a lot na. But Bhai will not think for a second before breaking up with you. Not only that, he’ll make sure that all of you will suffer. Then what will you do? One side your brother will suffer and other side you are going to suffer. And who will be responsible for all this; Geet. She’ll be responsible for everyone’s destruction.” Sameera laughed evily as she said those words making me to shiver in fear for I know that whatever she was saying is true. She was really a pampered sister of her brother and he’ll not think twice before destroying everything and the mere thought was enough to make me shiver in fear.


“Do you want to stop all this? Do you want everyone to be happy? Then go and make your brother understand otherwise I won’t be responsible for what my brother does after that.” Sameera’s madness was making me shiver in fear by every passing second. I know that she loves Maan a lot and hence she’s capable of doing everything she said to keep Maan in her life even if it costs his or anyone’s destruction for at that moment Maan has became her obsession. I won’t lie but at that moment my hatred for Geet grew ten folds as I found her responsible for everything  


No Sameera. Please don’t do this. I promise you that I’ll talk to Maan. I’ll make him understand. You know na how that Geet influences him. I am sure there must be some misunderstanding and I promise I’ll clear that out. Please don’t do anything stupid to yourself. Trust me I’ll make everything all right.” I literally pleaded in front of her while she smirked evily at me as if she got what she wanted. I was scared Dadimaa. I was scared to lose my only love but more than that I was scared of what Maan will go through if Sameera does whatever she said. I have to save myself from losing my love, I have to save Maan and hence without having any second thought I left for home to make Maan understand in order to save us from destruction coming in our way.     


“What do you think you were doing? How can you break up with Sameera just like that? Have you ever thought what she would have been going through?” I blasted at Maan as soon as I reached home only to find Maan sulking at one corner of his room. I didn’t knew what had happened between Maan and Sameera and I don’t want even to know because for me this reason was enough that Geet was responsible for Maan and Sameera’s break up. I had really started thinking her to be curse in everyone’s life. I know I should have thought more maturely over entire situation but I was unable to do so at that time and for that I won’t be able to forgive myself ever


“You just stay out of it NT. You don’t know anything so it’s better that you shouldn’t get involved in this.” Maan’s cold reply made me both angry and frustrated. How can he say it just like that as if it doesn’t matter to him at all?


O really Maan! Then tell me what I don’t know. You both were doing so good together then what happened all of a sudden that you had broke up with her.” I was frustrated at Maan’s behavior who was replying none of my question instead of just sitting without saying a word.


It’s Geet right? It’s because of her you broke up with her. Oh! Why I haven’t seen it before? It’s just because of that girl you had broken Sameera’s heart, right? What’s wrong with you Maan? Why can’t you see this simple thing that, that girl can’t see you happy with anyone else? She’s influencing you against Sameera and you are getting influenced like a fool. Just because of her you are leaving such a nice girl like Sameera.” I tried to show Mann the evil side of Geet behind that innocent face but still found Maan giving no answer instead of clenching his jaw and fist tight in order to control his anger.


First she separated me from you, she had created distance between me and my own brother and now she’s doing the same with Sameera because she wants you all for herself. That good for nothing bitch…” I couldn’t complete my sentence as I heard Maan roared in anger.


“ENOUGH NT!!!! Just Leave.” Maan’s loud voice halted me in between as he looked at me with his eyes red in anger. I swear Dadimaa I had never saw Maan that much angry before neither had he talked to me like that before.


“But Maan…”


“I said LEAVE! Leave right now.” He said this time his voice getting louder and I just left the room feeling dejected. I had to make him understand but may be this is not the right time to do that. I had to wait till he gets sober down, I thought as I was walked downstairs lost in my thoughts and that’s when I saw Geet coming all worried and running towards Maan’s room.


Seeing Geet my anger grew ten folds as Sameera’s words rang back in my mind and I recalled Maan’s condition. Now for what has she came for? Hasn’t all that she done was enough that she had came to do more damage, I thought as rage built up inside me seeing her. No, I won let curse like her to spoil my brother’s life. She had done enough damage but I won’t let her do anything more now. I immediately stopped her holding her wrist when I saw her going towards Maan’s room as she collided with me before muttering a quick hello. I know if I’ll let her meet Maan that she’ll influence him more against Sameera and this time won’t let it happen and hence I stopped her then and there. She looked at me confused when I asked her the reason for coming. At that time her innocence seems nothing more than a facade to me when she said that Maan needs her and somewhere I knew that Maan really needed her but then Sameera’s words rang back in my mind and I realize that I can’t let a curse like her to enter into my brother’s life again. Hence I humiliated her a lot by saying that Maan don’t need her and she’s the reason for Maan’s heartbreak.


I kept on putting allegations on her that she has purposely done all this so that she can have Maan all for herself and she kept on refusing with tears in her eyes. Anyone would have believed her at that moment but I was so much blinded with my rage that I couldn’t see the truth and hence I went forward with my allegations. I can’t even imagine what all I have said to her at that moment just to keep her away from Maan but she being true friend of Maan was adamant to meet him even after what all I have said to her. And hence I had played my final card by saying that even Maan knows this evil side of hers and he himself doesn’t wish to see her. I know that I had lied to her but at that moment I did what I felt right to save Maan from the curse like Geet. I saw her stunned for a moment making me relieved that she had believed my words but then again the same adamant Geet was back who had trust on Maan that he can never say such thing like that and hence she rushed towards Maan’s room ignoring all my words while I just stood over there with bated breath awaiting of what was coming next.


After sometime I saw Geet coming out of Maan’s room all numb, shocked and hurt and the expression on her face clearly said that her meeting with Maan was not a pleasant one. May be Maan was too upset to talk to Geet and he just asked her to leave just like he asked me to leave. But whatever the reason was it made my lie work as now even Geet was under impression that Maan hates her and hence she’ll go far away from his life. I met her as she came near stairs only to humiliate her further but she didn’t said a word for she was too shocked to say anything. I called her the reason for Maan’s heartbreak, I called her reason for his unhappiness, I even called her a curse in Maan’s life yet she didn’t defend herself instead just listened everything quietly. Guess she was totally shattered. A part of me was feeling bad for her as I had never seen her like this but then another part of me was happy as I felt that she got the taste of her own medicine and hence all my sympathy for her flew out of window as I asked her to Get Out and she moved out quietly still all numb and that was the last time I saw her.


Later I talked to Sameera telling her about Geet’s exit from Maan’s life and she was more than happy to know this. Even I was happy that finally the curse from Maan’s life has removed and now Maan will live happily with Sameera. But still somewhere in my heart I was not at peace. Geet has gone out of Maan’s life now then what was bothering me, I thought as again and again Geet’s blank eyes came in front of me but then I shrugged off everything thinking that maybe I am feeling like this because Maan and Sameera are still not together. I tried to convince myself with the same but still my heart was not convinced. Maan still hadn’t talked to me and had shut himself in his room. But I had to do something to unite him and Sameera and hence I left for Sameera’s place to discuss about this without informing her unknown of the fact that a big storm is awaiting for me over there.


Wow Sameera! I can’t believe it. Finally you managed to kick that Geet out of Maan’s life.” I heard a voice from Sameera’s room as soon as I neared her room making me halting in my steps. Guess it was one of Sameera’s friend but what are they talking about, I thought as I stood over there listening to their talks.


“Of course, you think that filthy Geet had any competition in front of me. Yes, it was difficult to kick her out from Maan’s life but then I know how to play my game. I had planned everything so perfect. Everyone thinks that I know Maan after I entered college, even NT thinks that but no one knows that I had known Maan a lot more before then when he had came to drop NT to my our farmhouse and he had been my obsession since I laid my eyes on him and I wanted him at any cost. But I knew that it won’t be easy as I heard about his unbreakable friendship with Geet from NT and how Maan never prioritize anyone before Geet and hence I decided to plan everything accordingly by which I can get my Maan. I had taken admission in the same college as him and had acted all innocent but at the same time confident and I knew that my plan was working when he himself initiated to talk with me. And then that fool Geet she herself helped me in my plan unknowingly by bringing me and Maan closer. Poor her didn’t knew that I’ll throw her out from Maan’s life once I get my Maan. I knew Geet had some feelings for Maan, I had seen it in her eyes but I also knew that she’ll never be able to voice it out as she knows that Maan considers her as his friend and I only took advantage of it. And once Maan proposed me I knew that it’s time to execute next step of my plan and hence I purposefully kept Maan away from Geet letting her feel that Maan’s priority is me now. And she being Maan’s best friend just made my work easier by herself getting away from Maan. But I want her completely to get out from Maan’s life hence On the other side I kept on poisoning NT’s mind against Geet so that she can help me in getting rid of her and I must say that paid actress of yours has really played the role of Tarot card reader so well that an intelligent girl like NT has also came in influence of her. And then my final step and Geet has finally got out of Maan’s life. Poor Geet, she was so innocent that she thought that I had become her friend but she didn’t know that I can never befriend an ugly duckling like her. It was just I had to pave my way towards Maan through her that I was bearing her presence otherwise I hated just the mere sight of hers. Poor she, she had no mistake in all this yet she had to pay for coming between Maan and me. Now Maan is all mine. Sameera always gets what she wants.” Earth slipped beneath my feet as I heard Sameera laughing as she discussed her plan with her friends about how she trapped Maan and how she fooled me all along.


“But now what Sameera? Maan hates you. He broke up with you. Now how will you get him back?” Her friend’s concerned voice reached my ears and I just stood over there to know what further she had planned.


“That was the only thing which I had not planned. It was just some miscalculation in my plan that Maan had broke up with me but I know how to get him back. NT is there to do my work and why won’t she after all I had manipulated her in such a way. I had made her believe that Geet is jinxed, that she is a curse in not only Maan’s but in everyone’s life and she came into my influence. She loves her brother Maan a lot and also she loves my Bhai too and hence she can’t afford to lose any of them especially Maan; she can’t see his destruction. Poor NT, she herself had thrown Geet out of Maan’s life who had no mistake of hers after believing my words. She’s such a putty in my hands and will do whatever I’ll say. She thinks that Bhai loves her but what she don’t know is that he was only using her to get the shares of Khurana’s that she’s having to get under his name and he’ll throw her out once he’ll done with his work. Arey, he had bedded many girls before NT and still doing the same and NT thinks that he loves her. But anyways her this love only is helful for me as she’ll do everything that I’ll say. You guys will see how she herself will bring Maan back into my life and then Maan will be mine and only mine.” Tears made their way into my eyes as I heard of Sameera’s plan. All this while she was just using me against Geet. She was influencing me against Geet so that I can kick her out from Maan’s life.


It was then I realized the gravity of my actions. What had I done? I was moving according to Sameera’s wish till now without my own knowledge. And Geet… What all I had said to her? She was really innocent and I just kept on putting allegations on her. I started hating myself even more when Geet’s teary face came in front of my eyes and how she is pleading to me to let her meet Maan. I couldn’t see through Sameera’s evil plans and had punished Geet for no fault of hers. I really wanted to die at that very moment. I know I had destroyed everything by my own hands and only I had to mend it but before that I need to give someone a reality check, I thought as I moved inside Sameera’s room only to find her laughing with her friends who instantly stopped laughing as soon as they spotted me.


“NT, you here?” Sameera was shocked to see me over there for she was not expecting me yet she feigned innocence but now I knew her true face.


“Yes Sameera. I thought you must be feeling depressed so I thought to meet you but I guess you were not happy to see me.” I said as I tried my best to keep my anger in check as I saw her making a sad face. Now I know why Maan had broke up with her and at that moment I was really proud of my brother. No matter whatever has happened between them but I am happy that Maan was saved from an evil girl like her.


“Ya I was very much depressed. Your brother has still not talked to me. I felt like killing myself. That’s why my friends were here to cheer me up.” Last strand of my patience broke as I heard her words and as a result I slapped her hard on her face much to her shock.


How Dare you!” She shouted while holding her cheek as soon as she recovered from shock and in return I slapped her yet again this time harder.


What do you think of yourself Sameera that you’ll keep on plotting and I won’t come to know ever. You were using me against Geet all this while and you think that I’ll never know that. Your game is over Sameera. You had done enough damage but now I won’t let you do anything. I may have despised Geet but I love my brother a lot and if I can throw Geet out of Maan’s life for his safety and happiness then I can do anything with you too to ensure my brother’s happiness. And what you had said me and Maan will pay if he didn’t came back to your life. Then I challenge you Sameera do whatever you want but now I’ll make sure that you stay Kilometers away from my brother. I’ll not even let shadow of yours near him. Do whatever you want. I’ll make sure that I show your true face to everyone including your own brother.” I turned to leave after my final confrontation with Sameera when her next set of words stopped me.


“Well Well Well… So Ms. Nayantara Khurana was going to tell the truth to everyone. Go and tell. But whom will you tell? Maan? Or Geet? They both will hate you as soon as they will come to know that you were also involved with me. Chalo, for once I agree that Geet will forgive you for she has such a big heart but what about Maan. He’ll not even see your face once he comes to know the truth that it’s because of you that Geet is not in his life anymore. Then what will you do?” I stopped dead in my tracks as I heard her. Though I hated to admit it but I know that she was right. For once Geet can forgive me but not Maan and I’ll lose him for forever but then I can’t show my weakness to her too.


“You are such a sick girl Sameera. And I pity you that you don’t understand the depth of relations. I’ll tell truth to Maan no matter how much he hates me after that but I’ll show him your true face. And one more thing Sameera, I’ll always be proud of Maan for two things; First, for befriending such a pure soul like Geet and Second, for leaving a sick girl like you. Now, you and your brother never show your filthy faces in my again. Tell your brother that it’s all over now. Good Bye!” That was my last words to her as I left her house but my conscience was continuously blaming me for what I had done. Even though unknowingly but I had committed a biggest sin.


How will I be able to meet Geet’s eyes? How will I be able to face Maan? Will they ever forgive me? All these questions were running into my mind and I straightaway drove towards Geet’s home to ask her forgiveness. I would have even fallen into her feet if it costs her coming back in Maan’s life but to my luck when I reached her place I came to know through her father that Geet had left. When, Where and Why; she had refused to let anyone to know and had taken promise from him to not to disclose to anyone. I left her home all dejected and came back to home to tell Maan everything but as I neared his room all my courage flew out of the window.


What will I tell him; that I had conspired against him and Geet with Sameera. Though unknowingly but I drove out Geet from Maan’s life. Knowing Maan I know he’ll hate me once he comes to know the truth and more than that he’ll hate himself after knowing that Geet left because of him. I couldn’t gather courage to do that. I don’t want to lose my brother. I had already lost so many things in one day and now I don’t want to lose anything. I know I was going to be selfish but at that moment I couldn’t differentiate between right and wrong. And hence I just walked back to my room and cried a lot as my conscience was blaming me again and again for doing such a injustice but then it was too late to realize that as everything has destroyed by then and I could do nothing but to look at the broken pieces of a happy relationship.


Maan had never been the same after that. He had drawn into his shell. Geet had left don’t know where? I remember how Maan use to be upset when he went to meet Geet once his anger on Sameera subsided where he comes to know about Geet’s departure and the promise she had taken from her father. I had even seen him crying at day when he use to miss her on friendship day. And all this made me to hate myself even more. I still don’t know what happened between him and Sam that they broke up nor do I know what happened to Sam after that as Maan never brought her topic after that but I was happy that Sameera was out from Maan’s life. If only I could turn back the time then maybe I could have undo whatever had happened but I know that it’s impossible as we cannot undo what we had done and hence I was left with nothing but to cry over on the fate that can be changed if only I had been a bit mature.

          ~~~~~~~~*******Back To Present********~~~~~~~~~~~

“And I haven’t told the truth to anyone till date Dadimaa. I never courage in me to tell the truth.” By the time NT completed she was all in tears as everything moved like a film in front of her eyes while Savitri Devi was only caressing her hairs absorbing her each and every word.


“Then why you are telling me now?” Savitri Devi asked after a while composing herself.


“Because I am tired Dadimaa. I am tired with this burden on my conscience. My conscience keeps on blaming me for ruining everything in my brother’s life making me to loath myself by every passing second. The friendship which can be further bloom into love, I had broken that friendship. I had separated both of them. When Maan had called me and told me that he had met Geet, I was happy that finally fate brought them together. May be the time has came when Maan and Geet can be together but when he told me that Geet is engaged to someone else then once again my guilt started to eating me up. Hadn’t I separated them 6 years ago then may be today Geet would have been in our house as Khurana’s daughter-in-law. But because of my stupidity everything has been ruined. I just wanted Maan’s happiness but what I failed to understand is that Maan’s happiness is only with Geet and not Sameera. But yesterday when Maan told me that he was feeling something unknown for Geet whenever he sees her with her fianc, my hope of them being together again started building up. I can very well say that Maan has started falling for Geet or should I say that he has started recognizing his feeling for Geet. Trust me Dadimaa; I had prayed each and every day from past 6 years to let not Maan suffer due to my mistakes. I had prayed every moment that Maan won’t be get punished for the sin I had committed


I couldn’t hide this truth anymore Dadimaa because my guilt is not letting me live in peace. Guilt of destroying my brother’s life, guilt of snatching Geet’s love, guilt of separating both of them and guilt of hiding the truth all these years.. Today after so many years I am actually feeling light after confessing my sin. Please forgive me Dadimaa. I know what I did was wrong but I can do nothing to undo that instead of asking the forgiveness. I have no courage to confess all this to Maan or even Geet and I don’t know that whether I’ll have this much courage in future too but I can’t live in this guilt also anymore hence I confessed everything to you. Now I am ready to take whatever punishment you want to give me.” NT completed and Savitri Devi just sighed heavily as she listened each and every word of hers.


She couldn’t understand whether she should blame NT for whatever happened or should she blame the circumstances that had made NT her pawn. She knew her granddaughter is not bad from heart. She loves her family and most importantly she loves Maan a lot but still she committed this mistake. May be somewhere they themselves are responsible as if they were able to understand NT’s insecurity on time then maybe they could have made her understand and then maybe all this could have been avoided. NT was a kid at that time but they were mature but yet they never saw what NT was feeling and thought it to be as of another kid fight between Geet and her. If NT was at fault then even they are also at fault as somewhere they failed as her parents and guardian. If only they could have seen NT’s insecurity then maybe they would have done enough efforts to bridge the gap between her and Geet and not to make her feel left out in her own home but they couldn’t and it resulted it into destruction of both her children’s happiness. But the damage has already done and it’s useless now to cry over the split milk. All that she can do now is to give NT enough courage so that she can confess everything to Maan and Geet and can pray to god that Maan would also understand NT at that time just like she is understanding her now.


“I am no one to give you any punishment NT neither I am the one to forgive you as you are not my culprit. You are Maan’s and Geet’s culprit and hence it’s only them who have this right to either forgive you or punish you. Hence you need to confess everything to them and then they will only decide whether they want to forgive you or punish you. Whatever the reason may be NT but still you would have thought maturely over everything. You can’t decide for anyone’s fate just like that. Your hatred for Geet was one thing but still you should have seen the whole situation with open mind instead of deciding yourself and coming to the judgement. Now see where it had brought you. But I can’t blame you completely too. I am happy that you realized your mistake and confessed it too but still I can’t do anything in this. All I can say at this moment is that you need to confess everything to both of them and then accept whatever decision they take. That’s all I can say for now. You have to gather enough courage NT. You can’t just run away from it.” Savitri Devi said with a tone of finality making NT understand everything clear. She realizes that what she was saying is right. She has to face Maan and Geet as she is their culprit and hence she just can’t run away like this. she has to face everything maybe then only she can get rid of this guilt, she thought as she slept under the loving caress of her Dadimaa while thinking about everything.




Days went by and Maan’s changing feeling for Geet were getting stronger. He couldn’t understand what happens to him whenever he sees Geet especially if he sees her with Dev. All his insides started burning when he sees Dev claiming his right on his Laddoo. For one thing he was sure that this feeling can’t be just friendship; it something more and deep and he dared to call this feeling as love. This can’t be love, can it? No, he never saw his Laddoo in that way, she was his best friend but then why his traitor heart was not getting convinced with this fact. Why it pierced into thousands of pieces whenever he sees her with Dev.


Speaking of Dev, then he was still not convinced Dev being the right guy for his Laddoo. Ok for once he admits that he is feeling jealous of Dev hence he’s not convinced with him being right guy for Geet. Of course he’s jealous and why not he’s claiming his right on his Laddoo in front of him. But even if he kept that feeling aside also even then he don’t found Dev suitable for his Laddoo. As if he’ll find any other guy other than Dev suitable for Geet, his heart mocked at him which he chose to ignore, for right now his concern is only Geet. Many times he had this feeling that Geet is hiding something from him and even she is not happy with Dev. He still can’t forget the look that Geet gave to him on the lake side when she was going away with Dev. He can’t forget how she had broken down that day in his arms, how much shattered she was. Though when later he asked Geet about it then she just shrugged it off by saying that it was nothing and she was just missing her father but he was not convinced with the same. He remembered her going to tell something about Dev. He remembered that even Meera was going to tell him something when Geet interrupted. Is it something related to Dev then? Is it really possible that what his instincts are saying is true? Geet is not happy with Dev. And hence this reason was enough for him to know more about Dev and all the things that happened in the life of Handa’s especially Geet’s in these 6 years.


Ok he was doing all this because Laddoo is his best friend and he just want to see her happy. There’s not any other reason or feeling behind this, especially not love, that’s what he keeps on telling himself whenever he felt his heart questioning him about his actions. But more he tried to convince himself more he felt his heart mocking at him telling him that he’s running away from the reality. But then these feelings can wait for a while. His first priority was to know what his Laddoo is hiding from him and he was sure about it that she is definitely hiding something from him and whatever it is, it’s something big and serious. He had already got his private detectives on work to dig out all the information but he himself wants to confront Geet regarding same. He don’t understand why she is hiding anything from him when she knows that she can share everything from him.


Since the time he had met her again he always found her lost in some other world. She was no more the same Laddoo that he knows. Her every word, her every action had deep and hidden meaning in them. Her smile don’t reach to her eyes, her eyes never reflected the words that she says. Even her words confused her at times. It was as if she was trying to say something but something was stopping her. Her fumbling with words whenever he asks her anything, her not meeting his eyes while talking and most importantly her constantly being conscious whenever he talks to her; everything was enough for him to believe that something big has happened that had changed Geet a lot or should he say had shattered her to no extent. But again the question is still the same; why is she not sharing anything from him? Doesn’t she find him worthy enough to share her problems with him? This thought always pierced his heart whenever he found his Laddoo so mysterious before him.


Just like he is finding her now as they sat opposite each other in a restaurant having coffee after tiring themselves from the shopping that Maan had done for NT and Dadimaa. Even though Geet was reluctant at first, knowing very well that she won’t be able to hide everything Maan for long but then agreed when she realizes that probably this is the only time that she had with him and once he went back to Delhi and she gets married to Dev, these are the only memories that she’ll cherish for rest of the life. So now here they are, sitting in the restaurant having their coffee and conversing about this thing or other but as always Maan found her avoiding his talks whenever he asks about her life in these 6 years and now he was sure that she is definitely hiding something from him and hence he decided to find it in his own way now.


“Are you happy in your life Laddoo?”Maan’s sudden question made Geet choke on her coffee that she was sipping and she looked at Maan who was looking intently at her as if trying to see through her soul through her eyes. Why did he ask such question all of a sudden? Was it so evident on her face that she’s not happy, she thought as she looked away from the piercing gaze of Maan knowing very well that she won’t be able to hide anything from him if he keeps on looking at her like this.


What kind of question is this Maan? Of course I am happy. And why wouldn’t I? I had Dev in my life. He’s a nice guy and he loves me a lot, cares for me a lot. And now even my best friend is here with me. Of course, I am very happy.” Geet said with a fake smile after a while composing herself but this time Maan was not convinced because he can very well say that she is lying as his Laddoo never takes this much time to answer such a simple question.


“And what about you? Do you love Dev?” Maan’s straight question had caught Geet off-guard as she looked everywhere but him. All she wanted at that moment was to mother earth to swallow her so that she can escape from his questions.


Why is he asking such questions all of a sudden? Does he come to know something that he is asking all this, she thought as she looked other side trying to formulate some answer because she knows that she can’t lie to him and truth she won’t be able tell.


“You haven’t answered me yet Laddoo? Do you love Dev?” Maan asked yet again gauging each and every expression of Geet. He knows his Laddoo can’t lie to him and hence sooner or later she has to tell him if he keeps on probing like this unknown of the turmoil that Geet was going through. And somewhere in his heart he himself wanted to know Geet’s feeling regarding Dev because of his inner turmoil. He wanted to know if Geet too feeling the same like he was feeling. Somewhere in his heart he was wishing for her to feel the same and he himself don’t know why.


Ya… I mean why wouldn’t I like him. I am engaged to him. We are going to get married soon and moreover he’s Papa’s choice so he has to be nice right.” Geet looked everywhere but him all the while as she answered his question and Maan was now confirmed of the fact that Geet is hiding the actual truth of her relation with Dev to him, as if she had then she would have said the same while looking into his eyes but she didn’t.


“That’s not the answer of my question Laddoo. I asked Do-You-Love-Him?” Maan stressed on each and every word as he looked at Geet gauging her each and every expression. Right from shock to surprise to her nervousness while answering he had noticed it all due to which he had came to the conclusion that Geet had no feeling for Dev or else she wouldn’t be this nervous.


But then why is she still sticking to him. The Geet he knows wouldn’t have stuck to any relation in which there is no love. Then what could be the reason of her still being with Dev? Is it because Dev was her father’s choice? His heart was not ready to believe that as it was continuously saying that reason is something else and he need to read between the lines to know the actual truth. He knows that he was probing Geet probably too much but then he had no other choice as Geet was not ready to open up and hence this is the only way to know the truth.


“Love… Love is not everything in life Maan. There are many other things which are more important than Love. Sometimes the person whom we love the most only makes us all alone. So you see there is no guarantee in love. And anyways Pyaar ka kya hai wo to kabhi bhi ho jayega. So it doesn’t matter if I love him or not Dev loves me a lot and it’s a saying na that you should be with the one who loves rather than being with someone whom you love. So I am doing the same. And then there are so many marriages in which Love happen after Marriage so may be it happens with me too. Maybe slowly and gradually I’ll also fall in love with him.” Geet said last line almost to convince her own self but she knows that she was just fooling herself as she can’t love anyone other than Maan.


It’s her helplessness that she’s still with Dev. First, because he is her father’s choice and it’s his last wish to see her settled with Dev and second, to save whatever little she was left with and she knows that she can’t expect any miracle that she can get out of all this mess hence it’s better to accept whatever is coming in her ways. Her all dreams had died long back and she dared not to dream anything after that for she knows that it will remain just a dream.


“Do You Love someone else Laddoo?” Maan asked with a bated breath as he tries to register Geet’s words which were clearly depicting that she has been disappointed in love once but who was that person and why did Geet didn’t tell him about it, he thought as he looked at Geet who looked at him shocked with his straight-forward question only to find him looking at her anxiously as if trying to find the answer in her eyes and this very fact made Geet more nervous.


Why did he ask that? Did she said too much? Did she said something which she was not suppose to? Or did Maan got the hint of something? What if he came to know the truth that the person with whom she’s in love is he himself? No she can’t let this happen. But then Maan’s question has caught her off-guard and she don’t know how to run away from mhis question and she knows that she won’t be able to run for long. By looking into Maan’s eyes she can say that he’s searching for his answers desperately but will she be able to give the answer to his question and most importantly will he be able to bear the truth.

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